专题19 读后续写:情绪动作(分类速记)(解析版)
情绪动作类表达是读后续写中最常见的、最不可或缺的表达,通过以下的积累、背诵、训练,考生定能在今后描写喜乐等情绪动作时,更加地道,更加形象,更加传神。
一、情绪与动作结合原理
紧张的口诀
人发抖(shake, shiver),
掌流汗(sweating);
脸发烫(burn),
低头看(hang, lower, fixed);
心在口(heart in mouth),
怦怦跳(pump, thump, pound);
愧难当(guilt, shame, overwhelmed…),
话结巴(falter, stumble) 。
生气的口诀
音发抖(voice shake with anger),
话哽咽(voice choke with rage)。
脸愤怒(explode, anger spread),
眼冒火(anger burn in eyes)。
狠关门(slam; door bang shut),
冲出去(storm out)。
气跺脚(stamp),
手砸桌(pound, bang)。
指留痕(dig finger into palm),
牙咬紧(clench)。
人无语(speechless with anger)
内心怒(anger well up, sweep over, explode, boil, burn)
练习:如何写老师生气;如何写我的紧张
如何写老师生气:
Step 1: 写话语:“What are you doing?” he shouted.
2: 加表情:“What are you doing?” he shouted with an expression of utter disbelief
3. 加眼睛:“What are you doing?” he shouted with an expression of utter disbelief, his eyes narrowed,
4.加拳头:“What are you doing?” he shouted with an expression of utter disbelief, his eyes narrowed, pounding on the table with his fist
5.加眼神:“What are you doing?” he shouted with an expression of utter disbelief, his eyes narrowed, pounding on the table with his fist and glaring at me furiously.
如何写我的紧张:
肢体:Trembling nervously, I …
加咬指甲:Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails
加低头:Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head down
加眼睛:Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the floor.
加心跳:Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the floor. Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach. I could feel my heart
thumping wildly
加手心流汗:Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the floor. Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach. I could feel my heart thumping wildly and my palm sweating.
完整:
“What are you doing?” he shouted with an expression of utter disbelief, his eyes narrowed, pounding on the table with his fist and glaring at me furiously. Trembling nervously, I gnawed at my fingernails and kept my head down and my eyes fixed to the floor. Butterflies fluttered in my heart and stomach. I could feel my heart thumping wildly and my palm sweating.
二、情绪与动作素材积累
Part 1 喜乐
(一)情绪类表达:
1.高兴的 delighted/cheerful/joyful
2.对......很高兴 be delighted at
3.对......感到非常高兴 be overjoyed at/to do
4.因......而高兴 be joyful over/about
5.难以形容的开心 be indescribably wild joy
6.几乎无法掩饰他兴奋的心情 can hardly conceal his excitement
7.既兴奋又开心 a mixture of excitement and happiness
8.心情愉快 in cheerful spirits
9.振作精神 keep up one’s spirits
10.心情好 in a good mood
11.快乐至极 be overwhelmed with joy
12.欣喜若狂 be wild with delight/joy
13.使某人心情愉快 brighten one’s heart
14.使某人安心 t one’s heart at rest
15.让某人开心的是 to one’s delight
16.眉开眼笑 one’s smile light up
(二)句子练习:
1.对于我们的重逢我感到非常高兴。
I was overjoyed at our reunion.
2.她满心欢喜。
She was overwhelmed with happiness.
She was indescribably wild joy.
She was in cheerful spirits.
3.当她得知自己被录取的时候,她无法掩饰内心的兴奋之情。
She could hardly conceal her excitement the moment she knew she was admitted.
4.听到爸爸要带她去迪士尼的消息,小女孩欣喜若狂。
The little girl went wild with joy at the news that her father would take her to the Disneyland.
5.她的微笑照亮了整个房间。
Her smile lit up the whole room.
(三)动作类表达:
1.高兴地跳起来 dance/jump for joy
2.流下幸福的泪水 tears of happiness flow down
3.乐得大叫 yell with delight
4.面带微笑 wear a shining smile
5.发自肺腑的开心 joy wells up inside sb.
6.开心地哼着小曲 hum a tune merrily
(四)句子练习:
1. 虽然爷爷上了年纪,头发花白,但他的心却高兴得跳了起来。
Although grandfather is old and gray-haired, his heart jumped for fun.
2. 她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
She wore a shining smile on her face.
3. 他走在街上,开心地哼着小曲。
He walked in the street, humming a tune merrily.
4. 听到这个振奋人心的消息,她发自肺腑的开心。
When she heard the exciting news, joy welled up inside her.
5. 看到眼前的一幕,她流下了幸福的泪水。
In the face of the scene, her tears of happiness flowed down.
(五)相关句式积累:
1.突然,我看到那名警察的脸亮了起来。(light up)
Suddenly I saw the officer’s face lit up.
2.这件礼物使她非常高兴,她充满了喜悦。(so that)
The prent delighted her so much that she was full of joy.
3.他高兴得两眼闪闪发光。(无灵主语)
His eyes twinkled with pleasure.
4.我喜不胜言。
I was plead beyond description.
5.他绽开满意的笑容。(无灵主语)
His face expanded with a satisfied smile.
6.他嘴角挂着微笑。
He looked at me with a smile on his lips.
7.会心的微笑划过他的脸庞。(无灵主语)
A smile of understanding flashed across his face.
8.她的脸上出现淡淡的微笑。(无灵主语)
A faint smile crosd her face.
9.他边听边咧开嘴笑了。(无灵主语)
As he listened, his mouth split into a big smile.
10.她脸上的笑容如钻石般闪耀。(无灵主语)
The smile on her face shone like a diamond.