专题12 读后续写
读后续写--讲•练•测---练案
时间：30分钟 满分：30
1. 【山东省烟台市2021年高考诊断性测试】读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a Saturday in June, 1988. Out of a 16-year-old's early summer boredom, I had t up a tent in our rural yard and intended to sleep in it, but I stayed in the hou to finish watching the Lakers' play-off game. It was almost midnight and Dad had been asleep upstairs for hours when someone knocked at the front door. It never occurred to me not to answer it.
To my surpri, it was a girl about my age with a bloody cut on her forehead. “Hi. I'm Maria. What's wrong with you?” I asked her with concern. Awkward and embarrasd, she replied:
“I'm Jane. I...”she hesitated and then asked me carefully, “May I stay here for the night? I'll be off tomorrow morning.” Seeing her uneasiness, I comforted her, “Take it easy, Jane. Stay with me tonight.” I invited her into the hou.
Looking around, Jane appeared to have calmed down. “Let me treat your injury first,” I said and she agreed.
I cleand and bandaged(包扎) her injured forehead and then gave her some bread and bacon to eat. “Want to sleep in my tent?” I asked her and she nodded. Having left her in the bathroom, I went to look for another sleeping bag. When I returned, Jane was ated on the sofa, her face clouded by sadness.
Walking across the dark yard, I accompanied Jane into the tent. We lay down side by side. Seized by curiosity and concern, I constantly turned over, wondering what had happened to her and how she came here. Jane emed to have nd that and started to speak.
Jane's father died of cancer years before. Her mother did odd cleaning jobs to rai her. Money was tight but her mother tried to do what she could to satisfy Jane. Several weeks before, Jane accidentally saw fancy white dress in the store window, which she fell in love with at first sight. She excitedly told her mother about that, who promid to buy it as her birthday gift. From then on, Jane was looking forward to it.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Jane's 16th birthday came but her mother didn't get home until the evening.
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Having told her story, Jane said she regretted being inconsiderate to her mom.
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【答案】Jane’s 16th birthday came but her mother didn’t get home until the evening. Thirsty for the dress, Jane got extremely disappointed when eing her mother back empty-handed. She stormed out before her mother could stop her. Jane walked angrily and aimlessly only to find herlf in an unknown place hours later. Wor still, she fell down in the dark, hurting her forehead. Painful and hungry, she came to realize she shouldn’t have been so willful, but there was nobody around she could turn to for help. So she had to move on until she saw the light from our hou.
Having told her story, Jane said she regretted being inconsiderate to her mom. I kept comforting her until we fell asleep. When Dad awoke us and was told the whole story the next morning, he said to Jane riously, “It’s dangerous to run away from home. Your mom must be anxious about your safety. I’ll drive you home immediately.” After an hour’s ride, we reached Jane’s home, in front of which stood a worried woman. Jane rushed over and hugged her tightly, saying tearfully, “Sorry, Mom.” Witnessing this, Dad and I breathed a sigh of relief.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者晚上在户外帐篷里睡觉时，遇到了与母亲赌气离家出走的简，收留了她，第二天和爸爸送回家，母女和好的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“简的16岁生日来了，但她的母亲直到那天晚上才回家。”可知，第一段可描写简因为母亲没有给自己买喜爱的裙子而生气离家出走，最后来到作者的家里的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“了她的故事后，简说她后悔不体谅她的妈妈”可知，第二段可描写作者安慰简，告知爸爸简的故事，送简回家，母女和好的经过。
2.续写线索：简与母亲生气——离家出走——来到作者家里——安慰——告知父亲——送回家——母女和好——感到欣慰
3.词汇激活
行为类
①生气离开：stormed out/go out angrily
②.寻求帮助：turn to for help /ask for help/ek for help
情绪类
①.失望：disappointed/discouraged/frustrated/depresd
②.欣慰：relief/comfort/easy
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Thirsty for the dress, Jane got extremely disappointed when eing her mother back empty-handed. 使用了形容词短语作伴随状语和状语从句的省略结构
[高分句型2]. Painful and hungry, she came to realize she shouldn’t have been so willful, but there was nobody around she could turn to for help.使用了宾语从句和定语从句
[高分句型3]. After an hour’s ride, we reached Jane’s home, in front of which stood a worried woman.使用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句
2. 【辽宁省辽阳市2021届高三一模】读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's a shop I must have walked past a million times before, but have only noticed until now, and have never thought to enter. It's a little brown brick building with a small window display offering various forgettable items that are of no interest to me. But I have some extra time today and decide to take a quick look.
