作文写得好的诀窍:娴熟使用无灵主语句
“无灵主语”(inanimate subject) 指的是没有生命的事物充当主语,包括物品,抽象概念,情感,时间,地点等。
很多同学的作文读来甚是乏味,其中一个重要的原因,就在在写作中几乎从头到尾都是以“I”为主语的句子,缺乏变化。
下面一个是网课期间一个同学让老师改读后续写,收到的建议中其中一点就是改变主语,虽然当时没有提出使用“无灵主语”句(没有必要用专业术语,哈哈),但给出的一系列建议中:
The n of responsibility drove
The experience in the hospital enabled
Seconds count in such an emergency so my car headed to the spot like an arrow.
这些其实都是无灵主语句,用来增加主语的多样性,让表达更生动。
无灵主语句不仅适合读后续写,在概要写作用的运用就更普遍了。
比如:
Forbidding paper in the office forces information to be 100% digital.
Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better.
The decline of rote learning has been quickened by technology.
Too much screen time affects kids' intelligence.
除了概要写作、读后续写,再来看看无灵主语句在应用文中是怎么使用的?
My past/previous experience as a volunteer in the local hospital will quality me for the job.
My proficiency and fluency in spoken English will allow me to communicate with foreign visitors without any difficulty.
Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.
Your attendance/participation will surely add color to our festival/activity.
下面的例子,每个都是好句子哦,学会运用到你的写作中,肯定能为你的作文增色不少呢~~~赶紧背起来