Score: 78
My Most Memorable Experience
It's true that everyone has his own unforgettable experience, some maybe funny, some maybe sadness. However, every memory takes its particular place in our daily life.
Take me as an example, I had the most memorable experience when I was a pupil. Simply, it was a small accident on my way to school.
I still clearly remember that was a sunny day and I was on the backat on my mom's motorbike to school. Suddenly, another motorbike rush to us. Just then, I was scared and clod my eyes. But a cond later, the pain didn't come. That was my mom protected me! It was still vivid in my mind that mom's arm was bleeding. At the same time, I was good as well. However, my heart was bleeding.
Though it just a not worth mentioning thing, it really gave me painful and anxious. I am afraid that my mom will leave alone and never have chance to e her. Moreover, I know th
at mother love is grandness and nothing can come up to it including life.
Professor's comments and suggestions:
1.Average.
2.Your discussion applied very few keywords for this assignment.
3.A check（核计）on this document I got from you shows that the length is nice work. Your essay prents a good effort（努力）on this assignment.
4.This article has exhibited spectacular spelling, and your effort should be encouraged.
5.Your paper has prented exceptional grammar. Thanks for your effort!
6.You t a good example by nding this along ahead of time.
Usage:
●thanks for：感谢。英语里，表示感谢的说法至少有三种 ： thanks for something；than
k somebody for something；have one’s gratitude for something。
●apply：使用。除了apply之外，u, employ, utilize，也都可以表示“使用；应用”的意思。
●assignment：作业。英语里，assignment、composition、creation、manuscript、submission都可表示“作文；作业”的意思。
●document：文档。document除了“文档；文本”之外，还可表示“文件；证书”的意思。
●exceptional：杰出的；优秀的。
●prent：显示。prent还可表示“赠送；提出”的意思。
●t a good example：树立榜样。
●should be encouraged：应当鼓励。这是一个被动结构；should表示“应当”的意思。
文章体检报告 - 14129011011女士
基本信息 | |
所得分数 | 78.07 |
关键词数 | 0 |
关键词排名等级 | E |
文章长度 | 181 |
长度排名等级 | C |
拼写错误 | 0 |
语法评价 | A |
作业提交时间 | 2015-09-15 下午 05:42:31 |
是否准时 | 是 |
结构信息 | |
单词总数 | 112 |
词重复率 | 1.62 |
单词类别* | 93, 10, 0, 9 |
平均词长 | 4.22 |
平均句长 | 12.07 |
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* “单词类别”指的是“常用词汇”、“次常用词”、“学术词汇”、“其他词汇”四类单词。
