专题01直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”--成长故事
读后续写“一波三折”：
1.情绪------情绪描写。从原材料中体会作者相应情绪，借助情绪的延续，以此为衔接，续写。
2.细节-----进一步描述。
3.转折----个人的努力或者借助外界的力量，使事情发生转折。
4.转机-----事情似乎有了转机，让人抱有希望，心理能感到安慰。
5.失望----问题仍然没有解决或者又出现了新的问题。
6.想法----面对没有解决的问题或者新问题，突然有了想法或感触。
7.结局-----在想法或感触的汽车画法
影响下，事情有了最后的转折/转机。
8.点题-----呼应前文
备注： 这八步不是固定的，考生可以根据自己的想法打乱部分顺序，也可以略写个别环节。此步骤，可让续写有话可说，让情节续写跌宕起伏，前提是要读懂原材料的中心，抓住文章脉络。
每个人都会成长。在点点滴滴中，在大风大浪中，在自我挣扎中……
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阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Here’s the story of my growth over the past year. It’s a story of how I found the strength to change mylf for better and then how I get rid of my fears to be even better. If anyone is inspired by this, that’s wonderful.
I’d been stuck as this incredibly incure, under-confident and just scared individual for years and years. Since childhood I’d been stuck like this. Kids I met for the first time looked at me rudely and unkindly. Even my friends—actually, I had very few friends becau I just felt too ashamed and frightened to make some, though I was eager to and
felt extremely lonely in the depth of my heart—laughed at me and gave me bad nicknames. I felt terrible, but I’d just resigned to a life where I’d be afraid of everything and be this “introvert” (内向的人) or whatever. I thought I would never be able to change, never, for my whole life.
But then it all started changing. Something clicked. I suddenly determined to go on a diet, and lost some weight. It was tough. I felt hungry all the time. I was always tempted by the smell of bread and hamburger, even when I didn’t e them. But the toughest thing was that even if I had just had my meals, I felt hunger mentally. However, I held on. In over a period of 6 months I finally managed to stick to one of my diets. I didn’t know how. But I did make it.
The loss of 90 lbs brought me from overweight straight down to underweight. This isn’t the best part. More importantly and inspiringly, I suddenly found strength in me. I realized I could be totally different. And maybe, I could even be whatever I wanted to be. This taught me that I could change mylf.
Then I wondered, perhaps, I could also get rid of tho of my fears, just like I succeeded in losing my extra pounds. It might not be easy, but it might nops素描
t be that difficult.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Chance prented itlf soon.
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It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly.
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【答案】 Chance prented itlf soon. One single time, I heard about a public speaking thing going on at my university, and for the first time, I actually managed to build up the courage to go there. It was liberating. For the first time I was able to share my story, and able to do it in front of dozens of people potentially judging me, and suddenly a
ll the random fears about speaking publicly started disappearing. This taught me I could get rid of my fears.
It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly. Using the fact that I could change, and that I could get rid of my fears, I started working on them one by one. My fear of greeting strangers, my fear of talking to strangers, my fear of asking simple questions I should ‘already know’, my fear of hanging out with people, my fear of not knowing things, my fear of making new friends, classmates and teachers, my fear of being mylf, all of which help make me a better one.
【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在成长的过程中如何找到力量去改变自己——减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更好的故事。
【急转弯标志
详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“机会很快就出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者利用公开演讲如何摆脱内心恐惧的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“从那时起，我就开始迅速地改变了。”可知，第二段可描写作者在成功减重和摆脱恐惧之后，很快地进行了其他方面的自身改变。
2.续写线索：公开演讲——摆脱恐惧——其他改变——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①消失：disappear/vanish
②摆脱：get rid of/extricate onelf from
③开始：start/begin
情绪类
害怕：fear/dread
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Using the fact that I could change, and that I could get rid of my fears, I started working on them one by one. (由第一个that引导的定语从句和第二个that引导的同位语从句，现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]My fear of greeting strangers, my fear of talking to strangers, my fear of asking simple questions I should ‘already know’, my fear of hanging out with people, my fear of not knowing things, my fear of making new friends, classmates and teachers, my fear of being mylf, all of which help make me a better one. (“代词+of+which”结构的非限制性定语从句)
02 Be a true runner
For me, it was normal to feel lost at the inter-camp track. Four camps of kids were ready to lead their teams to a blue ribbon and win the day. Not me. I was too little to be the lead
er and too skinny to be an athlete. I knew this by the time I was twelve, becau my camp counlors（辅导员）and the other kids reminded me of it every chance they got. So when ou与学习有关的名言
r camp needed a fourth runner in the two-mile race around the lake, I knew I was no one’s first choice.
