2022年高考英语读后续写历险型故事构造三大套路高分技巧与训练(新高考专用)
读后续写:历险型
Part1:经典例文(森林遇险)
Br薰衣草英文
ady was a recently retired arch and rescue dog.He was not happy and misd his owner Al becau Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had t the woods on fire.Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’ s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crosd today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash(皮带) and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke,and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river…
Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a den curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It emed to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and sh延边特色美食
outed for him,but he didn’t come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope(斜坡). He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himlf wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way.They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
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“Where’ve you been?” Steve cried.  档案工作计划
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
参考范文:
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“Where've you been?"Steve cried Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy's jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of cour he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again,urgently, “0K,big guy,”
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one fo
ot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool,running water. “Brady, you did it!”
第1段:
“你去哪儿了? 史蒂夫叫道,布雷迪直接停在他面前,开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。 当史蒂夫仍然没有得到它,布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤,并拉得更用力。 信息很清楚,但史蒂夫犹豫了。 他当然记得他叔叔说过布雷迪救他的命,但那是很久以前的事了。 他还能让他们度过难关吗? 布雷迪又紧急地拉了一下,“0K,大个子,”史蒂夫决定......
第2段:
布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上,进入树林。 这只大狗停了好几次,以获得他的逃跑路线。 他经常改变方向。 他们走了多久,史蒂夫不知道。 他只是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带,继续把一只脚放在另一只前面。 听到哗哗的水声,他几乎麻木了。 河流! 孩子们大喊一声,摇摇晃晃地向前跑,直到他们跳进凉爽的流水里。 “布雷迪,你做到了!”