你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行

【题目】你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之行”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：

1. 你建议的路线及理由；

2. 你的祝愿。

参考词汇:长江Yangtze River        泰山Mount Tai

注意：信的开头、结尾已经给出，请写一个段落补全缺失信息。

Dear Jim,

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Hope you’ll have a good trip in China.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jim，

I'm so glad to hear that you’re coming for a trip in China!

bad on my experience，the trip to Mount Tai will be better. First of all，the scenery of Mount Tai is extremely beautiful. It is a main attraction in Shandong Province and has attracted numerous tourists every year. While you are climbing the hill，you can enjoy the picturesque sights around you. The green grass is dotted with the blooming flowers. Meanwhile, cool summer breeze fills the air with lovely scents. Besides，Mount Tai is not only a sight to visit, but also boasts traditional Chine literature. Many famous poets wrote poems to prai it and many of tho poems have been carved on the rocks along the paths. So the process of climbing offers a quick look of Chine culture. Although the journey to the top will be quite challenging，due to the winding and uneven paths，but it will all be worth it. Just imagine，after conquering the mountain and standing on top to glance below, how great the achievement must be! So why not try it?

Hope you'll have a good trip in China.

Yours

Li Hua

Dear Jim，

I'm happy to hear you'll visit China soon.

As for the travelling route，I strongly recommend you to choo the one along Yangtze River, although two places are both amazing，showing picturesque scenery as well as Chine culture. Mountain Tai affords the visit of just one city, while the trip to Yangtze River covers nearly half of China. So the latter is bound to provide you with richer experience, since you can have access to China's different areas and experience various customs. Also，Yangtze River carries more historical significance than Mountain Tai, which allows you to have a clearer overall view of Chine history there. What's more，Yangtze River contains both historical and modern factors. Along the river are the wealthiest areas of China，where you can e booming economy, developed industry and prosperous cities. The allow you to obrve China from both ancient and modern perspectives respectively, which will surely enhance your comprehension of China. bad on the above reasons，I believe the route along Yangtze River suits you best.

Hope you'll have a good trip in China.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以你的名义给英国朋友Jim写一封回信。

写作时首先审题，本题体裁为建议信，属于常规复习内容．选择其中一条线路，围绕中国传统文化的主线去写就基本能扣题，稍微需要注意题干要点之间的界限，确保要点齐全．其次要考虑高分词语和句型的选用，从句、非谓语动词、倒装、强调句型等都是可考虑的高级句型；词语和句型的选用要包含作者的感情色彩和增强表达的气势；再次，运用关联词如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流畅．