作文：五一节，My labors day

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My labor"s day

The expectant Labor Day arrived at finally,we can

take a break finally. The ldom veral days

holidays, I want to play a fully enjoy.

The first day, I"m going to Yiwu. I by train, Set

out from Shanghai, by way of Jiaxing and Hangzhou. The

scenery in the journey is very beautiful, There is many

hills, But not how many waters, My happpy mood did not

therefore suffer the influence, Becau I"m not to like

the water very much, Especially big river.

Keep in mind the strange and plead mood, I

arrived Yiwu. The many people says, Yiwu become

famous becau of small merchandi, I approve very

much now, However the night that I like it. I live the

neighborhood in hills, Air is very good, But there is a

lot of inctual. The sunlight is very strong there

vral days, Usually in the daytime of time, I sleeping

in hou, The nightfall go to play. Very quick a week

passde by.

The holidays be over, I felt not how happy, But I

hope that I can to breathe the air on the hills again.

Expect the labor day of the next year.