阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。An English proverb goes like this , " Spare the rod

题文

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。An English proverb goes like this , " Spare the rod and spoil the child ." It implies that in order to enable a child to grow healthily , parents must make him eat bitter foods, do hard work and be nt to places where he can get the fullest training and knowledge.First of all , eating bitter foods is necessary for a child . Poor food can help cultivate in him the frugal (节俭的 ) habit and make him realize what we eat daily is the fruit of the sweat of the laboring people . Conquently , he will not be wasteful when he grows up . Secondly , parents should also make the child do hard work . Doing hard work will give him an opportunity to taste the bitterness of labor. Moreover, hard work may also enable him to cherish the fruit of other's labor. Finally , children should be nt to somewhere where life is hard if possible . Human society is full of tests and trials . Flowers from a greenhou can never withstand a storm . Therefore, children should be allowed to face the world and brave the storm . It is in difficult conditions that young people can get the most training and learn how to solve the problems in various circumstances .【写作内容】1. 概括短文的内容要点，该部分的词数大约为30；2． 就"童年时代需要艰难生活的磨砺"这一主题发表你的看法，该部分的词数大约为120。短文至少包括以下的内容：（1）描述你的童年生活（2）你对童年时期的生活有怎样的认识【写作要求】你可以使用实例或其他方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭材料中的句子。 题型：未知难度：其他题型

答案

1）.We know sometimes difficult conditions can really make a man, so parents should let their children eat bitter foods, do hard work and experience a hard life. I grew up in an ordinary family, which is not so well off. I could understand the hardships my parents were bearing at that time. Therefore, I work very hard now in the hope of entering the university and change the situation of my family and me. I think that in a certain n, difficult situations can stimulate a person's potential and pave the way for him to success. One can be strong, brave and faithful after all the hardships he has gone through. All in all, as far as I am concerned, I think that flowers from a greenhou can never withstand a storm and that a hard life is good for children.2）.To make the child grow strong, parents should make him eat poor food, do hard work, and experience life in bad conditions, with which a child will value the labour and be capable of facing hardship.I lived a happy childhood. Not only did my parents love me form the bottom of heart, but also they gave me chances to increa my ability. My parents attached primary importance to the management of my pocket money, which led to the conquence that often I could only watch my friends eating candies with my empty pocket. This experience helped me wake up to the truth that my parents worked hard to earn a life, and so would I in the future.As the saying goes, "No pains, no gains." it is obvious that the way one lives his childhood plays an important part in his development. If one is brought up in a family that is wasteful, he is likely to be lazy when he grows up. On the other hand, a child who lives a hard life in his childhood, learning that one must be independent and frugal to face challenge, is bound to be strong. On parents' part, they can teach the child to help support the family. More can be done apart from food, hard work and bad conditions.Instead of being spoiled, children should eat bitter food to learn to be frugal, do hard work to learn to cherish, and be nt to somewhere tough to learn to be brave.

解析

本文要注意审题。因为文章分为两部分，第一部分总结文章，要求简洁，不要拖泥带水。第二部分"童年时代需要艰难生活的磨砺”，首先要描述自己的童年生活，这里可以做适当的发挥，注意时态，这一部分使用过去时。发表对童年生活的看法时，应该表达童年时代需要艰难生活的磨砺，持支持观点。说明自己的理由。注意使用高级的词汇，和合适的连接词。

考点

据考高分专家说，试题“阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150.....”主要考查你对 [小作文 ]考点的理解。 小作文

小作文的概念：

作文多指便条、请假条等，在写作的时候要注意文章的格式（称呼、正文、签名、日期）。

小作文考题的几个特点：

1、重格式，不轻内容： 应用文的大作文的一个很大区别就是重格式，规律性强。格式和套路不对，一般会给阅卷老师留下很不好的印象。例如：信件一般不需要题目，通知和告示却需要，如2010年的题目Volunteers wanted。不只题目，还有客套话署名等。例如：公务信函中的称呼，一般而言，如果是不认识的人，称呼为敬词+尊称。例如，Dear Sir or Madam或 To whom it may concern；如果是写给关系正式的某团体中的人，称呼为敬词+尊称+名。例如，Dear Mr. xx或 Dear Ms. xx；对于关系较亲密的人可以直呼其名（Dear）Peter等。这都是有规律可循的。 2、轻思想，重交际： 这里所谓的轻思想，主要是指因为100字的应用文，除去那些客套话，其实一般主体部分也就2-3个句子就可以解决。这么短的篇幅，是不可能求思想性有多强。这点和大作文不一样，大作文中，如果你没有一定的思想深度，文章结构会很松散，让人感觉是句子的堆砌。而那种连贯性和衔接手法的应用也不会太准确。而小作文，我们要做到的只是注意用词语体以及语域的适当性，要点覆盖的全面性。 3、字数少，易得分： 应用文的篇幅很短，很容易得分。试想，想在阅读理解中10分，你需要在理解一篇500-600字的文章的基础上答对5道选择题。从这个角度而言，小作文的确是容易拿分的，应该成为考生提分的板块。 4、重套路，难发挥： 应用文的这一个特点，仍然是和它的套路性、格式化有关。因此我们更需要用词的准确性。需要我们对语言的语体特点(genre features)进行区分。以免让词汇的语体影响到准确性。写给机构的信函，应该避免使用太口语化的语言。例如06年是写给一个机构的申请信，而08年是写给友人的私人信件，那么两年的应用文写作中，就要求使用不同的语言。从称呼到正文部分，08年的文章用词都可以更口语化和随意一些。正因为这种套路的稳定性，对于同等基础的考生来讲，这部分很难达到技压群雄的效果，很难拉开和别人的距离。也就是说，对于所有考生来说，得10分不容易，得2分甚至4分也很不容易。