第二节:读写任务请根据以下任务说明和写作要求,写一篇幅150词左右的英文短文。Teenagers’ crets should be kept to them

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第二节:读写任务请根据以下任务说明和写作要求,写一篇幅150词左右的英文短文。Teenagers’ crets should be kept to themlves and no one el ,their parents included, has the right to stick their no into their private life. As we know, teenagers are going through a special period of development both physically and psychologically. They are curious about and puzzled by the unexpected changes in their body and mind. What’s more, expod to a world of adults, it is only too natural for them to begin imitating (模仿) adults’ behaviors in cret. Boys begin to smoke and girls begin to spend time doing their hair. Some even begin to date with a girlfriend or boyfriend without their parents’ knowledge. They are doing al this in cret becau they are still unsure whether it is right to do so and afraid that ,if found out by their parent, they will get misunderstood and even punished. And in fact, in many cas, the parents can not deal with the matter well and hurt their children’s feelings badly, making children no longer willing to communicate with their parents. When this happens, it hurts terribly the whole family feeling. So it ems right that teenagers should keep their crets to themlves and their parents should allow their children that right.[写作内容]概括短文内容要点,该部分约30词；(2 )就 “青少年的秘密该不该让父母知道” 这一话题发表你的看法，至少包含以下内容要点；该部分约120词；A：你是否与父母分享你的秘密；B：你是如何看待你的做法的；C：父母对你的做法有何反应；D：你是如何看待父母的看法或做法的？为什么？[写作要求]    1. 作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接原文抄袭； 2.  题目自拟。[评分标准]   概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 题型：未知难度：其他题型

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------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Teenagers’ Secrets Should be Shared with Their ParentsThis passage mainly says that many teenagers have their own crets but parents always want to know them, which will probably hurt children’s feeling. As a result, children won’t like to share their crets with their parents. Some people believed that parents should allow their teenage children to keep their own crets. Teenagers are going through a special period .Wondering about and puzzled by changes of their body and mind, afraid to get misunderstood when their parents know it, they choo to copy adults’ behavior cretly. Parents should respect the right of their children .This idea sounds right but is actually wrong .Most of the teenagers’ crets, if not at all, should be shared by their parents. Many of their crets kept to themlves may do them unimaginable harm. I am speaking from my experience. Unlike many of other teenagers, I always let my parents know my crets. They are always ready to offer me valuable advice about how to deal with my troubles and puzzles. I am happy to have such understanding parents who can share my cret with me and help me to live a happy life in this special time.

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据考高分专家说，试题“第二节:读写任务请根据以下任务说明和写作.....”主要考查你对 [小作文 ]考点的理解。 小作文

小作文的概念：

作文多指便条、请假条等，在写作的时候要注意文章的格式（称呼、正文、签名、日期）。

小作文考题的几个特点：

1、重格式，不轻内容： 应用文的大作文的一个很大区别就是重格式，规律性强。格式和套路不对，一般会给阅卷老师留下很不好的印象。例如：信件一般不需要题目，通知和告示却需要，如2010年的题目Volunteers wanted。不只题目，还有客套话署名等。例如：公务信函中的称呼，一般而言，如果是不认识的人，称呼为敬词+尊称。例如，Dear Sir or Madam或 To whom it may concern；如果是写给关系正式的某团体中的人，称呼为敬词+尊称+名。例如，Dear Mr. xx或 Dear Ms. xx；对于关系较亲密的人可以直呼其名（Dear）Peter等。这都是有规律可循的。 2、轻思想，重交际： 这里所谓的轻思想，主要是指因为100字的应用文，除去那些客套话，其实一般主体部分也就2-3个句子就可以解决。这么短的篇幅，是不可能求思想性有多强。这点和大作文不一样，大作文中，如果你没有一定的思想深度，文章结构会很松散，让人感觉是句子的堆砌。而那种连贯性和衔接手法的应用也不会太准确。而小作文，我们要做到的只是注意用词语体以及语域的适当性，要点覆盖的全面性。 3、字数少，易得分： 应用文的篇幅很短，很容易得分。试想，想在阅读理解中10分，你需要在理解一篇500-600字的文章的基础上答对5道选择题。从这个角度而言，小作文的确是容易拿分的，应该成为考生提分的板块。 4、重套路，难发挥： 应用文的这一个特点，仍然是和它的套路性、格式化有关。因此我们更需要用词的准确性。需要我们对语言的语体特点(genre features)进行区分。以免让词汇的语体影响到准确性。写给机构的信函，应该避免使用太口语化的语言。例如06年是写给一个机构的申请信，而08年是写给友人的私人信件，那么两年的应用文写作中，就要求使用不同的语言。从称呼到正文部分，08年的文章用词都可以更口语化和随意一些。正因为这种套路的稳定性，对于同等基础的考生来讲，这部分很难达到技压群雄的效果，很难拉开和别人的距离。也就是说，对于所有考生来说，得10分不容易，得2分甚至4分也很不容易。