高考英语作文写作常见错误及修改方法

高考英语作文写作要求考生使用高级句型、高级词汇，过渡性词汇和不同表达方式，增加文章的可读性和醒目性，但高三生刻苦训练达到新要求的同时，千万不要忘了高考英语作文写作应注意的表达的准确性，这是高考英语作文最重要的考点，离开了这一点，高级表达方式就失去了存在意义。

(误) Good good study， day day up.

(正) Study hard and you’ll make progress every day

(误) There is a notice in the park， saying：“To take notice of safe; slippery sideway ”

(正)There is a notice in the park， saying：“Watch your step. Slippery sideway. ”

方法点拨：要减少汉式英语必须做到：(1)养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯，注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达;(2)平时多归纳总结、纠正汉式英语;(3)多读原汁原味英语。

(误)In the bedroom there are a bed， a desk and a chair.

(正) In the bedroom there is a bed， a sofa， a desk and a chair.

(误)60﹪ of the students against the idea of entrance fees.

(正)60﹪ of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.

(误)2 days past before his letter arrived.

(正)2 days pasd before his letter arrived.

(误)The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it.

(正) The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.

(误) We hope to improve our work better.

(正) We hope to improve our work.

方法点拨：有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于英语语法需要不能再出现某一单词，如果学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出现造句累赘现象。

(误)Tom was in such a hurry that he forgot his schoolbag on the bus.

(正)Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.

(误)I am tired， I must go to bed.

(正)I am tired， so I must go to bed.

方法点拨：英语句子特点之一重“形合”，句子的各个部分由各种关联词联在一起。而汉语句子重“意合”，句子前后连接主要是通过上下文的逻辑意义来实现，很多学生在写作时往往忽略这一点造成句子的错误。

(误)There were 40 foreigners came to visit our school.

(正)There were 40 foreigners who came to visit our school.

(正)40 foreigners came to visit our school.

(误)Without a friend will feel lonely.

(正)Without a friend one will feel lonely.

方法点拨：一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(除祈使句外)，如果把句子的某一部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句内之间过渡自然、层次分明。而学生在习作中常出现未用过渡词语、非平行结构和语义不完整的分割句等错误。

(误)Being an honest man， Tom worked very hard.

(正)Being an honest man， Tom never tells a lie.

(误)Ro falls in love with John is in love with Mary.

(正) Ro falls in love with John， while John is in love with Mary.

标点符号是一种变相文字，是书面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解标点符号的用途以及英汉标点的差异，结果出现错误。

(误)《China Daily》is a great help to the English learners.

(正)China Daily is a great help to the English learners.

(误)Li Ping is not old enough， he can not join the army.

(正)Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army/ Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.

方法点拨：英语无书名号，报刊、书名等单词首字母大写，或斜体;一般情况下，一个主谓结构就构成一个英语句子，句末应用句号。

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