大学英语四级作文必背范文30篇

2024年4月1日发(作者：龚泰)

大学英语四级作文必背范文30篇

范例一

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write

a position on the topic:

1. 如今大学校园里， 迟到、 早退、 旷课是常见的现象

2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性

3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做

点评： 2023 年元月 三日， 中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待； 2023 年元月 四日， 中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件； 近几年， 中小学教师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光， 进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。 本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作， 与校园生活亲密相关。

范例二

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write

a position on the topic:

Students’ Rating of Their Teachers。 You should

write at least 120 words followingthe outline given

below in Chine.

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1. 学生给教师打分已经普遍

2. 人们对其持不同态度

3. 我的看法

Students’ Rating of Their Teachers

Nowadays, it has bee as mon in colleges and

universities for students tograde teachers as for

teachers to grade students. In some universities

students’rating has even bee the only source of

information on teaching effectiveness..

I think students’ rating of their teachers is

necessary, but it should be conductedin a way that can

really shed meaningful light on teachers’ performance.

Instead ofrating the teachers’ knowledge on the

subject, students should be asked to estimatewhat they

have learned in a cour, and to report on such things

as a teacher’s abilityto municate with students, his

or her relationship with students, and his or

herability to arou students’ interest in the

subject.

点评： 越来越多的高校采取让学生给教师打分的形式来理解教学反应， 并以此作为促进教学质量的有效手段。 对此第 2 页 共 45 页

做法， 管理部门及教学双方褒贬不一， 看法迥异。 本范例题为校园生活热议话题， 值得关注。

范例三

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic On a

Harmonious Dormitory Life. You should write at least

120 wordsfollowing the outline given below in Chine:

1. 宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况;

2. 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性;

3. 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。

On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college

life. But sometimes theharmony in the dormitory be

disturbed in one way or another.

As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is

important to college studentsand benefits all the

members. On one hand, we can have a good rest and put

ourheart into study. On the other hand, we will have a

good mood and enjoy beingtogether.

There are veral ways to create and maintain a

harmonious dormitory life.

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In conclusion, we should try our best to build a

harmonious dormitory life forthe sake of good study

and good life.

点评： “和谐” 成为我们当今社会词频概率最高用词，

就社会而言， 倡导建立和谐社会； 就家庭而言， 提倡建立和谐家庭； 就校园来讲， 那么要建立和谐校园；和谐两字似乎无所不在， 大学生宿舍生活同样需要和谐。 本范例题与四级考试热点亲密相关， 又为典型的校园生活主题， 值得关注。

范例四

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write A BriefIntroduction to the University.

You should write at least 120 words according to

thefollowing guidelines:

假设你是一名学生志愿者， 要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。内容应包括学校历史、 规模、 教学现状以及将来目的等。

A Brief Introduction to the

UniversityDistinguished guests,Wele to our university.

Before you start to look around, allow me to giveyou a

brief account of the school.

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Founded in 1927, our university is one of this

city’s earliest universities of liberalarts. It is

staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total

enrollment of over 10,000students. In the past years,

it has turned out numerous well-qualified students

andfound its graduates active in professions of all

walks of life.

Currently, both our faculty and students are

making every effort to improve thequality of our

education in the direction of a first-rate university.

Thank you.

点评： 近几年， 随着我国顺利参加世贸组织以及经济全球化步伐的加快， 许多国内高校纷纷与国外大学合作办学，

教育走向国际化成为人们关注的热点， 也是大学生门比拟关心的热点问题。 本范例题为热议校园生活话题， 与 2023 年旅游景点介绍 2023 年考察的名校校园开放如出一辙。

范例五

假设你是李明, 你的一个朋友张伟准备到你所在的城市来旅游， 但你有事不能接待。 写封信给他， 解释你不能接待的原因， 并说明你所做的安排。

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Dear Zhang Wei,I’m glad to know that you are ing

to my city during the summer vacation.

However, I’m afraid there’s some bad news. I’m

planning to take part in aninternational conference to

be held in another city during the time of your visit.

Allthe top scientists in my field will show up at the

conference. More importantly, I’mlucky enough to have

been lected to give a speech on behalf of my

rearch teamat the Conference. I really can’t miss

it.

I’ve asked my roommate to meet you at the airport,

and you can stay in my room. Heis a very nice person

and he will show you around the city. Hope you two

will get onwell and have a nice holiday!

Yours,

Li Ming

点评： 本范例题与 2023 年 6 月 考察的 A Letter to

a Schoolmate 类似， 所不同是写作提示有所不同， 2023 年

6 月作文题是写信对校友来度假表示欢送并在信中提出建议和考前须知， 而本范例题是对朋友来访不能接待， 同时在信中第 6 页 共 45 页

说明原因及详细安排， 内容不一， 但话题相仿， 写作思路相似， 值得关注。

范例六

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write

a position on the topic:

Living alone or Living with Roommates? You should

write at least 120 wordsfollowing the outline given

below in Chine.

1． 有人认为大学里应单独生活

2． 另一些认为大学里应与别人同住

3． 你的看法

Living alone or Living with Roommates

Nowadays, there has appeared a heated discussion

among the college studentsas to whether they should

live alone outside the cus or live together with

otherroommates in the students’ dormitory. Opinions

are divided over the matter.

Tho who are in favor of Living alone maintain

that it is very convenient to liveby themlves. They

can enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own.

They canhave their own timetable without disturbing

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others. They are also free to equip theroom with a

personal puter so that they can have easy access to

the Inter.

But others argue that living with roommates has

attractions of its own. Withveral students sharing

the same room, each person’s experiences can be

greatlyenriched. They can learn a lot from talking to

one another. By learning to tolerate thedifferences

between individuals, they can bee more mature.

As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to live with

roommates becau I love thefeeling of belonging.

Besides, it is a lot cheaper to live in a dorm than to

rent anapartment outside the cus.

点评： 本文与校园生活亲密相关， 也是近年来出现的现象， 人们对此的看法各异， 2023 年后， 四级作文考察加大了学校生活类题目的考察， 因为这类题材不存在地域的差异， 不同地域的同学都有话可说。本范例题即为校园生活类话题，与刚考完的四级作文话题类似， 符合命题者出题思路， 值得引起重视。

范例七

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Direction: For this part you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic :Cell

Phones .You should write no less than 120 words and

ba yourposition on the outline below:

1. 描绘上图所示的手机用户数的变化情况

2. 出现这种情况的原因

3. 对此现象作出评价

Cell Phones

As is shown in the chart, cell phones are being

increasingly popular withinChina. In 1999, the number

of cell phones in u was only 2 million, but in 2023,

thenumber reaches 5 million. And in the year 2023, the

number has suddenly soared to9 million.

The wide u of cell phones has made them more and

more indispensable inpeople’s daily life. The

functions of the cell phone have made certain

peoplereluctant to parate themlves from their cell

phone.

点评： 随着我国经济的快速开展， 人民的生活程度不断改善， 通讯业的日新月 异的开展， 使得手机使用普及化，

成为人们日常生活的必需品， 对此的利弊人们看法各异。 本第 9 页 共 45 页

范例题为热点话题， 同样是年轻人较熟悉和经常讨论的话题， 值得关注。

范例八

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a short essay onthe

topicAdvertiment. You should write at least 120

words following the outline givenbelow in Chine:

1. 广告的作用

2. 广告的形式多样

3. 广告的夸大性

Advertiment

Advertiments are forcing their way into

people’s lives. People refer toadvertiments in

their daily lives becau they are consumers. The

advertirs areusually manufacturers, retailers and

salesmen. Their merchandi needs to beadvertid to

bring it to the attention to the customers. Thus

nearly every product isadvertid in some way. To a

large extent, good advertising leads to success

whilebad advertising can mean failure.

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There are many ways to adverti and ‘ads’ e in

different forms.

Newspapers carry advertiments. Some products are

publicized on TV and radiowhich bring them into notice

of a wide audience. Billboards also carry advertising.

Advertising is a big industry now and many

agencies have been t up to furnish avariety of

forms..

However, advertising is not always truthful. A

product is often misreprented.

The advertir exaggerates the benefits of the

merchandi he wants to ll. Thus, hemisreprents

the truth. The consumer falls victim to such

advertising. Millions ofpeople have bought advertid

products and have been dissatisfied with them。

点评： 这是一篇说明文， 用说明的表达方式来讲解事物， 说明事理。 写好说明文， 不仅要抓住特征， 注意条理， 而且要巧妙运用说明方法， 像下定义、 举例子、 作比拟、 分类别、 列数字、 打比方等

范例九

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic: A Letter to

the President of the University about Improving the

SportsFacilities on Cus. You should write no more than

120 words, and ba yourposition on the outline given

below in Chine:

假设你是李明， 请你写一封信给校长， 建议改善本校体育设施状况， 内容应涉及体育设施对大学生的重要性， 对目前学校体育设施的状况可以表扬， 可以提出批评建议， 也可以兼而有之。

A Letter to the President of the University

Dear Mr. President,

I am writing this letter to you to express my

concern about the sports facilitieson cus. I have

noticed that our university has very limited resources

in terms ofopportunities to participate in sports,

especially given that the number of studentson cus is

increasing every year.

As we both know, sports are very important for the

sound growth of youngpeople. If they have access to

quality sports facilities, young people are able

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tochoo a healthier lifestyle, to boost lf-esteem

and confidence, and to build apositive outlook and

n of achievement.

My proposal is to build a new sports area. It

should be designed with soccerplayers, basketball

players, and ping-pong players in mind. It should have

a differentction for each activity and be available

to students all year round. I believe suchfacilities

will meet our sporting needs.

Thank you for your reading this letter.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

点评： 本范例题仿真度颇高， 为校园生活话题， 与在校大学生日常生活亲密相关， 是最近几年侧重考察的题材。

2023 年 1 月 考察了就本校食堂状况给校长写一封信.

范例十

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a short essayentitled Blog. You

should write at least 120 words bad on the chart and

outlinegiven below:

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下列图是 2023 年 1-10 月 中国博客效劳人均月 度有效阅读时间及增长率， 描绘变化， 说明原因。

Blog

This histogram shows the number of people using

blog rvices from January toOctober in 2023. From it

we can e that the number of urs incread

monthlyfrom January to August, except February. After

two peak months, July and August,the number dropped

slightly in September, while in October it picked up

again.

点评： 这是一篇图表题。 可以看出， 整体呈增长趋势。 但是， 二月 和九月有所下降。 所以， 分析^p 的时候要照顾各个方面。 .mfyyw. 整理

范例十一

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a short essay onthe topic College

Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 120

wordfollowing the outline given below.

1. 近几年出现了大学生就业难的现象

2. 产生这种现象的原因〔如大学生追求的目的过高， 专业不对口等〕

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3. 如何解决这一问题〔改变就业观念， 大学生再培训等〕

College Students’ Job Hunting

In recent years, college students find it

increasingly difficult to get a job. Itsounds strange

since young college students are usually intelligent,

well-educatedphenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring

their talent into full play. Then whatunderlies the

strange phenomenon?

There are veral reasons for this. To begin with,

nowadays college students aimtoo high. All they want

are “good” jobs which could offer good salary,

fortableworking conditions, high social status among

others. Conquently, most collegestudents are

unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not

“good” enough.

Another reason is that there is a big gap between

the majors some students study inschool and the

demands of vacant jobs. So panies think some students

are not fitfor the jobs.

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Solution to the problem requires efforts on both

the society and the students.

The panies should value the students, talent and

knowledge while the lattershould not merely aim at

material gains. They should be down-to–earth in

buildingup their career. Furthermore, they should face

their weak points so as to improvethemlves and be

more petent.

点评： 本范例题为社会热点话题。 近年来大学生就业难日益成为各级政府及社会各方面关注的焦点， 媒体也广泛报道了大学生就业形势严峻， 呼吁全社会共同努力； 此外，

该范例题也与大学生就业亲密相关， 也是四级作文选题重点之一。

范例十二

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a short essay onthe topic of traffic

jam. You should write at least 120 words following the

outlinegiven below.

１ ． 在现代社会， 城市交通问题变得越来越严重

２ ． 城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活的影响

３ ． 解决的方法与措施

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Traffic Jam

There is no doubt that traffic congestion bees a

growing worry for theresidents of most urban areas.

Some major roads are regularly choked with traffic

inrush hours. The limited transport capacity

contributes largely to the vexing problem.

How to solve the headache?.

The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim

at creating metro bus systemsand broadening major

roads. Widening the existing roads can solve traffic

snarls onsome level. Soaring car ownership pounds the

chronic annoying problem, so wemust sharply reduce the

heavy reliance on cars and drive a shift to the

masstransportation. It is a cheap and good way. We can

create a system of customized busroutes and highlight

the development of subways, trolleys and light rail.

The effectivebination of the solutions will enable

the urban areas to posss a smoothtraffic.

点评： 交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。 1990

年 6 月 考察过 How tosolve the problem of Heavy

Traffic,1994 年 1 月 考题 The World Is Getting

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Smallerand Smaller 也与交通有关， 近年来， 随着私家车的日益增多， 城市交通拥堵凸显，出行难越来越成为人们关注的焦点。

范例十三

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a short essay onthe topic

Enviro____ental Protection. You should write at least

120 words followingthe outline given below.

1. 全球变暖对地球环境造成了很大影响

2. 引起全球变暖的原因

3. 我们需要采取的措施

Enviro____ental Protection

No one， regardless of race, religion or

nationality, can deny that the world welive in is

being increasingly intolerable becau of the effects

of global warming.

According to many experts, even greater impacts

are still on the way.

There are numerous caus for this problem. On one

hand, human-relatedemissions of carbon into the

atmosphere is causing, and will in the future

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cau,significant global warming according to the

theory. On the other hand, the lack ofknowledge about

the importance of protecting enviro____ent hinders the

solving ofthe problem.

It is urgent that immediate and effective actions

should be taken right away.

First, more trees need to be planted to help

improve and beautify the enviro____ent.

Besides, stricter laws concerning global warming

and irresponsible u of fuelresources have to be put

into effect and achieved good results. In a word,

there is along way to go before we can take a fortable

world for granted again .

点评： 环境问题也是四级作文命题重点话题之一。 大学英语(Q 吧)四级考试曾经考过 Make our Cities Greener.近年来， 全球气候异常， 造成许多自然灾害的频繁， 保护环境刻不容缓， 已成为全社会乃至全人类共同关注的热点。

范例十四

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a short essay onthe topic ofCredit

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Cards. You should write at least 120 words following

the outline givenbelow in Chine:

1. 越来越多的人使用信誉卡， 信誉卡有哪些好处

2. 信誉卡的弊端

3. 你自己的观点

Credit Cards

Personal credit cards are being more mon in China.

Banks and otherfinancial institutions are encouraging

their customers to change the way they buythings.

Credit cards, otherwi known as “plastic money”,

are being offered on verygood terms to encourage the

change. Consumers will be able to “buy now, pay

later”,and many e this as an advantage.

But people need to be careful. There are dangers

associated with credit cards.

Some people find it very easy to exceed their

budget. They are tempted to purchagoods that they do

not really need, and can bee quickly overburdened by

debt.

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The credit cards often charge a high rate of

interest, which exacerbates the problemsfor the

people.

点评： 这是一篇议论文， 关于信誉卡的利弊。 可以分成三局部： 第一局部，信誉卡的好处， 比方说应急等； 第二局部， 信誉卡的一些弊端， 比方说鼓励一些无用的消费；

第三局部： 你自己的观点， 理性使用。

范例十五

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic Pet Raising .

You should write at least 120 words following the

outline givenbelow in Chine:

1． 有些人喜欢养动物作为宠物。

2． 有些人反对圈养动物作为宠物。

3． 你的观点。

Pet Raising

Nowadays, with the improvement of the people’s

living standard, some peopleform a habit of raising

small or domestic animals as pets. Some rai small

dogs orcats as their pets while others rai various

birds or fishes as their pets.

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However, some people object to the idea of raising

animals as pets. To them,animals have their own right

to live a natural life like human beings. On the

otherhand, the way people rai animals as pets have a

negative influence on thesurroundings ,for exle,

dogs’ chasing people on the street and so on.

What’smore, some animals will transmit some dias.

In my opinion, I do not like the idea to rai

animals as pets. We should notdeprive them of their

natural right. In this way, we will live in a peaceful

world inharmony with the other living creatures.

范例十六

1、 根据上表， 简要描绘 1990 年、 1995 年、 2000

年某城市人们度假方式的情况及其变化；

2、 请说明发生这些变化的原因；

3、 得出结论。

As is clearly shown in the table that there was a

dramatic change in the waypeople spent their holidays

between 1990 and 2000. Especially, in 1990, 63%

ofpeople spent their holidays at home, while the

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figure decread considerably to 24%in 2000. There are

three reasons for this phenomenon.

To begin with, with the development of market-oriented economy, people earnby far more money than

they ud to, making it possible for them to afford

travelingexpens. In addition, people realize the

importance of getting well-informed aboutthe outside

world in this modern era to develop their potential.

For exle, atraveller may encounter or talk with

someone of a different cultural background so asto

broaden his vision. Last but not least, by traveling

outside, people are clo tonature, which is not only

beneficial to both their health and peace of mind. In

short,more and more people take the occasion of

holiday to travel outside and relaxthemlves.

As far as I am concerned, I prefer to go traveling

instead of staying at homeduring holidays. On the one

hand, I love meeting different people and take in

somefresh ideas. On the other hand, it is agreed that

the world is being a globalvillage. No one could

confine himlf within his small circle of families or

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relatives. Inbrief, I have benefited a lot and will

benefit more from traveling during the holidays.

点评： 该篇作文属图表作文， 命题思路与四级真题图表作文一致， 仿真度高。本范例题关于人们旅游度假方式的变化， 也是社会热点话题， 2023 年 1 月 就考过名校校园该不该成为旅游景点话题； 2023 年 6 月 也是关于旅游景点的介绍。

范例十七

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic: Social

should write at least120words following

the outlinebelow in Chine.

a) 社会理论的作用

b) 可能产生的问题

c) 提出建议

Social Practice

Social practice has been more and more popular in

universities and colleges.

However, some problems may ari if no correct

guidance is made. For exle,some students get overly

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time andearn money, thus neglecting their studies. And

some students are likely to get intouch with the dark

side of society, which will affect their future

studies.

In order to carry out social practice smoothly,

students should first know itsobjective. They should

put their studies in the first place and e social

practice justas a uful supplement, so they ought to

try to strike a balance between socialpractice and

their studies.

点评： 本篇文章属于解释性说明文。 就业市场的竞争要求大学生具有丰富的社会理论， 才能适应就业市场的竞争，

所以如今在校大学生参与社会理论活动频繁， 但如何处理好学业和社会理论的关系成为人们关注的话题。 本范例题与大学生生活亲密相关， 也是四级作文关注的重要话题。

范例十七

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic: Social

should write at least120words following

the outlinebelow in Chine.

a) 社会理论的作用

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b) 可能产生的问题

c) 提出建议

Social Practice

However, some problems may ari if no correct

guidance is made. For exle,some students get overly

interested in social practice and want to work full-time andearn money, thus neglecting their studies. And

some students are likely to get intouch with the dark

side of society, which will affect their future

studies.

In order to carry out social practice smoothly,

students should first know itsobjective. They should

put their studies in the first place and e social

practice justas a uful supplement, so they ought to

try to strike a balance between socialpractice and

their studies.

点评： 本篇文章属于解释性说明文。 就业市场的竞争要求大学生具有丰富的社会理论， 才能适应就业市场的竞争，

所以如今在校大学生参与社会理论活动频繁， 但如何处理好学业和社会理论的关系成为人们关注的话题。 本范例题与大学生生活亲密相关， 也是四级作文关注的重要话题

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范例十八

Directions:

1． 上图所示为我国吸毒者年龄分布情况， 请描绘其变化

2． 请说明发生这些变化的原因

3． 这一变化对社会和个人的影响

As can be en from the graph, there have been

sharp changes in the agedistribution of drug addicts.

To be concrete, the teenage addicts only made up

10percent of all the drugsters in 1982 while the ratio

ro up to 65 in 2023.

Obviously the drastic change will exert great

impact on individuals and thewhole society.

点评： 该范例题为社会热点话题， 四级考试命题作文常考题材。 本文属于图表作文的写作。 根据四级图表作文命题规律， 第一段文章描绘了图表中所反映的我国吸毒者年龄的分布最近二十年的变化情况， ； 第二段说明了产生这种变化的原因； 最后一段陈述了吸毒无论是对个人的身体安康和社会的平安和稳定都构成了宏大的威胁， 呼吁全社会共同努力消除这种不良现象。

范例十九

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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write

a position on the topic :

How to Keep Psychologically Healthy? You should

write at least 120 words followingthe outline given

below in Chine.

1． 心理安康问题往往是导致疾病的原因

2． 分析^p 人们产生心理安康问题的原因(可从失业、 压力过重、 缺乏支持、缺乏人际交往才能等方面分析^p )

3． 你认为人们应如何保持心理安康

How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?

One in four people will experience some kind of

mental problem in the courof a year. When you fail

to manage the problems, they are likely to cau

variousmental illness.

The cau of mental health problems often vary a

lot from one ca to another.

In today’s society, a good number of people are

suffering from heavy pressure.

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Others lack munication skills. In addition, a lot

of people are ignorant ofpsychological knowledge about

how to keep mentally fit.

点评： 据报道北京高校 100 多万名在校大学生中， 已经有 14 名自杀身亡。而去年全年， 北京自杀死亡的学生为

19 人。 社会对于大学生心理安康问题越来越关注， 如何保持心理安康成为社会关注话题。 本范例题与校园生活联络严密，是四级考试关注度较高的话题， 值得重视。

范例二十

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a posi-tion onthe topic Aid Education

in should write at least 120 words f-ollowing theoutline given below in Chine:

1. 每年， 高校许多大学生受到鼓舞去贫困地区支教。

2. 支教活动的意义。

3. 我的看法。

Aid Education in China

Each year, college students, encouraged to aid

students in the poverty-strickenareas, volunteer

themlves in poor villages for a year and try to

improve educationin poor areas.

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In my opinion, China’s educational development

can’t be isolated from eachindividual and we college

students should take the lead in respon to the

appeal foroffering aid to children in poor areas.

范例二十一

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a short essay. Youshould write at

least 120 words following the outline given below:

1. 如今某些高校校园制止车辆驶入，

2. 这种规定的考虑，

3. 谈谈你的看法。

Should cars be allowed into College Cus?

With the rapid development of our national economy,

private cars have beein large number; of cour, quite

a few cars are heavily driven into College Cus.

In a significant way, the cars do not take up

students’ places for study, butactually affect their

daily life and study-- for instance, this crowd of

cars may makenoi and emit filthy gas to choke us to

death. And the cus is jammed with linesof cars and

ems to be parking lot instead of an academic

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institute. So cars havebeen strictly prohibited into

many College Cus. It ems that this is

notconvenience to some persons, indeed, but this is

for the sake of our safety. Thuswhen someone enjoys

convenience from modern tools, don't forget that it

isdangerous to the students in the College Cus.

Therefore, I agree that cars are notallowed into

College Cus.

By and large, with the price of cars falling

significantly, cars will enter averagefamilies, and

most Chine will enjoy a luxurious lifestyle in their

life. However, theyare still prohibited to drive their

cars into College Cus, which , I think, is a hardtruth

in the eyes of most people.

点评： 随着人们物质生活的进步， 私家车开展迅猛，

越来越多的私家车停放在校园， 由此产生了一些问题， 如空间被占、 噪音污染、 环境污染等， 为此许多学校制止车辆驶入校园， 本范例题与 2023 年 1 月 名校校园是否对外开放相仿，值得关注。

范例二十二

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For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write

a position on the topic :

Information Security. You should write at least

120 words following the outline givenbelow in Chine.

1. 信息平安问题日益重要

2. 信息平安事故可能导致的危害

3. 如何做到信息平安

Information Security

In ca of information breach, the victims-----gover____ent department, anorganization or an

institution, or a pany will inevitably suffer great or

small loss.

Gover____ent may be threatened with national

curity. panies may loopportunities to develop new

projects. And the public’s and urs’ confidence

will bedamaged.

Then how to deal with this issue? Technology is

only a partial solution toinformation curity.

What’s more important is that organizations and

paniesshould promote the awareness on information

curity to its staff. However, since nosystem can

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ever be 100 percent cure, a prevention-only approach

to informationcurity management is not enough.

panies and organizations should adopt adual approach

to information curity management by bing prevention

anddetection techniques.

点评： 随着我们步入信息社会和计算机应用的普及， 利用计算机犯罪案件不断上升， 信息平安事故频繁发生， 媒体也不时有大量相关报道， 如何保护信息平安成为人们关注的焦点， 本范例题为社会热点， 值得关注。

范例二十三

Directions: Suppo you were Li Ming. You want to

apply for a job as a personalcretary to the General

Manager of a trading pany. Write a letter to the

HumanResources Department of the pany . You should

ba your position on theoutline given in Chine

below.

1. 简要介绍自己并说明应征该职位

2. 告知公司为什么对此感兴趣

3. 简述你为何是适宜人选

An Application Letter

Dear Sir or Madam,

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I am Li Ming, a would-be graduate from Ninjing

University. My major is English.

Through the job advertiment, I have learned that

you are hunting a qualifiedindividual for a personal

cretary to the General Manager of your esteemedpany.

I am fully convinced that I am the right person for

the job.

I realize that my future boss is extremely busy.

However, it is exactly thechallenge of my prospective

position that attracts me. I am sure that my

honesty,carefulness,patience,experti , mitment and

extensive knowledge will producean excellent job

performance.

Next month, I am going to graduate from the

English Department of NanjingUniversity, and I have

over two years of cretarial experience. I have

enclod thedetails of my academic record, skills, and

language abilities. Thank you for your timein

considering my application.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Ming

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点评： 本文属于书信体应用文， 要求写一封求职信。

找工作是四级命题作文关注的话题之一， 2023 年 1 月 和

1995 年 6 月 都考察了求职面试的话题， 本范例题要求写一封求职信， 既与求职话题相关， 又是书信体作文， 符合四级作文命题思路和考察重点。

范例二十四

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic: No pains,no

gains You should write at least120 words following the

outlinebelow in Chine.

1. 为什么说“不劳就无获”

2. 试举例说明

No pains, no gains

Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent

to the proverb “ No pains, nogains.” It means that

nothing can be gained without painstaking efforts and

that noknowledge or skill can be acquired without

sweat or toil.

Although it is an old saying,“ no pains no

gains” has its profound and realisticsignificance in

our college studies. To acquire knowledge in a

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particular field and toattain any academic goals,

great exertion and persistent effort are

undoubtedlyrequired becau we all know that “No

pains, no gains.”

点评： 该范例题与四级 1997 年 1 月 作文命题类似，

属于论证道理性的解释性说明文写作， 已有多年未考， 值得关注。 根据此类作文命题规律， 第一段对这一格言所蕴涵的意义做理解释和界定。 第二段举例说明了其哲理性； 最后一段说明它的现实意义， 重述主题。

范例二十五

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic: Lectures or

Discussions. You should write at least 120 words

following theoutline given below in Chine.

1． 一些学生赞成讲座式教学

2． 另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学

3． 你的看法

Lectures and Discussions

There is a heated debate over the role of lectures

and discussions in theclassroom. Some people believe

that lectures can help students learn more quickly.

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In contrast, others hold that discussions can

stimulate students to learn bythemlves.

In my opinion, I stand on the side of neither idea.

First of all, either method hasits disadvantages.

Furthermore, each student has his or her preference.

Thirdly,lectures ate preferable to discussions in the

teaching of science subjects, and on thecontrary,

discussions are preferable to lectures in studying the

humanities. Therefore,we should adopt different

teaching methods according to different subjects.

点评： 2023年12月 考察了大学生选修课话题， 再次证明四级作文命题自 2023年以后侧重于校园生活话题， 该范例与校园生活联络严密， 为四级作文命题经常关注的话题。 本文属于比照观点加作者态度型的议论文写作。

范例二十五

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic: Lectures or

Discussions. You should write at least 120 words

following theoutline given below in Chine.

1． 一些学生赞成讲座式教学

2． 另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学

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3． 你的看法

Lectures and Discussions

There is a heated debate over the role of lectures

and discussions in theclassroom. Some people believe

that lectures can help students learn more quuickly.

In contrast, others hold that discussions can

stimulate students to learn bythemlves.

In my opinion, I stand on the side of neither idea.

First of all, either method hasits disadvantages.

Furthermore, each student has his or her preference.

Thirdly,lectures ate preferable to discussions in the

teaching of science subjects, and on thecontrary,

discussions are preferable to lectures in studying the

humanities. Therefore,we should adopt different

teaching methods according to different subjects.

点评： 2023年12月 考察了大学生选修课话题， 再次证明四级作文命题自 2023年以后侧重于校园生活话题， 该范例与校园生活联络严密， 为四级作文命题经常关注的话题。 本文属于比照观点加作者态度型的议论文写作。

范例二十六

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Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic: My View on

Online should write at least 120 words

followingthe outline given below in Chine.

1. 目前网络教育形成热潮

2. 你认为这股热潮形成的原因

3. 你对网络教育的评价

My View on Online Education.

Why could online education be so popular within

such a short period of time?

Personally, I appreciate this new form of

education. It’s indeed a helpfulplement to the

traditional educational means. It can provide

different learnerswith more flexible and versatile

ways of learning. Best of all, with online

education,we can stick to our jobs and at the same

time study and absorb the latest knowledge.

点评： 英特网的迅速开展改变了人们的生活和学习、 工作方式， 现代生活节奏快、 工作忙导致人们没时间全日制的学习， 网络和远程教育正好满足了人们的学习需要， 许多大第 39 页 共 45 页

学生利用因特网学习知识， 它成为传统教学的有益补充。 本范例题贴近时代， 也与大学生校园生活相关， 值得重视。

范例二十七

Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic: Pollution: An

Increasing Concern in China You should write at

least120words following the outline below in Chine.

1． 中国的污染的现状

2． 造成污染的原因

3． 解决的方法

Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China

It is reported that ten big cities in China are

being ranked among the top twentycities with the

highest pollution index in the world. This means it is

high time we didsomething to bring the situation under

control.

Many factors are contributing to the deteriorating

situation: industrial wastespumped into the air, the

lakes and rivers; a increasing number of

automobilescrowding into the streets; the widespread

u of plastic bags etc.

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To my view, stiffer laws and regulations must be

implemented to check pollution.

Industries that relea wastes without permission

should be heavily fined. Carsshould be equipped to

minimize the exhaust they relea into the air. And

the u ofplastic bags and disposable meal boxes

should be banned. What’s more, the mediashould play

an important role in implanting a n of

enviro____ental consciousnessinto people’s mind.

If everybody works toward a mon goal of making the

enviro____ent better,we can create a cleaner and

lovelier world for us and for the ing generation.

点评： 该范例题为社会热点话题， 也是四级命题作文经常关注的环境问题，值得引起重视。 本文属于解释性说明文的写作， 主题是“污染”。

范例二十八

For this part, you are required to write a

position about 120 words on thetopic: Changes in

People’s Daily Expens. Your position should be

written on thefollowing table and Chine given below.

1. 描绘图表中人们每天开支变化情况

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2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因

3. 结合图表对将来作出合理的范例

Changes in People’s Daily Expens.

What is shown in the table above indicates that

dramatic changes have takenplace in the people’s

daily expens from 1995 to 1999. The expens on food

havedeclined by 30% while tho on clothing and

recreation have incread respectivelyby 9% and 7% .

The statistics of ri and fall em to exist in

isolation but clolyrelated to one another .

点评： 该范例题属于图表作文写作， 与社会生活亲密相关， 与 1991 年 6 月份四级考试人们饮食构造的变化图表作文写作类似。 根据四级图表作文命题规律，第一段描绘人们

1995 到 1999 年日常开支所发生的宏大变化； 第二段分析^p

产生变化的原因； 最后一段根据图表所示变化作出了符合逻辑的范例。 文章紧扣主题，条理清楚， 语言连接， 表述准确标准， 结论合理。

范例二十九

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a positionabout an opening speech.

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You should write at least 120 words following the

outlinegiven below in Chine:

1. 说明你的身份和事件

2. 对到场领导教师的支持予以感谢并阐述体育运动所带给大家的好处

3. 宣布运动会开幕并预祝此次运动会获得成功.

An Opening Speech

Ladies and Gentlemen,

Good morning! I am Oscar, the spokesman of the

Students’ Union. On behalf ofthe Students’ Union,

the main organizer of today’s sports meeting, I wele

you allto the beautiful stadium. After two months’

preparation, our annual sports meetingis held on

schedule.

Thanks to the support and help from our school

leaders and teachers. Thoughthey have many school

responsibilities, they have taken time off to take

part in oursports activities. Let’s give them a big

hand. Through sports, we can not only developour

physical prowess, but also promote social and

emotional skills, and evenintellectual skills, which

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will matter in our future lives substantially. So

hopeeverybody here cherish this opportunity and enjoy

it.

At last, best wishes for the success of the sports

meeting and best wishes for thegood results of our

athletes. It is my pleasure to announce the open of

the sportsmeeting. Thank you and good luck!

点评： 本范例题是一篇开幕词， 与 2023 年 1 月 竞选学生会____演说词相仿，运动会也是在校大学生校园生活必不可少的一局部， 是在校生比拟熟悉的话题，有话可说， 便于发挥。

范例三十

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30

minutes to write a position onthe topic Choosing an

Occupation. You should write at least 120 words

following theoutline given below in Chine:

1. 选择职业是一个人要面对的众多难题之一。

2. 需要花时间去选择职业。

3. 选择职业时可以向多人寻求建议和帮助。

Choosing an Occupation

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One of the most important problems a young person

faces is deciding what todo. There are some people, of

cour, who from the time they are six years

old“know” that they want to be doctors or pilots or

fire fighters, but the majority of usdo not get around

to making a decision about an occupation or career

untilsomebody or something forces us to face the

problem.

Choosing an occupation takes time, and there are a

lot of things you have tothink about as you try to

decide what you would like to do. You may find that

you willhave to take special cours to qualify for a

particular kind of work, or you may findout that you

will need to get actual work experience to gain enough

knowledge toqualify for a particular job.

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