2011高考作文上海卷

2024年3月23日发(作者：滕元发)

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2011秋季高考上海卷写作样卷及评分

样卷一

Word came that the International Children Funds Association

intended to aid middle school students financially in launching programs

designed to help children in poor areas. And I am writing to you to apply

for one, hoping that the fund as much as 2000 yuan can realize my wish to

help the children.

As a normal student of MingQi Middle School, I, Li Ming, Has been

long cherishing a dream that every single child in poverty can have free

access to knowledge, thus devoting themlves to society to make it more

harmonious in turn.

Conquently, if my application can be luckily agreed to, I will spare

no efforts to build a library for tho children as my program.

To be more specific, the fund will be divided into three parts. First of

all, 800 yuan of it will be spent on buying books which may be mainly

cond-hand, in order to ensure the quantity. Also, another 400 yuan will

be intended to carry out advertiments that call on the people with a

n of responsibility in society to donate textbooks and so forth. What’s

more, the remaining 800 yuan, according to my design, shall be given to

tho children, entitling them the right to buy their favorite books that are

beyond what is mentioned above.

As you can e from what is talked about above, my plan may still

leave something to be desired, but as far as my strong wish to help tho

children is concerned, I genuinely hope you and your association can grant

me the opportunity to turn it into reality.

样卷二

I am Li Ming. A student in Ming Qi Middle School, who is eager to

apply for the project. I have a perfect blueprint for that and I am

lf-confident in making best u of the fund as well. My management is as

followed.

Firstly, I will talk about my plan on the project. Resuming the fact that

the children in poor area lack opportunities to study and know something

new about the modern society, a ries of lectures will be held in the poor

area, I will lect many excellent students and volunteers to address the

lectures, which is beneficial not only to the children but ourlves as well.

Further more, large quantities of books will be nt to the students in poor

area which we believe can contribute to the children’s growth up.

Secondly, the fund of 2000 yuan can also be well ud. We will rent a

bus to reach the poor area and it may cost half of the fund and we will

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relea a report about our activity on newspapers to attract more

volunteers. Furthermore, the rest of the fund will be spent on buying

books.

I am sincerely willing to apply for this project and I believe it will be a

remarkable event under my organization.

样卷三

My name is LiMing from MingQi School. I always watch the poor

children study hard with bad condition in poor area on television. I was

totally moved by that. So I am dying to apply for a product which can help

them. The following is my plan.

First, I think what they need most is clothes and books. The clothes

can keep them warm and the books will be their friends. So we need an

activity about donation. We will appeal for the students to donate the

things which they don’t need in our school. My schoolmates are all

warm-hearted and glad to help people. They will ready to do it so we will

succeed at last.

Then, to expand the influence of the activity, we can t up a

website. We can put some photos on the website to introduce the

conditions of the children in poor areas to let people know more about

them. Then they will be eager to play a role in the donation. Frankly

speaking, I am good at computer so I have the confidence to do well.

As we all know, we can’t completely change their situation by it, but

there is a famous saying which stands the test of the time ‘Rome is not

built in a day’. If I wish, I will put all the money into holding the

donation. I think with our joint effort they finally have got rid of the

poverty.

Thank you for reading the letter!

样卷四

My name is Li Ming from Ming Qi Middle school. I am proficient on

English and have a good command of singing and writing.

I plan to apply for a project of helping the children who come from

the poor areas. I have veral plans. To begin with, I will keep a clo touch

with them. You know. Finally, communication can put our heart together.

Secondly, I will teach them some necessary skills, such as singing and

dancing which can bring them happiness.

Last but not the least, I will spent money calling a experienced

teacher. He can teach them a lot of knowledge which I can give them.

If I apply for this project successfully, I will u project money to call in a

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teacher.

All in all, I can eager to get this chance.

样卷五

My name is Li Ming. I am a student from Ming Qi Middle School. I’d

like to apply to you for the item. I will help the poor.

Since I am 18-year- old teenager, I have ability to afford for the item.

My parents are going to help me too. I can u the knowledge I have learnt

from the class to improve poor children’s life.

I have planned for the item. I will offer for their tuitions and other

payments about studying and living.

The money of 2000 will be ud up in two years for their tuition and

other payment meaningful.

I hope that you would give me the chance. It will rve as a bridge

between I and one poor child. I will do my best for him.

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