六年级英语写作试题答案及解析

2024年3月2日发(作者：居瑛)

六年级英语写作试题答案及解析

1. 书面表达。（12分）

以“Last Spring Festival”为题写一段话。不少于五句。

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【答案】Last Spring Festival

Spring Festival is the most important festival in Spring Festival I did so many things.

On the eve of the Spring Festival,I had the celebration with the my family. We t fireworks .It

was really a great ate a lot of good most popular food was jiaozi or dumplings.I

wore new clothes.I got the red pockets from my parents and grandparents. I was so happy.

On the cond day,after breakfast,there were exchanges of visits between friends and

the Spring Festival there were also lion dances and drum and etc.

【解析】写作指导：要根据提供的题目，先确定时态，last是过去时态，再理清写作条理和考虑写作的内容，如先总写，再分写除夕夜、大年初一分别做了什么事情等。

2. 书面表达。

请以“Mylf”为题，按下面的要求写一篇英语作文。

要求：⑴语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范；⑵不得少于50个单词。

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【答案】Mylf

I am a quiet girl. I often go to school on foot. I am in Class 1 Grade 6. I like English. I often help

my friends with English. I like summer. Becau I can swim in the river in summer. I like playing

the piano and playing ping-pong. On the weekends I often visit my grandparents with my

parents. Sometimes I can clean my room and wash my clothes. I am going to Hong Kong next

summer vacation. Do you want to be my friend?

【解析】写作指导：根据提示写短文，要先审清楚题目要求。本题是命题作文，要求以Mylf为题，单词不少于50个单词，内容是关于我自己的，要求语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。

3. 书面表达。

请为大家介绍你的一位好朋友。要求不少于10个完整的句子。____________________________________________________________________________________________

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【答案】My good friend

I have a good friend. He is a lovely boy. He has short black hair,big black eyes and big ears. He

has a bigmouth and a small no. I think he is handsome. And he is strong and quiet. He likes

sports very much. After class, we often play football, basketball on the playground .He is a good

player. He also likes to study. English and math are his favourite subjects. He helps me a lot.

【解析】写作指导：要确定题目，如My good friend, 再确定时态，如一般现在时态，再理清写作条理和考虑写作的内容，如先总写，I have a good friend.再介绍好朋友的体貌特征，兴趣爱好，喜欢的科目等。

4. ( )选出下列句子朗读符号标注正确的一项。

—How do you go to school( ↘ ) ?

—By bus（↘). And you ( ↗ )?

—How do you go to school( ↘ )?

—By bus( ↗ ). And you( ↗ )?

—How do you go to school( ↘ )?

—By bus( ↗ ). And you( ↘ ) ?

【答案】A

5. 书面表达。

Henry是你的朋友，请你根据提供的信息，写一段不少于5句话的短文，介绍 Henry。

你可以使用以下句型：His/Her He/ years old. He/She He/

His/ Her favourite ...is...

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【答案】His name is Henry. He is twelve years old. He comes from Canada. He likes yellow

very much. His favourite subject is Maths. His favourite sport is badminton. His favourite fruit is

pear.

He’s my friend. I have a good friend.

6. 书面表达。

以“Last Spring Festival”为题写一段话。不少于五句。

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【答案】Last Spring Festival

Spring Festival is the most important festival in Spring Festival I did so many things.

On the eve of the Spring Festival,I had the celebration with the my family. We t fireworks .It

was really a great ate a lot of good most popular food was jiaozi or dumplings.I

wore new clothes.I got the red pockets from my parents and grandparents. I was so happy.

On the cond day,after breakfast,there were exchanges of visits between friends and

the Spring Festival there were also lion dances and drum and etc.

7. 小作文。

小朋友们，俗话说：“春有百花秋有月，夏有凉风冬听雪。”四季有自己各自独特的美丽。你最喜欢的季节是什么呢？请写一写跟大家分享一下吧！（要求：语句通顺，不少于5句话。）

【答案】There are four asons in a year. I like winter best. Winter is cold and snowy. We can

make snowmen with the snow. We can wear our winter clothes and play in the snow. It’s happy!

Do you like winter?

8. 小作文。

同学们，你的校园生活是怎样的呢？跟大家一起来谈一谈吧。（提示：从时间、交通、科目、所读班级等方面介绍）。不少于5句话。

【答案】I go to school on Monday to Friday. In the morning, I brush my face and brush my

teeth. Then I go to school by bike. We learn English and Chine at school. I play with my

friends in school. I love my school. I am happy.

9. 书面表达

假如你是Sally，请给你的笔友John写一封信，介绍你的小学。

注意：开头已给出，全文80词左右。框里所给词语供选用。

Dear John，

How are you recently？

I'm writing to introduce my new school to you.

【答案】Dear John，

How are you recently?

I'm writing to introduce my new school to you.

My school is very beautiful. It is near the Lake. I like my school very much.

There is a big playground in my school. We have P.E. class on the playground and we often

play sports on it, too. Our teaching building has five floors. My classroom is on the fifth floor. It is

big and clean. The computer rooms are on the third floor. There is a library on the cond floor.

There are many books in the library. I often read books here. There are some music rooms and

art rooms in the teaching building, too.

The teachers in my school are very kind. The students are very polite and smart. I am

happy in my school.

10. 写作。

我们中国有许多法定假日，教师节、国庆节等，还有很多传统节日，如中秋节、春节……你最喜欢过什么节日呢？写一写你最喜欢的节日。要求：字迹工整、不少于100词。

【答案】The Spring Festival

Spring Festival is the most importantand popular festival in Spring Festival,the

people usually clean and decorate their they go to the Flower Fairs to buy some

Spring Festival,the adults usually give lucky money to often get

together and have a big people eat dumpling for dinner.

I love Spring Festival.

译文：

春节

春节是中国最重要最流行的节日，在过春节之前，人们通常打扫房间，装饰屋子。并且他们回去花店买一些花。在春节期间，成人们通常给孩子们压岁钱。人们经常聚在一起吃一顿大餐。一些人会在正餐吃饺子。

我爱春节。

11. 写作。

根据提示的句型，完成写作。

My name is… I live in… My hobby is… My favourite festival is…

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【答案】My name is Li Lei, I’m 12 years old, My hobby is listening to music.I like listening to

music e listening to music makes me favourite festival is Spring Festival.

It’s in January or February. People in China celebrate it, and there are many things to do. We

often celebrate Spring Festival by having a big dinner, visiting relatives and friends.

译文：

我的名字叫李雷，我12岁了，我的爱好是听音乐。我最喜欢听音乐。因为听音乐让我放松。我最喜欢的节日是春节。它在1月。中国人庆祝它，并且有很多事情去做。我们经常通过吃一顿大餐来庆祝春节，并且还要拜访亲友。

12. 介绍一种文具，按要求写一篇小短文。

要求：①写出文具的主要特点。

②条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。

③不少于50个单词。

【答案】I have a beautiful red pencil-box with three pens, two pencils, a rubber and two rulers.

Every morning before I go to school I put it into my backpack. In class I take it out to write with

pens or pencils. If I make some mistakes, I u my rubber to era the wrong words. When I do

maths, I u my lovely ruler. Everything in my pencil-box is uful. I love my beautiful and uful

pencil-box. Do you have a

beautiful pencil—box,too?

【解析】从文具的特点，功能方面去描述，句子应多用一般现在时。

13. 读写任务。请用英语简单概括所读的故事并以一句话写出你自己的读后感想，字数要求70-90词。要求书写工整、美观。（10分，其中卷面占1分）

Last year Tom left school. He came to London to find a job. He went from one company to

another, but no one wanted him. Now he had little money, so he came to the station. He was

sad and tired. It was late at night and the station was full of people. They waited and bought

tickets of the last train. He bought the last ticket and he felt very lucky.

At that time, a woman with a crying baby walked to him. She asked him to ll her the ticket. He

gave it to her becau he thought that they needed it more than him. After the train left, he sat

on the bench and wondered, “Where can I go?” Just then，an old man came and said, '"Young

man, I saw what you did to the woman. I have a big company. I need a good young man like

you. Would you like to work for me?”

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【答案】参考范文：

Tom left school to find a job in London, but he couldn't find any. He was sad and had little

money. Then he went to the station and was very lucky to get the last ticket. But he gave the

ticket

to a woman with a baby becau he thought they needed it more than him. He didn't know

where

to go. At that time, an old man saw what Tom did and offered Tom a job in his company. If we

help other people , others will help us in return.

【解析】写法：这是一篇读后感，文章中既要大略复述原文，又要在恰当之处加之自己的感想。注意人称和时态，也要注意将简单句变为复合句时的句子结构。

时态：本文关键在于复述课文时，时态与原文统一即可。抒发感想时用一般现在时或将来时。

句型：文章要适当使用连词。

注意：在写作时，要注意时态，以及复合句的使用。结尾处要抒发情感总结全文。

14. 写单词，补全句子。（每空一词）

1. A: _____________ are you going to the party tomorrow?

B: I ___________ going to go by car.

2. A: ____________ he usually have breakfast at ven o’clock?

B: No, but he ____________ breakfast at ven yesterday.

3. A: Is Zhang Hua shorter than you?

B: No. He is ___________ than _____________.

4. A: _____________I do my homework here?

B: Yes, but you ____________ talk here.

5. A: ___________there any pictures in your room?

B: Yes, there____________ a picture of Lei Feng.

【答案】；am

；had

；me

；can’t

；is

【解析】1.思路分析：本题考查的是根据答语的内容判断所提问的疑问词，并且根据时态判断系

动词的正确形式。

易错提示：做本题时不容易根据答语中的“by car”分析得出疑问句是询问交通方式的，从而会写出错误的答案。

2. 思路分析：本题考查的是一般疑问句的提问以及动词的一般过去时态的形式。需要根据答语以及句中的时间标志词来判断正确答案。

易错提示：本题应根据答语判断为一般疑问句从而得出答案，考生容易忽略答语中的No而得出正确答案。

3.思路分析：本题需要根据问句中的比较成分分析得出答语的比较结构。

易错提示：本题中最容易错的地方是than之后的代词形式，考生容易直接写出I，而忽略应填入宾格形式。

4.思路分析：本题考查的是根据句意和语境得出一般疑问句的引导词，需要分析问句和答语之后得出填入情态动词。

易错提示：本题容易判断出为一般疑问句的提问，因此直接得出填入助动词的答案。

5.思路分析：本题考查的是there be结构的一般疑问句以及回答。

易错提示：本题容易判断出是考查there be结构，但是很容易忽视后面的名词的单复数形式，因此填写错误的形式。

15. 书面表达。

假设现在是晚上8点，描述你和你的家人正在进行的活动。注意时态使用现在进行时，字数不少于60词。

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【答案】【范文】

There are 3 members in our family. They are my father,my mother and I .We love each other

father likes ay he reads newspaper, magazines and all kinds of

books after supper. My mum loves to play computer games since I taught her how to do it. Now

it is 8:00 pm, my father is reading a magznie ,my mum is watching movies on the the

same time,I was doing my homework .My family is very harmonious，I love my family.

【解析】【考点】考查书面表达能力

【点评】本文主要介绍晚上八点的时候全家人在做什么，全文主要用现在进行时。文章结构清晰、内容饱满、表达流畅。

【写法指导】先介绍家庭一般情况，再描述全家人正在什么。如果能运用短语和句型，能为作文增色不少，本文中用到了each other，likes reading，all kinds of ，after supper等短语，还用到从句since I taught her how to do it，使文章更加饱满。

16. 书面表达。

请以“My favorite animal”描述你最喜欢的一种动物，内容不少于60个词。

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【答案】【范文】

My favourite animal is a dog . I love dogs becau they are loyal and they are man's best friend.

I have a first got him a year ago, then he hurt his paw. I often take Ice outside in the

morning and walk down the stairs to get to our front lawn. Ice sits at the top of the stairs, holding

his two paws up in the air and he waitsd until I let him put them down.

【解析】【考点】考查书面表达能力

【点评】本文主要介绍自己喜欢的狗，全文用一般现在时完成。文章结构清晰、内容饱满、表达流畅。

【写法指导】先写自己喜欢哪一种动物，再写原因，最后写和喜欢的动物如何相处。如果能运用短语和句型，能为作文增色不少，本文中用到 in the morning,walk down, at the top of 等短语，以及从句becau they are loyal and they are man's best friend，使文章更加饱满。

17. 以“My Village”为题写一篇小短文。

要求： ①条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。

②不少于50个单词

【答案】【范文】

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many hous in the village. Near the village, there is a

forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can e some fish

in the river. Near the river, you can e a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the

mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【解析】【考点】书面表达

【写作指导】写此类对地方进行描写的文章，要注意多用形容词，描写其地理位置、状态、景色。

【点评】文章条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。

18. 读表格内容，按要求完成任务。

1）读表格，仿照Tom完成的样例，把Mike介绍自己的话语补充完整。(4分)

I am Mike .I am 1____.I am in Class 8. I come from 2___. my favourite sport is 3___ . And my

favourite subject is 4___

2）请你从Cathy和Ann中选择一个人物，先将其名字写在方框中，再根据短文内容帮她写一个自我介绍。至少写出五句话。

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【答案】1） ng

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2.I ‘m Ann. I’m nine. I’m from Canada. My favourite sport is playing ping-pong. And my favourite

subject is science.

【解析】1）1.句意：我11岁了。根据I’m twelve我12岁了，可知答案填eleven .

2.句意：我来自美国。根据I come from China我来自中国，可知答案填America .

3.句意：我最喜欢的运动是游泳。根据My favourite sport is running我最喜欢的运动是跑步，可知答案填swimming.

4.句意：我最喜欢的科目是数学。根据My favourite subject is English我最喜欢的科目是英语 ，可知答案填Maths.

2）1.从Cathy和Ann中选的是Ann,故答案为Ann.2.句意：我是安，9岁，来自加拿大，我最喜欢的运动是打乒乓球，最喜欢的科目是科学。仿照样例根据名字、年龄、国籍、最喜欢的运动和科目的先后顺序，可知答案为I ‘m Ann. I’m nine. I’m from Canada. My favourite sport is playing

ping-pong. And my favourite subject is science.

【规律总结】遇到此类仿写作文，需要先看清需要仿写的项目分别是什么，比如名字、年龄、班级、国籍、最喜欢的运动和科目，具体信息是什么，然后参照样例对照选择项目进行填写。

19. 书面表达。

我会写！（请同学们用不少于5个英文句子来介绍一下你自己。比如：姓名、性别、家庭、学校、爱好等等。）

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【答案】参考范文：

My name is Li Ling. I’m a good girl. There are three people in my family, my father, my mother

and I. I study in Beijing No. 1 Primary School. I like reading stories very much. Would you like to

be my friend?

【解析】写作指导：这是一篇命题作文，用不少于5个英文句子来介绍一下你自己。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点展开写作。根据所给材料内容，可知本文主要用第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。写作中注意语言的表述应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

20. 连词成句

1.I’m swimming good at .

2. went to Anne the muum .

3. you Did play the park games at ?

4. looks like Our earth this from space .

5. you want Do to Great Wall the go to?

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6. we’ll, walk, with, take, a, grandparents, your(.)

【答案】1.I’m good at swimming.

went to the muum.

you play games at the park?

earth looks like this from space.

you want to go to the Great Wall?

’ll take a walk with your grandparents.

【解析】1.我擅长游泳。

2. Anne去博物馆了。

3.在联欢会上你们做游戏了吗？

4.从太空看我们的地球是这样的。

5.你想去长城吗？

6.我们要和你爷爷奶奶去散步。

21. 根据汉语提示完成句子。

____________(儿童节) is coming.

are some_______________(礼物) for you．

do you want to do___________(在) the Children's Day?

4.I want to______________ (购物)．

wants to_____________ (做游戏) at home．

【答案】1. Children's Day

ts

shopping

games

【解析】1.儿童节就要到了。

2.有一些礼物给你。

3.儿童节那天你想做什么？

4.我想去购物。

5.他想在家玩游戏。

22. 根据实际情况回答问题。

1. How do you go to the zoo?

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2. How do you go to Australia？

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3. Is your school far from your home?

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4. Excu me, how can I get to the park?

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【答案】 bike./By bus./On foot.

plane.

,it is./No, it isn’t.

straight then turn right at the school./You can take No.1 bus.

【解析】略

23. 看图写单词。

1. a _______. 2. h_______ 3.w________ 4.a________ 5.s_____

【答案】 d 5. sad

【解析】略

24. 看图写单词。

h___________ p__________ c___________ g__________ t________

【答案】hospital post office crossing go straight turn right

【解析】略

25. Tom isn’t ______ Chine boy. He’s ______ English boy.

A. a, an B. an, an C. an, a

【答案】A

【解析】Chine以辅音/ tʃ/ 开头，其前用冠词a；English以元音/ i/ 开头，其前用冠词an。

26. 看图，仿照例子，把对话写下来。

例：

A：Where’s the clock? Is it on the desk?

B：Yes，it is．

A：____________________

B：____________________

A：____________________

B：____________________

【答案】1. Where is the squirrel? Is it in the tree? Yes, it is.

2. Where is the woman? Is she in the classroom? Yes, she is.

【解析】1. 图片展示的是一只松鼠站在树干上。所以对话应是：松鼠在哪里？它在树上吗？是的，它在。在哪儿where 松鼠the squirrel 在树上in the tree。所以答案为Where is the squirrel? Is it

in the tree? Yes, it is.

2. 图片展示的是一位女士在教室里站着。所以对话应是：那个女士在哪里？她在教室里吗？是的，她是。所以答案为Where is the woman? Is she in the classroom? Yes, she is.

注意：本题主语woman，地点classroom可根据学生答题情况调整，只要符合逻辑即可。

27. Plea ask your English teacher what he / she is going to do on Saturday. （请调查你的英语老师将如何度周六)

You may ask: “What are you going to do…?”

Saturday

What to do

Morning

Afternoon

Evening

【答案】略。

【解析】略

28. 写一写。

你的家人都是做什么工作的？他们怎样去上班？请以“My Family”为题，写一篇不少于50个单词的小短文。

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【答案】范文： My family

Hello! My name is John. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother

and me. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He works very hard. He goes to work by

subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school. She teaches Chine. She goes to

school by bus. I’m a student. I often go to school on foot. We are very busy, but we are very

happy. I love my family.

【解析】略

29. 写作。

根据表格信息写一段短文，要求使用上比较级，不少于五句话。

Name

Lily

Tom

Age

12

11

Height (m)

1.56

1.54

Weight (kg)

48

51

【答案】Lily is twelve years old. She’s 1.56 metres tall. And she’s 48 kilograms. Tom is eleven

years old. He’s 1.54 metres and 51 kilograms. Lily is older and taller than Tom. But Tom is

heavier than her.

【解析】略

30. 写作。

Angela感冒了去看医生，请写她和医生的对话。要求每人至少有3句话。

【答案】略

【解析】略