I have a very happy family.
my mother is a worker. how old is she? guess! she’s forty-five, she like watching tv. on saturdays and sundays, she likes going to the zoo. she doesn’t work on saturdays and sundays. my father is a worker, too.he likes swimming .and i and my sister is student. we both like playing games and go shopping.
my grandfather and grandmother likes running on saturdays and walking on sundays. they like ducks, but i don’t. i like dogs very much. in the evening, we watch tv. some times i listen to music. but my mother, grandfather and grandmother doesn’t, they like reading.
i love my happy family very much. do you like my family?
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my mother is a worker. how old is she? guess! she’s forty-five, she like watching tv. on saturdays and sundays, she likes going to the zoo. she doesn’t work on saturdays and sundays. my father is a worker, too.he likes swimming .and i and my sister is student. we b
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oth like playing games and go shopping.
内浮顶家庭观my grandfather and grandmother likes running on saturdays and walking on sundays. they like ducks, but i don’t i like dogs very much. in the evening, we watch tv. some times i listen to music. but my mother, grandfather and grandmother doesn’t， they like reading.
mean的过去式i love my happy family very much. do you like my family?
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14的英文痫病发作的急救措施1.she’s forty-five, （and)she like(likes) watching tv.
2.and i and my sister is student改 and my sister and i are students.
3.and go(going) shopping.
4.some times i listen to music.
结业证书有什么用
5.grandfather and grandmother doesn’t，改为grandfather and grandmother don't like music.
这篇文章写的不错，很真实，作者的里路不错，有几个基本的错误，希望以后注意。
