PETS五级英语写作
第一部分：重点关注
电机与控制一、评分标准：语言第一位；结构第二位；内容第三位；
二、衔接过渡词的使用：
启：first, at prent, first of all, above all, at the first place, on the one hand, for one thing, to begin with，为第一观点。
承：cond, on the other hand, in addition, additionally, moreover, what is more, furthermore, third, last but not least，为第二观点
转: But, however, nevertheless, on the contrary, unlike, otherwi, converly, unfortunately, whereas, unfortunately, surprisingly, ironically
合：Accordingly, therefore, as a result, conquently, in conclusion, to sum up, in general, on the whole, by and large, in brief, briefly speaking
因果：due to/ owing to/thanks to/as a result of + 名词
___ in order to + 动词
Along with/Coupled with + 名词
As/since/becau+句子
引用：As the saying goes, as somebody put it,
句型首尾：Given all the above factors, it is safe to reach the conclusion that __________.
Taking into account all the above factors, it is reasonable to reach the conclusion that __________.
三、避免低级错误：
三一致：主谓一致;时态一致;人称一致；两不能：不能串句，不能断句
四、写作 “五不能”
1) 观点不能缺乏角度
2) 观点绝对不能化
泰宁县3) 专业术语不能过多
4) 例证陈腐不能陈腐
5) 不能过度依赖个人经历
第二部分:范文
范文（1）
Directions:
It has been more than 30 years since man first landed on the moon. Some people think that space rearch is a waste of money. Write an essay of no less than 250 w
ords.
范文（1）
When it comes to the issue of space rearch, people vary in their views. Some journalists or free lancers maintain that it is a waste of money. However, through decades of practice and obrvation, it proves that this comment has many limitations.
Admittedly, the idea that space rearch is a waste of money does contain an element of truth. But the people who criticize the rising cost of space exploration tend to ignore two other esntial aspects. To begin with, a nation can make the best u of its technology in space plans to rve the need of other countries. Therefore, the country in its space rearch can profit greatly from data exchange or rocket launching. In this n, the financial return from the space plans will possibly far exceed the amount of the investment. What is more, through its space exploration, a nation can have more information about new material or the movement of heavenly bodies. All the results cannot be measured by money, but they are very important for the human beings. 清蒸金针菇
伤残评定标准 Given the reasons above, it is safe to conclude that a nation has to enhance its awareness that space rearch is important for the human beings. The government is obliged to take broad actions and t aside sufficient fund each year to encourage space study. Only in this way can space rearch develop quickly and benefit human beings in the future.
范文（2）
Since the 1960s, there has been some heated discussion on the feasibility of space rearch. Some people, free lancers or columnists in particular, always emphasize that it involves the bulk of investment that never expects financial reward. However, through years of practice and obrvation, this statement turns out to have a number of restrictions.
Admittedly, the idea held by the people who lament over the annual budget in a package of space projects does contain an element of truth. But the arguers tend to ignore two other esntial aspects. First, they fail to take into consideration the possibility
that a country can utilize its cutting-edge technology in the moon landing projects, thus profiting significantly from satellite development, data transmission or rocket lift-off. In this n, space investment is not always synonymous to a waste of money. Second, the arguers’ asrtion doesn’t provide sufficient data to narrow down the exact extent of the financial loss. Therefore, any further conclusion addressing the problem of space rearch must be bad on thorough investigation. As a matter of fact, space rearch and exploration provides the primary incentive for the development of space shuttles, space stations and sky labs, let alone other benefits from the discovery of rare material to the obrvation of new heavenly orbs. In this respect, money return is not the sole hallmark of the space rearch. Given reasons above, the argument above, under scrutiny, tend to be groundless in its hasty conclusion.
In conclusion, the arguers’ evidence lends little credible support to her claim. To persuade people that space rearch is a waste of money, the arguers would need to provide clear evidence, sufficient data and thorough cost-benefit analysis of alternatives. (280words)
Issue:
Direction:
It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as clo as they ud to be. Give reasons and recommendations.
范文(1)
Recently there has been some heated discussion on the family relationship. The issue that families are now not as clo as they ud to be is a complex one, since it involves a conflict of values. In my view, the final judgment will depended on a combination of two (three) esntial aspects.
(原因1)Compared with the past, great changes have taken place in the size of a family life. As a result, the young people are more willing to live in their smaller family units rather than sharing the same apartment with the parents. With the time goes by, it is natural that family members are not as clod as they ud to be. （原因2）Additionally,
the pattern of social production as a whole also undergoes certain dramatic transformation. So the younger generation usually work under such a pressure that they ldom have enough time to stay with their parents. Gradually, the concept of a large family is fading from their minds. （原因3）Finally, the country has, for the past decades, witnesd an upsurge of scientific technology. So nowadays, a variety of modern technical devices are available. By and by, the young people find it more convenient to contact their parents through telephone or E-mails instead of staying with their parents.
In view of轻徭薄赋 such social phenomenon, it is imperative to take some urgent steps. For one thing, young generation is expected to enhance their awareness that a clod family is crucial for their parents. For another thing, the media, in collaboration with government departments concerned, is obliged to take concrete measures to encourage the young people to spend more time with their family members. Only in this way can a clod family be maintained.
(298 words)
范文（2）
Recently there has been some heated discussion on the family relationship. The issue that families are currently not as intimate as they em to be is a complex one, since it involves a conflict between traditional values of family unification and the modern ones .栀子花香 开包子铺的爸爸In my view, the final judgment will depend on a combination of two (three) esntial aspects.
