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my life of future
in ten years i will be a reporter and i think i will live in beijing becau i think as a student w e shuold love our counrtry and our capital i willl live in a apartment with my friends becau i do not like living alone i think as a reporter i will meet a lot of interesting people i am a outgoing girl i want to be a reporter b ecau i like talking with people i have a lot of friends i know if i want to be a reporter i should study hard and get good grades
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1.文章没分段，没有标点符号，句首字母应该大写，还要注意单词i的书写和标题的首字母大写。
2.and i think i will live in beijing becau i think as a student w e shuold love our counrtry and our capital 此句前后没有明显的因果关系,可以改为:and i think i will live in beijing becau i went to beijing last year and fell in love with it .
3.in a apartment应为in an apartment.
红楼梦读后感200字4.a outgoing girl 应为an outgoing girl.
杭州横店5 .i want to be a reporter becau i like talking with people i have a lot of friends 可改为i want to be a reporter becau i like talking with people and want to have a lot of friends.360翻译在线翻译
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in ten years i will be a reporter.
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and i think i will live in beijing becau i went to beijing last year and i fell in love with it.i think i will live in an apartment with my friends becau i do not like living alone .i think as a reporter i will meet a lot of interesting people .i am an outgoing girl,so i want to be a reporter becau i like talking with people and want to have a lot of friends .
i know if i want to be a reporter i should study hard and get good grades now. 跨栏教案
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