2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版）24
主题投稿写作+读后续写+概要写作
1．随着年龄的增长，我们总想挣脱父母的怀抱，有时会和父母产生分歧。假定你是李华，你校英语杂志社正在开展题为“How to get along well with your parents”的征文活动。请你写一篇文章投稿，内容包括：
1. 事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的意见；
2. 跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静；
3. 多花时间跟父母在一起，如跟他们在一起去野餐等。
注意：
1. 写作词数80词左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 宝宝打针短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to get along well with your parents
As you are growing up, you may want to be free from your parents.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
How to get along well with your parents
As you are growing up, you may want to be free from your parents. Sometimes you will have conflicts with your parents, and you may feel deeply regretful later.
If you want to prevent such moments from happening, you should follow the steps. Firs
tly, you should communicate with them and ask for their advice before taking certain action. Secondly, If you disagree with your parents about something, you should stay cool and consider it carefully. What’s more, you’d better spend more time with them, such as having a picnic with them. By doing the, your family bond will be stronger.
Once you follow the steps, I’m sure that it will be easy for you to get along well with your parents.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校英语杂志社写一篇题为“How to get along well with your parents”的征文。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.说明现状，引出主题。
装修项目
2.如何和父母友好 相处的建议。
时尚的英语怎么说
1）事前要跟父母沟通，征求他们的意见
2）跟父母意见不一致时要保持冷静
3) 多花时间跟父母在一起，如跟他们在一起去野餐等
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
get along well with；grow up；be free from；conflict with；prevent from；communicate with；
ask for advice；disagree with；what’s more；大碗饭have a picnic with; get along well with.
电饭锅煮稀饭第三步：连词成句
1. As you are growing up, you may want to be free from your parents.
留香作文
2.If you want to prevent such moments from happening, you should follow the steps.
3.Secondly, if you disagree with your parents about something, you should stay cool and consider it carefully.
4.What’s more, you’d better spend more time with them, such as having a picnic with them.
5.Once you follow the steps, I’m sure that it will be easy for you to get along well with your parents.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clau(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Becau, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Secondly, if you disagree with your parents about something, you should stay cool and consider it carefully.这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句；Once you follow the steps, I’m sure that it will be easy for you to get along well with your parents.使用了宾语从句。也使用了一些固定词组，如get along well with；grow up；be free from；conflict with外接圆圆心；prevent from；眩晕症吃什么药最好communicate with等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Robert and Henry were good friends in the same class. They always played together and went home together. One day Robert and Henry were going home from school when Robert shouted at Henry and said ,“You are a coward(胆小鬼), and I won’t play with you.” Without any words, Henry was a little angry and went home alone.
The next day Henry went to school as usual, but Robert told all the boys that Henry was a coward and all of them laughed at Henry a great deal. Robert didn’t invite Henry to go home with him anymore. Instead, he played with some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward. Every day after school, they didn’t go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play.
A few days later, Robert was swimming with his new friends in a river, and he struggled in the water and suddenly cried “Help, help”. His new friends didn’t help him and ran away as fast as they could.
