2021年高考英语能力拓展之读后续写16
自然类故事2
1.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
In 2000, when I was around ven years old, my parents, sister, brother, and I were coming back from a picnic. That was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surpri was waiting for us in our driveway. There, we saw two adult gee (鹅) and a young goo. The adults were surprid by our return and flew away, but their baby was still too young to fly and couldn’t follow. We are no strangers to the ways of wildlife, so we knew to avoid physical contact with the young goo out of fear that it would stay with us and be lost to its family forever.
Hours pasd, and night fell. With it came the coldness. The tiny little thing was walking around our yard and it was clear that the goo needed protection and warmth. At that point, we knew we had to help, аnd wе brоught hіm іntо оur bасk роrсh (门廊旅游攻略ppt).
We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still another. Each morning, we would try to shoo (赶走) the goo to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard. He wouldn’t go to them, though, and they wouldn’t come clo enough to take him. We kept this up for five days, but no luck. By then, the young goo had clearly decided we were his new family, so we had to give him a name. My sister Joanna called him Peeper, becau he would follow us around the yard making a peeping noi, nonstop. We also decided that Peeper was a boy. I don’t know why; it just felt right.
Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months until almost a year pasd. Peeper slept in our back porch each night. My dad would clean all the goo droppings daily. He would throw Peeper up into the air so he could fly a loop (圈) around the hou, coming back again once the porch was clean.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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One evening, my dad threw Peeper up in the air as usual, but this time, Peeper just flew off.
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It came as a total shock to me when, in 2019, an aging adult goo made his way back to my family home.
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【答案】
One evening, my dad threw Peeper up in the air as usual, but this time, Peeper just flew off. Everyone was very, very sad. It was dark, and we were worried. We looked for him for days, calling his name, but he didn’t come back. We hoped he went off on his natural way. Again, days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months, then years. I misd Peeper廉洁自律工作总结. I would call for him every time I saw a group of gee保姓 fly by in V-formation. Eighteen years pasd, and Peeper became a happy memory for my family.
It came as a total shock to me when, in 2019, an aging adult goo made his way back to my family home. At first, I thought it was just another goo. And yet, something about him emed strangely familiar to me. The goo came back repeatedly. He did all of the same things Peeper ud to, like trying to come in through the front door and sleeping in our back porch. Besides, this goo also responded to the name Peeper. Much to my surpri, my old best friend had returned, 18 years later.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章讲述了作者小时候发生的一件难忘的事。
【详解】
通过阅读所给文章可知，本文讲述了作者小时候在野餐回家的路上遇到了一只和家人走散的小鹅，作者和家人想让小鹅去寻找它的父母，而小鹅却把作者一家当成了新的家人，最终作者一家人接受了它，并愉快的生活在一起。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：一天晚上，我爸爸像往常一样将Peeper扔到空中，但这次Peeper飞走了。续写部分应该描写在Peeper飞走后，作者一家人的心情如何。续写中可以按照时间线进行描写，即Peeper刚飞走时我们的心情如何；Peeper飞走几天、几周、几个月后我们的心情如何；Peeper飞走几年后我们的心情如何。第二段开头是：在2019年，当一只年老的成年鹅回到我家时，我完全震惊了。续写部分应该描写这只成年鹅回到我家后的行为，并通过把它的行为和Peeper进行对比，最终确定它就是我们的老朋友Peeper，并表达作者和Peeper重逢的感觉。
婵娟指的是什么续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇、高级短语和高级句子。如：蒸菜的做法大全memory, strangely, repeatedly, respond等高级词汇；look for, turn into, come back, to one’s surpri等高级短语。文章恰当的使用了宾语从句，如We hoped he went off on his natural way.，使文章表达更加地道。危险化学品管理
2.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。
I sat at the breakfast table with my four-year-old son, Matthew, trying to ignore the ache in my stomach. “Mama, want to play?” “Not today, baby,” I shook my head. The days I could barely get out of bed. I was still recovering from a surgery. I hoped for strength and happiness. But the future emed so hopeless.
Suddenly, Matthew jumped up from his spot on the kitchen floor. “Bird!” he shouted, rushing to our courtyard. Sure enough, there was a white dove ated in a rubber tree. It sat there for a few moments, and then flew away. Strange, I'd never en one in our neighborhood before.
