读后续写,大部分都是围绕conflict,solution来运转的,首先你能看懂材料,如果这一步无法完成,那这篇文章并不适合你。然后,你要找到文章到底提出什么冲突或问题。
好了,大部分文章都是这个模式:
(1)情绪:消极情绪
(2)细节:进一步解释描写
(3)转折:个人的努力或借助外界
(4)转机:事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰
(5)失望:但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
(6)新法:突然有了一个想法(一句话说明这个想法)
(7)结局:过了一段时间;事情有了最后的转折
(8)总结:点题,呼应前文
要说明的是:并非每个环节都需要,也可能不是这个顺序,甚至可以穿插进行,这不是死板一块的。这个模式只是我今天上课突然想到的,只是一个初步的模子,后面肯定要不断完善。
说明:以下的表达方式也是参考比较好的资源来总结的
杜甫是什么诗人详述:
(1)消极情绪
典型表达是:
感到(这个可以有很多表达方式,并且可以结合在每一个环节中,可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语)
1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a =a feeling/一阵...
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispoi ntment/)
3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb
因...颤抖
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tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, )
(2)进一步细节描写
典型是:流泪;心里想……
诗歌的英文流泪:
1. Tears blurred one's eyes.
2. One's eyes got misty.
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. ...be clo to tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
心里想
1. An inner voice told sb that 从句内心的声音告诉某人...
2. ...thought/said to onelf
(3)转折(个人努力或借助外界)
典型是:鼓起勇气或另外一方的鼓励;毫不犹豫
pluck up/take/gather/one's courage ()
毫不犹豫:
1. sb could hardly wait to do sth
2. without a cond thought
3. without even thinking
4. without delay
5. without hesitation满天星斗
(4)事情似乎有了转机,并抱有希望,感到欣慰典型表达是:
似乎:
1. It was like doing sth好像...
2. It emed as if/ 好像...
希望:
1. hoping that 从句抱着一丝希望
2. e/feel a glimmer of hope看到一丝希望
3. trying hard to do sth
欣慰:
1. ...breathed a sigh of relief松了一口气
2. ...sighed with relief松了一口气
3. (A wave of) relief flooded through/washed over sb
4. to one's relief, .. 使人欣慰的/放心的是
(5)但是还是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题典型是:不幸的是;不知道做什么
不幸的是:
1. But bad luck for sb, ...但是某人真不走运
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3. , but in vain
4. , but without success
5. , but no u
不知道做什么
1. Sb did sth, wondering what to do next.
2. Sb did sth, not knowing what to do next.
3. Sb did sth, unsure of what to do next.
4. Sb was at a loss what to do.
5. Sb was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.感到难以决定...
(6)突然有了一个想法:一句话表示想法
典型:某人想到/明白...;有了主意
1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
2. (idea, ) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind
3. One's mind began to race
(7)皆大欢喜:过了一段时间,事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
怎样才能不胡思乱想1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...
2. for an instant/moment一瞬间
有了结果
1. To one's surpri(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
2. But on cond thoughts, ...但是转而一想,...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
皆大欢喜:参考(1)
(8)最后总结,点题
巴金家读后感典型是:
直到...才意识到...
1. 倒装句:Not until 时间状语 did sb realize/notice that 从句
2. 强调句:It was only时间状语 that sb realized that 从句
还记得某人的话;还在某人的脑海中
1. One's words (echoed/rang out) in one's ears.
2. One's words(voice/song) lingered/whispered in one's mind/head.
3. One's head was still 今年四级考试时间
经历与教训
1. What lesson sb taught me(sb learned from sb)! (valuable/uful/great/painful)
2. What perience sb had!
(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)
3. Down deep in one's heart, ...在某人的内心深处