专题08 读后续写句式提升之独立结构的使用
压岁钱的来历独立主格结构是由“名词或代词+现在分词、过去分词、不定式、形容词短语、名词短语、介词短语或副词短语”构成的一种独立结构。在该结构中，名词或代词与其后的部分构成逻辑上的主谓关系，用来修饰谓语动词或整个句子。在句中作状语，表示 “时间、条件、原因、伴随，方式或结果”等含义公司车辆管理规定，其位置比较灵活，可放于句首、句中或句末。
一、请仔细观察下列句子中独立结构的作用
1. 名词（代词）+ 现在分词
盘古的头发变成了什么The clock striking twelve, I went to bed. （表原因）
2. 名词（代词）+ 过去分词
He lay there on his back, his teeth t, his right hand clenched on his breast. （表伴随）
3. 名词（代词）+ 形容词短语 工作家
Her face pale with anger, she ro to go away. （表原因）
4. 名词（代词）+ 介词短语
广告合同范本Then, last night, I followed him here and climbed in, sword in hand. （表方式）
5. 名词（代词）+ 副词短语
Summer over, the students returned to school. （表原因）
二、请使用独立结构改写下列句子
1.Her eyes brimmed with tears and she left.
【答案】(Her) eyes brimming with tears, she left.
2.The boy stood there and his face was rigid with anger.
【答案】The boy stood there, his face rigid with anger.
3.I clasped my hands behind me and I was too shocked to say a word.
【答案】I was too shocked to say a word, my hands clasped behind me.
4.校园公益广告A girl came in with a book in her hand.
【答案】A girl came in, book in hand.
5.The manager sat quietly in the office and his eyes were clod.
【答案】The manager sat quietly in the office, (his ) eyes clod.
6.They sat in the room with the curtains drawn.
【答案】They sat in the room, the curtains drawn.
7.Oliver jumped up and his face was bright red with anger.
【答案】His face bright red with anger, Oliver jumped up.
8.Linda leapt to her feet and her eyes was blazing with anger.
【答案】Linda leapt to her feet, her eyes blazing with anger.
9.As we hugged Ruth good-bye, she said to me. Her tears was shining in her eyes.
【答案】As we hugged Ruth good-bye, she said to me, tears shining in her eyes.
10.He cried and his blue eyes was shining behind his glass.
【答案】He cried, his blue eyes shining behind his glass.
三、实战演练（2018年6月浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm hou listening to the frogs and
water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impresd to e my dad and Uncle Paul riding hors. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a ho ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a hor ride by mylf anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our hors, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam hou were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my hor. ___________________________________________
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We had no idea where we were and it got dark.___________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
什么的风景作文
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my hor. My hor reared into the air, let out a frightened whinny, and galloped off the track. I held on for dear life, branches lashing into my arms and face. Finally he slowed down, then stopped, but looking around at the endless a of trees, I knew we had gotten山水瀑布 hopelessly lost. I called and the only answer was the rustling of the wind in the trees. The hor meandered through the lonesome pines, with me continuing to call and scan the horizon for a familiar landmark, ears pricked for the sound of a hor or a human voice.
