读后续写微技能:人与动物精彩描写

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2020年7月浙江高考作文依旧很稳定,又是读后续写。2017年6月上演人狼大战,2018年6月骑马放羊,兔子来捣乱,2020年1月家庭与宠物狗的深情,2020年7月是关于北极熊的故事。
所以不难看出,读后续写出题人很喜欢以“人与动物”为主题进行读后续写的考查,今天为老师和学生们准备了读后续写有关“人与动物”方面的读后续写素材!
朱棣年号1
-THE FIRST-
关于狗的神态描写
How to make the dog in your writing vivid andeye-catching? 
1.Uponhis master’s arrival, the dog leapt tohis feet山西名胜古迹有哪些 ,snorted happily and bounded forward.电脑硬件(高兴狗狗)
2.The dog curled into a wet lump and lay shivering on theground. (可怜狗狗)
3.Aware of the immen danger, the crippled dog was doing impression of a corp. (胆怯狗狗)
4.He stretchedshook himlf and circled veral times before dropping to the ground.(伸个懒腰抖抖身,保证有个好睡眠)
5.猪的成语有哪些With pricked ears, he watched for a moment and then yawned. (警觉狗狗)
6. Lying on the ground,the dog kept his eyes wide open, ears flat,a vibrating growl deep in his chest.(别惹我,后果自负)
7.The dog wandered off to rest her nos in her paws.(我想静静,不想理你)
8.Dogs take much pleasure in rolling andrubbing their necks and backs with their paws.(调皮狗狗)
9.Seeing the meat in the master’s hand, the little dog wagged its tail and watched with hopeful eyes.(馋狗狗)
10.At the sight of a stranger approaching the hou, the dog watched himears uphead slightly cocked. (高度戒备狗狗)
11.The dog, when intently watching and slowly approaching the prey, 扁尾海蛇kept one of its fore-legs doubled up for a long time, ready for the next cautious step.(伺机一扑,成败在此一举)
12.Little puppies enjoy playing growling and biting each other’s faces and legs猫作文.(天真烂漫小可爱)
13.The dog got worried, crawling up around the old man’s feet as if to ek for safety and warmth. (好怕怕,别过来)
2
-THE SECOND-
人与动物的读后续写集锦
01
A heroic dog
Like most dogs who homes are situated on large plotsof land,one New Zealand dogregularly went off exploring through the farmland around his home forhours at a time.
But as Louie,asheepdog rescued from a shelter when he was just a puppy,got older,his trips got shorter andshorter.Now that Louie is 12 years old,hechoos to stay clo to home and hardly ever goes out to explore any more,which is why his family was soworried when he recently disappeared and didn't return home as usual.
“My mother was a little upt as he had stopped hiswandering,” said Marolyn Diver,who parentsown Louie.“Wewere very concerned that he might forget where his home was.” But thankfully,Louie turned up at the hou a fewhours later.“He looked so tired and had basically just collapd(崩溃),”Marolyn said.“We were concerned that someone might have hurt him.But then werealized there was a small noteattached to Lou
ie's collar.After readingthe note,I felt complete reliefand relaxed,and then my heartmelted.”向量的公式
“Louie is the hero of the day,” read the note,which was written by a neighborabout a mile away.“He led me to Maddy in distress stuck under a pile of branches.Cheers,Rob.” “According to Rob,Louie was waiting for him at hishou and demanded to be followed.Rob said that he was 100 percent sure thatLouie knew what he was doing,and leading him to Maddywas his pure focus,” Marolyn explained.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Once Rob found Maddy,Louiehelped him dig her out.                                                                                                             
Paragraph 2:
“That night we were very worried about Louie,” Marolyn said.                                                                                              
【参考范文】
中国的近代
Once Rob found Maddy,Louie helped him dig her out.According to Rob,Louie pulled at branches and dug her out of the ground.Rob said that as soon as Maddy was free,both dogs ran to a nearby pond and jumped into it and began to drink water.Then he gave Louie a huge handful ofdog biscuits as a thank-you.He knew that Louie might get introuble for being late for home,sohe thought he would write a small note to explain why Louie was abnt.
That night we were very worriedabout Louie,” Marolyn said.“He could hardlywalk and looked terrible.We were concerned that he might not make it through the night.” Thankfully,Louie was back to normal the next morning when Rob came by with Maddy for avisit.Marolyn said,“It has changed the way I look at him.And I think my parents feel the same way.I'm so proud of him.”

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