2023.2.20 高三英语培补资料
应用文写作之道歉信写作指导
道歉信是因为自己的过失或疏忽,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。
道歉信正文一般包括三段:第一段表明写信意图,对某事表示歉意;第二段说明道歉的具体原因(难点),提出弥补措施或建议;第三段再次表明歉意,请求对方谅解。
注意事项
(1)准确把握时态。道歉信一般使用三种时态:表示歉意或设法弥补过失时应该使用一般现在时或一般将来时,描述过去的错误或过失应以一般过去时为主。
(2)语气要诚恳,解释的理由要让对方能够接受。一封好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。所以写道歉信的语气要诚恳,态度要真诚,避免使用过分夸张、自责的表达;在解释完原因后,尽量提供一个合适的补救办法,使行文更加圆满。
(3)适当套用英文道歉信的常用词汇和句型,长短句要交替使用,适当使用高级句式(倒装,虚拟语气,定语从句,强调句型等)。
(4)道歉信的开头和结尾有一些惯用语,可以借用,使短文更加符合英文书信要求。
开头段写法
Dear Bob,
结茧 How are you doing? I am sorry I can not go to the bookstore with you this Saturday. Therefore, I am writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.
策略点睛:
1. 根据熟悉程度,选择得体的问候;2. 最好开门见山,借助套路表达目的;
3. 可以卡着要点适当添加细节,比如添加this Saturday这个细节。
中间段写法
此部分一段,具体呈现为:How I wish I could go with you! + 版本1或版本2 + 套路句
版本1:However,I am chon to reprent (代表)our school to take part in the English debate competition(辩论比赛). It is of great importance to me, for the reason that I have always been dreaming to have a chance like this to improve my spoken English.
版本2:However,I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.
套路句:As a conquence, I have no choice/alternative but to say sorry to you. I hope that change will not cau you too much trouble.
策略点睛:
1. 开头务必写上套路句How I wish I could go with you!承上启下。
2. 理由要合情合理,不能牵强;也不能影响到“再约时间”这个点的合理性。
3. 理由版本1属于复杂版,理由版本2属于简单版。如果字数实在写不多,可以在附加上最后补充的套路句
结尾段写法
此部分为一段,具体呈现为:How about going to the bookshop this Sunday? + 版本1或版本2+ 套路句。
版本1:Then both of us will be available and I can share my experience of the competition with you.
版本2:Then we can t out early so that we will have more time to lect books and read them. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, plea let me know what time suits you best. I will be available any time after school next week.
套路句: I am looking forward to your reply以及结尾句Yours, Li Hua
其它套路句;
1.I am terribly sorry that I am unable to ____. 将来不能做的事情
2.I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my failing to ____过去没有完成的事情.
3.I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apology. (第三段写)
必备词汇、语块
apologize v. 道歉 apology n. forgive v. 原谅 inconvenience n. 不便
智联简历appointment n. 约定 oversight n. 疏忽 engagement n. 约定
much to one’s regret 非常遗憾失信不立
apologize to sb. for sth. / make an apology to sb. for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
say sorry to 向……说对不起 accept my apology 接受我的道歉
forgive sb. for sth. 为某事原谅某人 have no intention to do sth. 并非故意做某事 make up for 弥补;赔偿 pay for / compensate for 赔偿;偿还
cau you much trouble 给你带来许多麻烦
make such a stupid mistake 犯这样愚蠢的错误老少乱牲
accept sb.’s sincere apology 接受某人真诚的道歉
miss the opportunity 错过机会 fix another time for 安排另外一个时间
keep to sb.’s word 遵守承诺 consider my situation 考虑我的情况
celebrate the precious moment 庆祝这珍贵的时刻
the final examinations 期末考试 a face-to-face talk 一次面谈
further one’s studies 进修;继续学习 pick sb. up at the airport 到机场接某人
at our appointed time 在我们约定的时间
I can’t spare time to do sth
假如你是李华,上学期你向外教Alex 借了一本书,未及时归还。现在Alex已经回到美国,请你给他写一封邮件表达歉意并告知归还事宜。邮件内容包括:1.表达歉意;2.说明原因;3.告知归还事宜。
范文1.
Dear Alex,
I’m writing to apologize for not returning the book (that/which) you lent me last term.
The truth(真实情况) is, I accidentally left the book at my uncle’s and it was not until yesterday that I realized the mistake. I will fly to New York next month as an exchange student so perhaps I can bring it to you in person if it is convenient for you. If the book is urgently needed, I can nd it to you by airmail.
Sorry again for all the trouble (that) I caud and looking forward to your reply.
范文2;
Dear Alex,
I hope you had a safe journey home. I am writing to say that I’m sorry for not giving you back the book Contemporary American Literature(书名是增加的细节), which I borrowed from you last term.
血糖仪品牌 Interested in American literature as(虽然,让步状语从句倒装) I have long been, the coming college entrance examination has left me no time to indulge(沉迷,沉溺于,indulge in sth) my passion. To be honest, I barely(刚刚) finished the book veral days ago. I will mail it to you tomorrow and hopefully, it will reach you next Friday.
Sorry again for all the trouble I have caud. Best wishes. 太平洋岛屿
我的叔叔其它原因;
1.因故不能参加外教明天晚上开设的关于“教师对学生的寄语中美文化差异”的讲座,询问是否愿意提供相关资料
I am deeply sorry that I have to miss your lecture on cultural differences between China and the United States tomorrow evening.