读后续写微技巧之“动作描写”
Part 1·构造动作链条的句式
一、A, B and C（连词连接动词们）
e.g.“她抱住儿子”抱住儿子 = 冲向前 新春对联大全+ 蹲下 + 一把抱住
She rushed forward, bent down and gathered her son into her arms.
“这个歌手唱歌” 歌手唱歌 = 扫视观众 + 深吸一口气 + 开始演唱
The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
二、使用非谓语
（1）-ing现在分词，凸显主动，同一对象同时发生不同的动作。
“老人静坐”老人静坐=坐在夕阳下 + 看报纸 + 听广播
The old man sat under the sunt, reading the newspaper and listening to the radio.
（2）-ed过去分词，凸显被动
“孩子们哭了”感动哭了= 被感动 + 哭了
Deeply moved by the story, the children began to cry.
Part 2
一、“笑”动作描写
1. smile v.&n.微笑
smile at sb./sth. 对..笑；smile with relief 宽慰地笑；smile sweetly 嫣然一笑；
smile from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
give a charming smile 迷人的微笑；crack a bright smile 绽放明亮的笑容；force a smile 强颜欢笑
2. laugh v.&n. 大笑
laugh a hearty laugh 开怀大笑；laugh behind their hands 用手捂着嘴笑；
explode with laughter=roar with laughter哄堂大笑；
burst into laughter=burst out laughing突然大笑起来；
roars of laughter 大笑
3. grin v.&n. 露齿而笑，咧着嘴笑
grin with delight6月节日 高兴的咧嘴而笑；grin from ear to ear 笑得合不拢嘴
4. giggle=chuckle v.&n. 咯咯笑
giggle at sb/sth 傻笑...；a fit of the giggles 一阵笑声
5. mock v.嘲笑
mock=laugh at=sneer at=make fun of
二、“哭”动作描写
weep-wept 抽泣；sob-sobbed 啜泣；
cry 大哭；wail 哀嚎、恸哭；squall v.嚎啕大哭
burst into tears=burst out crying 突然哭起来
fight back tears抑制住泪水
be clo to tears 快要哭了
形容老师的诗tears roll down/stream down one's cheeks 泪水顺着脸颊淌下来
tears cloud/fill/well up/brim one’s eyes 泪水模糊/溢出双眼
(His face/cheeks) be in tears=be filled with tears=be brimming with tears=be wet with tears 泪流满面
make somebody cry 让某人哭
sob one's heart out 痛彻心扉地哭
三、“说”动作描写
普通的说：（1）告诉tell sb sth=tell sth to sb
属牛的出生年份 （2）talk with /to sb about sth
（3）say=utter She sat on the sofa, saying….
（4）chat with sb 和sb聊天
嘟囔，低语：whisper/murmur/mumble（含糊地说）；
whisper sth to sb in a low voice
结结巴巴地说：stutter/stammer
问与答：ask询问/answer回答/reply to回复/respond to 回复
喊叫：call/shout/yell/cry out 哭喊/scream尖叫/exclaim惊叫/howl 嚎叫/roar 咆哮
呻吟：moan
哽咽：choke
叹气：sigh
其他的说：add补充说道/ continue继续说道/acknowledge 承认说
explain解释说/ state陈述说/mention 提到说/repeat 重复说
protest抗议说//insist 坚持说/sob哭诉说/complain 抱怨说
agree同意地说/comfort安慰说/persuade 劝说
announce/declare 宣布说
promi/assure 保证说
suggest/advice 建议说
四、“看”动作描写
看：look at sb/sth；e sb/sth doing 看到sb/sth正在做
盯：stare at sb/sth (with his eyes wide open ) （瞪大眼睛）盯着
glare at sb 怒目而视
瞥：glance at sb/sth；glance around 匆匆环视四周
glimp 一瞥；give a glimp of sb/sth
注意：notice sb/sth doing 注意到sb/sth正在做
观察：obrve；obrve carefully/with attention
发现：spot；sb/sth was spotted. 被发现
看见：catch sight of；lo sight of 看不见
sth came into sight. sth进入视野；sth is out of sight/in sight. sth看不见
五、身体部位动作描写
（一）头部动作描写
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1. He hung/dropped/lowered/bowed his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。
2. They nodded their heads 朝花夕拾in agreement. 他们点头同意。
3. She shook her head in disbelief. 她怀疑地摇摇头。
4. He scratched his head with a shy smile. 他害羞的笑着挠了挠头。
5. He put/held his head in his hands, greatly annoyed.他双手抱头，十分生气。
（二）脸部动作描写
1. eyes
坨坨
His eyes shone/sparkled/glimmered/glittered/twinkled with+excitement/pride等表示感情色彩的名词
His eyes were wide/grew wide/widened with horror. 他惊恐地瞪大了眼睛。
2. face/cheeks
Her face lighted up/brightened with excitement, . 当...，他的脸上焕发出了兴奋的光彩。
A bright smile appeared on/spread across/crosd韩非子五 his face. 他的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。
His face flushed/burned/turned red with embarrassment. 他窘得满脸通红。
He felt his cheeks burning with shame.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
He felt the blood rushing to his face. 他感觉到血液上涌。
