读后续写中刻画人物心理的五种方法（以性格魔水语料为例，以最新模拟题实战）
聚的组词是什么如何让续写更加走心？我认为激发读者的情感共鸣是最关键的。最便捷也是最常用的手法就是对心理活动的刻画。我以小说Personality Portion为例，谈谈刻画心理活动的五种途径。最后再实战一篇最新的模拟题。
第一种：虚幻法——用梦幻，巧妙地发出心灵的呼唤
知行合一议论文梦幻法，是借助梦境和幻觉的描绘来组织编写故事情节，表现渲染人物的内心世界，刻画和塑造人物形象的一种技法。梦境和幻觉表面上是荒唐的，短暂的，费解的，是违背客观事理的意念，实际上却是客观现实在人的思想意识中的一种折光反照，它所表达的内容和情景是深刻的，有着丰富的内含。
举例：
She wiped another one. The match was on fire and there was a light. The light fell on the wall, where it suddenly became as transparent as gauze, and she could e the room all the time. The table was covered with snow-white tablecloths, delicate plates and bowls, and
the roast goo filled with apples and plums was smelling.
Even better, the goo jumped off the plate, with knives and forks on its back, and swayed across the floor, all the way to the poor little girl. Then the match went out again, and there was only a thick and cold wall in front of her.
她又擦了一根。火柴燃起来了，发出亮光来了。亮光落在墙上，那儿忽然变得像薄纱那么透明，她可以一直看到屋里。桌上铺着雪白的台布，摆着精致的盘子和碗，肚子里填满了苹果和梅子的烤鹅正冒着香气。
更妙的是这只鹅从盘子里跳下来，背上插着刀和叉，摇摇摆摆地在地板上走着，一直向这个穷苦的小女孩走来。这时候，火柴又灭了，她面前只有一堵又厚又冷的墙。--------《卖火柴的小女孩》
虚幻法我细分为两种：
天蓝色的彼岸读后感1.想到和看到什么虚幻的景象。一个人的想象基本是被视觉触发的，正如上面的例子。（即：视觉，想法）
2.想到和感受到什么虚幻的景象。一个人的想象可能触发到身体部位的感受（即：视觉，感觉，触觉，嗅觉）。
以小说Personality portion为例：
1. In his imagination, he pictured what would happen next if he was Kit Kane.
Kit stood up and pulled Wicks out of his at by his jacket.
‘Why doncha pick on someone your own size, dogsbreath?’ he drawled.
‘D-d-don’t hurt me,’ stammered Wicks.
点评：Danny被人欺负后，幻想自己是书中的主句Kit会怎么猛揍Wicks。
2. He began to imagine himlf in the part of Bugsy. He’d borrow his dad’s old suit and wear a hat pulled down over one eye. He’d chew gum and talk in his Kit Kane accent.
点评：Danny幻想自己能担任校园剧的主角后的模样。
3. Danny felt scared but also reckless. It was as if the potion had relead a cork inside him.
点评：Danny想象魔水发挥了作用了。用了句型：It was as if…
4. He walked away feeling two metres tall. He had spoken to Laura Mills. After a whole year, he’d finally spoken to her. And she hadn’t laughed at him; she’d talked back.
点评：Danny想象自己两米高，并且想到和心爱的女神说话，那种开心无以言表。
5. Danny was next but one to read. He fingered the potion nervously. The bottle felt hot and sticky.
点评：Danny很紧张，感受到瓶子很烫手。
6. Danny tried to think about the words. But they emed to swim around like tadpoles on the page. Without the Personality Potion, he knew he couldn’t do it. He couldn’t even speak. His throat was dry and his face was burning up.
点评：Danny读剧本时非常紧张，感到文字就跟蝌蚪一样游来游去的，此时他觉得没有魔水，他什么也做不了，脸通红的。
这段不仅仅是虚幻想象，还有神情描写。
第二种：旁观
从旁叙述中采用第三人称的方式描写人物心理。在这种写法中，作者可以是“全知全能”的。因此，这种方式较少受到时间和空间的约束，作者可以根据自己想法的需要叙述。用第三人称写人物心理时，作者是站在观察者的角度来写的，所以对人物的情感倾向会表现得相对鲜明些，甚至可以进行即时的议论。
比如
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以《项链》为例，文中有这样一段话：
But sometimes，when her husband was at the office，she sat down near the window and she thought of that gay evening of long ago，of that ball where she had been so beautiful and so admired.
What would have happened if she had not lost that necklace？
Who knows？who knows？
How strange and changeful is life！How small a thing is needed to make or ruin us！
但是有时候，她丈夫办公去了，她一个人坐在窗前，就回想起当年那个舞会来，那个晚上，她多么美丽，多么使人倾倒啊！
要是那时候没有丢掉那挂项链，她现在是怎样一个境况呢？谁知道呢？谁知道呢？人生是多么奇怪，多么变幻无常啊，极细小的一件事可以败坏你，也可以成全你！
这里采用了从旁叙述的方式表现玛蒂尔德对以往的回忆与内心的起伏。请注意这样精彩的议论：“人生是多么奇怪，多么变幻无常啊，极细小的一件事可以败坏你，也可以或全你！”怎么起英文名
以小说Personality portion为例：
1. Danny didn’t know why he’d said that. He just felt angry inside. Angry with Wicks. Angr
y with himlf for looking stupid in front of everyone el.
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2. It was a great idea. But it wouldn’t work, mainly becau he knew he hadn’t the nerve to try for the part. The thought of standing up in front of everyone made him feel sick inside.
3. There was no doubt something had happened to him. His head didn’t droop and his eyes were brighter than usual. He didn’t even feel worried about the day ahead at school.
4. Danny didn’t have any time to think. Quickly, he fumbled for the Personality Potion and took a drink. If it really worked, he desperately needed it now.
第三种：直叙法
我分为两种：直接描写、内心独白
内心独白：一般使用第一人称，犹如电影中人物思考时的画外音，是直接倾吐衷肠、透露"心曲"的一个重要手段。有时会用“我感到……”、“我觉得……”、“我认为……”、“我想到…
…”、“我想……”、“我回忆……”、“我思索着……”、“我想起……”等带有标志性的词语来表达。但现在更多是没有这种标志了，通常是感叹句和疑问句等。
燃气具比如
在莎士比亚的《哈姆雷特》中，哈姆雷特那段著名的“生存还是毁灭”的内心独白，是他对于“生”和“死”的思考，表现了他内心的困惑，极具哲理性。
以小说Personality portion为例：
1. Danny thought about it all week. What could Uncle Hal do to help him get the part of Bugsy Malone?
2. He was wondering whether he looked different to other people. The Personality Potion was in his pocket --- just in ca he needed it again.
