审题注意事项:
1 gift 是 具体的、经过精心准备的、实物,才叫礼物。 ( 反例:陆心瑜 在运动会上,摔跤后,同学们给她的一个糖,这不是gift )
2 一定要选材好,可以升华的。
同学的选材:
案例1: a pet dog ——- learn about responsibility ; let sb become a person with a strong n of responsibility; I can learn that we shouuld be resonsible and respect all the living thing。 / share happiness and sadness / it is not only a gift but also my parents’ love for me. / make a difference to me 对我影响很大
案例2:a book which talks about some successful people’s experiences —-—-— all tho successful people have the same characters. Firstly, have goals and ambitions; condly, a strong will . Thirdly, work hard and never give up 。
案例3: electronic products: MP3, CD—player, a palm computer; --——- relax mylf ; enrich my knowledge;
案例4: a bike ———learn that I should never give up ; build up my body ;
范文1: 此篇是以张卓航同学的作文为基础,进行修改的,蓝色字体是赖老师加进去的,黑色部分是张卓航同学的原文。
As for me, it is no doubt that the best gift I’ve received is just a book named “ No Excu”。 It really makes a difference to me。
Last month, becau of the heavy burden of study, I felt stresd , tired and even lost the confidence in study.绪拼音 My father nt me this book as a gift after he noticed my change。 It was a book with a fantastic sunri on its cover。 On the first page are veral lines of my father’s words“Dear son, never lost heart and believe in yourlf。 I am proud of you.” He asked me to read it and I did it。 Gradually , I realize that as a Grade Nine student, I should try my best to realize my ambition. There was no excu for giving up。 i have no choice but to try it again and again if I fail.
It is so special becua the book is not only a gift but also my fathers’love for me。
范文2: 此篇是以赵心怡同学的作文为基础,进行修改的,蓝色字体是赖老师加进去的,黑色部分是赵心怡同学的原文. cf卡箱子
O教师感悟随笔n my thirteenth birthday, I received a book as a gift from my mum. 眼镜尺寸It is a book
named “ the crets of success”
it was a book with veral famous people on its cover. 一年级数字手抄报They wear confident smiles with books on their hands。 It mainly talks about why some people are successful, but others not. 我爱这土地pptAfter reading it, I find that tho successful people have the same characters(特征)。 Firstly, they have definite goals or ambitions . In addition, they have a stronger will than others and never give up 。 Thirdly, they are more hard—working than common people。
The book is so special becau the book gives me much courage and makes a difference to me. 免试研究生Since then, I have decided to change mylf。 I am thankful to my moth
er becau she nt me the best gift。
The best gift I have received
On my fourteenth birthday, my father nt me a bike as my birthday gift. It looks cool becau of its blue wheels. That day, my father began to teach me how to ride it。 At first, It was hard for me to controlled the bike. I fell down to the ground heavily and hurt mylf。 But my father encouraged me not to give up。 I succeeded after trying it again and again。 From then on, I ride my bike to school instead of taking a taxi。 It helps build up my body。
The gift is special and the best one I have received becau it is not only a common gift but also my father’s love for me. And from learning how to ride it, I learn that I shouuld never give up when I meet difficulties. What’s more , I become stronger and stronger by riding my bike to school。
The best gift I have received
On my fourteenth birthday, I received a fine alarm clock from my mum. At first I wondered why mum gave me such a kind of gift instead of a beautiful doll. Gradually I understood it. Now I come to realize it is the best gift that I've ever received。 轻乳酪芝士蛋糕
Every morning, the clock wakes me up at the time I t for on the night before。 Then I begin another pleasant new day with the English reading and morning exerci. I have had this faithful friend for three years so far. Every day the clock reminds me that I should always keep the time in order to be a responsible person. Besides, it never stops working and also teaches me that I should never waste time。 Time is precious and just as the saying goes, ”Time never returns when it is lost”。 I should save time right now to do something meaningful。 Thus as mentioned above/ For the reasons, I will cherish the best gift in the future。