专题21 短文改错
I、2021年高考真题
(2021·全国甲卷·短文改错)
Last week our teacher asked us to fill in a questionnaire. One of the questions are:Who will you go in times of trouble? Here are the results. Many students say they will talk to their friend or classmates becau they're of the same age and can understand each other. Some will turn out to their parents or teachers for help. Only a little choo to deal with the problems on our own. Their answers also show that they dislike talk to others. They kept very much to themlves. In my opinion, where in trouble, we should ek help from tho we trust mostly.
〖答 案〗
1.are→is
2.go后加to
报销单怎么填
3.friend→friends
4.删除turn后的out
5.little→few
6.our→their
7.talk→talking
8.kept→keep
9.where→when/whenever
10.mostly→most
〖解 析〗这是一篇说明文。文章介绍了关于学生在碰到问题后的解决方式的问卷调查结果。
1.考查主谓一致。句意:其中的一个问题是:你遇到麻烦时会去找谁?one of the +名词复
数,意为“……之一”,为单数含义,所以其后的系动词应用单数。结合句意,此处指问卷调查中的一个问题,所以为客观事实,时态用一般现在时。故are改为is。
2.考查介词。句意同上。短语go to sb.“求助于某人”相当于短语turn to sb. for help。故go后加to。
3.考查名词复数。句意:许多同学说他们会和他们的朋友说或同学讲,因为他们是同龄人,能彼此理解。friend“朋友”为可数名词,结合句中their,所以此处要用复数。故friend改为friends。
4.考查介词。句意:一些说他们会向他们的父母或老师求助。固定短语turn to sb. for help,意为“向某人求助”,所以此处删除介词out。故删除turn后的out。
5.考查代词。句意:只有一些人选择自己解决问题。结合上文“Many ”及“Some ”可知,此处指一些学生。student为可数名词,应用a few代指。a little通常代指不可数名词。故little改为few。
6.考查代词。句意同上。短语on one’s own,意为“独自”,结合句意可知,此处指学生们独
自完成,所以要用代词their。故our改为their。
7.考查非谓语动词。句意:他们的答 案也表明他们不喜欢和其他人说。固定短语dislike doing sth.,意为“不喜欢做某事”,doing为动名词作宾语。故talk改为talking。正能量的群名
8.考查时态。句意:他们很自闭。结合前文可知,文章的时态用一般现在时。所以此处的kept改为keep。故kept改为keep。
9.考查连词。句意:在我看来,当我们有麻烦时(无论什么时候我们有麻烦时),我们应该从我们最相信的人们那里寻求帮助。分析可知,本句为含有状语从句的复合句。主句为we should ,从句表示的含义为无论什么时候我们有麻烦或者当我们有麻烦时,所以应用when/whenever引导。故where改为when/whenever。
招引的近义词10.考查副词。句意同上。副词mostly,意为“大多数”;most意为“最”,此处指最相信的人,指程度。故mostly改为most。
(2021·全国乙卷·短文改错)
I love doing houwork. I always assist my parents in doing the dish after meals. I also water the flowers in the yard and tidying up my own bedroom whatever necessary. In my opinion, students can benefit a lot doing some houwork. Firstly, doing houwork was helpful for us to be a responsible person. Also, it gives our parents more time to do what they are like and it improves the family relationship. What’s most, doing houwork can be a form of mentally relaxation from study. That’s our view on houwork. And hopes this can inspire more thinking on the topic!
〖答 案〗
1. dish→dishes
2. tidying→tidy
3. whatever→whenever
4. doing前加from
5. was→is
6. 去掉are
7. most→more
8. mentally→mental
9. our→my
10. hopes→hope
〖解 析〗本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者对于做家务这件事的看法以及做家务会带来的好处。王尔德名言
1. 考查名词单复数。句意:饭后我总是帮助父母洗碗。固定短语“do the dishes”译为“洗餐具”。故将dish改为dishes。写春天的诗句
2. 考查动词。句意:我也给院子里的花浇水,必要时打扫我自己的卧室。分析句子结构以及并列连词and可知,此处tidy up是并列谓语。根据上文的“water the flowers”可知,句子要使用一般现在时。主语第一人称I,谓语动词用原型。故将tidying改为tidy。
3. 考查连词。句意:我也给院子里的花浇水,必要时打扫我自己的卧室。根据句意可知,此处表达“有必要时我也会打扫自己的卧室”,所以用whenever(无论何时)引导让步状语从句。故将whatever改为whenever。
4. 考查介词。句意:在我看来,学生可以从做家务中受益很多。固定短语“ ”译为“从……中获益”。故在doing前加from。
5. 考查时态。句意:首先,做家务有助于我们成为一个负责任的人。根据全文时态可知,本文陈述客观事实需要用一般现在时。主语doing houwork为单数,谓语也用单数。故将was改为is。
我的自白6. 考查动词。句意:同时,这也给了我们的父母更多的时间去做他们喜欢的事情,改善了家庭关系。根据句意可知,此处表达“去做他们喜欢的事情”,动词like译为“喜欢”满足句意;所以动词like前的系动词are多余。故删去are。
7. 考查固定搭配。句意:此外,做家务可以是一种从学习中获得精神放松的方式。固定短语“what’s more”译为“此外”。故将most改为more。
8. 考查形容词。句意:同时,这也给了我们的父母更多的时间去做他们喜欢的事情,改善了家庭关系。修饰名词relaxation(放松)需要用形容词。故将mentally改为mental。
9. 考查人称代词。句意:这是我对家务的看法。根据全文内容以及句意可知,此处表达“这是我对家务的看法”。故将our改为my。
10. 考查祈使句。句意:希望这能激发更多关于这个话题的思考!分析句子结构可知,此处为祈使句,所以动词hope需要用动词原形。故将hopes改为hope。
II、2021年高考模拟试题
(2021·成都三诊·短文改错)
I had a concert ticket for a show that I couldn't attend it. I was trying to ll the tickets. But I was having a hard time find someone who would pay the fully price. Then I noticed a guy at the door. He was not allowed get into the show becau someone had sold him the fake ticket. He got tricked! He had no more money. Rather than continue my arch about someone who would buy my ticket, I decide to give it to him for free. He was very g
rateful but thanked me again and again. This expensive, yet simple act of kind really made my day.
〖答 案〗
1.将attend后的it去掉;
2.tickets→ticket;
3.find→finding;
4.fully→full;
5.在get前加to;
6.the→a;
7.about→for;
ppt加视频
8.decide→decided;
9.but→and;
10.kind→kindness
〖解 析〗这是一篇记叙文。“我”因为无法去看演出而打算把票卖掉,却遇到一个因为买了假票而无法看演出的人,于是“我”把票免费送给了他。这让“我”和这个人都很开心。
1.考查定语从句。句意:我有一张演出的票,我不能去看。在定语从句中that已经指代了show,所以不需要用it。故将it去掉。