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The Hazards of Moviegoing
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I really find it annoying to go e movies anymore. Even though I love films, traffic to Cinema Six is awful. I hate looking for a parking place, the lot isn’t big enough for the theaters and other stores. You just keep driving to find a parking space and hoping someone will pull out and no one el will pull in ahead of you. Then you don’t want there to be a long line and to wind up in one of the first rows with this huge screen right in front of you. Then I’m in the theater with the smell of popcorn all around. Sitting there lling it trying to ignore it and just wanting to pour a whole bucket of popcorn with melted butter down my throat. I can’t stop thinking about the chocolate bars either. I love the stuff but I don’t need it. The people who are there sometimes drive me nuts. Talking and laughing, kids running around, packs of teens hollering, who can listen to the movie? And I might run into my old boyfriend – the last thing I need. Also sitting through all the previews and comm
ercials. If I arrive late enough to miss that junk the movie may be lled out.
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Although I love movies, I’ve found that there are drawbacks to moviegoing. One problem干粉灭火器的使用 is just the inconvenience of it all. To get to the theater, I have to drive for at least fifteen minutes, or more if traffic is bad. It can take forever to find a parking spot, and then I have to walk across a huge parking lot to the theater. There I encounter long lines, sold-out shows, and ever-increasing prices. And I hate sitting with my feet stuck to the floor becau of other people’s spilled snacks. 食欲减退河东节度使Another problem is my lack of lf-control at the theater. I often stuff mylf with unhealthy calorie-laden snacks. My choices might include a bucket of popcorn, a box of Milk Duds, a giant soda, or all three. The worst problem is some of the other moviegoers. Kids run up and down the aisle. Teenagers laugh and shout at the screen. People of all ages drop soda cups and popcorn tubs, cough and burp, and talk to one another. All in all, I would rather stay home and wait to e the latest movie hits on cable TV in the comfort of my own living room. (200 words)
Essay Writing
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Even though I love movie, my friends have stopped asking me to go. There are just too many problems involved in going to the movies
There are no small theaters anymore, I have to drive fifteen minutes to a big multiplex. Becau of a supermarket and restaurants, the parking lot is filled. I have to keep driving around to find a space. Then I have to stand in a long line. Hoping that they do not run out of tickets. Finally, I have to pay too much money for a ticket. Putting out that much money, I should not have to deal with a floor that ems coated with rubber cement. By the end of a movie, my shoes are often aled to a mix of spilled soda, bubble gun, and other stuff.
The theater offers temptations in the form of snacks I really don’t need. Like most of us I have to worry about weight gain. At home I do pretty well by simply watching what I keep
in the hou and not buying stuff that is bad for me. I can make do with healthy snacks becau there is nothing in the hou. Going to the theater is like spending my evening in a market that’s been equipped with a movie screen and there are ats which are comfortable. I try to persuade mylf to just have a diet soda. The smell of popcorn soon overcomes me. My friends are as bad as I am. Chocolate bars em to jump into your hands, I am eating enormous mouthfuls of milk duds. By the time I leave the theater I feel sick and tired of mylf.
Some of the other moviegoers are the worst problem. There are teenagers who try to impress their friends in one way or another. Little kids race up and down the aisles, giggling and laughing. Adults act as if they’re watching the movie at home. They talk loudly about the ages of the stars and give away the plot. Other people are dropping popcorn tubs or cups of crushed ice and soda on the floor. Also coughing a lot and doing other stuff.
I decided one night that I was not going to be a moviegoer anymore. I joined a local video store, and I’ll watch movies comfortable in my own living room. (390 words)
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The Hazards of Moviegoing
清正廉洁的故事I am a movie fanatic. My friends count on me to know movie trivia (who was the pigtailed little girl in E.T.: The Extra-terrestrial? Drew Barrymore) and to remember every big Oscar awarded since I was in grade school (best picture 1994? Forrest Gump). My friends, though, have stopped asking me if I want to go out to the movies. While I love movies as much as ever, the inconvenience of going out, the temptations of the theater, and the behavior of some patrons are reasons for me to wait and rent the video.
To begin with, I just don’t enjoy the general hassle of the evening. Since small local movie theaters are a thing of the past, I have to drive for fifteen minutes to get to the nearest multiplex. The parking lot is shared with veral restaurants and s supermarket, so it’s always jammed. I have to drive around at a snail’s pace until I spot another driver backing
out. Then it’s time to stand in an endless line, with the constant threat that tickets for the show I want will ll out. If we do get tickets, the theater will be so crowded that I won’t be able to sit with my friends, or we’ll have to sit in a front row gaping up at a giant screen. I have to shell out a ridiculous amount of money – up to $8 – for a ticket. That entitles me to sit while my shoes al themlves to a sticky floor coated with spilled soda, bubble gum, and crushed Raisinets.
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