2021 高考英语?短文改错?专题提分练
Correction 1(2021 北三省三校一模 )
A few years before, my family went to a afood festival in Florida. The food was delicious, the weather was lovely, but the boat ride was great. The last thing was to go on helicopter ride. My little sister was so young to go by herlf, so I volunteered to accompany with her on the ride. When I got into the helicopter, I attempt to clo the door. Airplanes have doors;so do a helicopter. Wrong!The pilot told me that there was no door as they went skywards. I had never been more frightening in my life. It’sa good thing which the ride lasted for only 15 minutes. No more air rides for me, I swear!
剖析：
①before 常与完成 用 ,ago 常与一般 去 用。句意 :几年前 ,我 全家去佛 里达参加了一次海 。
②海 好吃 ,天气很好 ,坐船的 也很棒。三个分句之 并列关系 ,而不是 折关系 ,故改 but
and。
③句意 :最后一件事就是乘坐直升机。 ride 在句中意 “乘坐 ;搭乘〞, 可数名 ,此 表示泛指 ,
故加冠 a。
④句意 :我妹妹太小 ,名人名句摘抄大全不能够单独前往 ,因此我主 提出陪她乘坐。 意 “太⋯⋯致使于不能够〞。
⑤ accompany“陪伴〞 及物 ,故直接跟 ,不用介 。
⑥由 When 引 的 状 从句中的 的 (一般 去 ),可推知主句 需用一
般 去 ,故将 attempt 改 动物会笑吗 attempted 。
⑦句意 : 机有 。直升机也有 。依照前一分句中的 have 可知本句用一般 在 ,第一号伤心人主 a
helicopter 第三人称 数 ,故将 do 改 does。
⑧“我〞和妹妹都在直升机上 ,因此用代 we 作主 。
⑨frightening 意 “吓人的 ;令人害怕的〞 ;frightened 意 “感觉害怕的〞 。 表示“感觉害怕的〞 , 故用形容 frightened 作表 。
⑩本句中 It 形式主 ,主 从句 真切的主 作文教学设计 ,由 that 引 主 从句。
Correction 2(2021重 七校第三次 断 )
The other day, as I walked to school, I pasd small construction area. It was not far away in my school. I notice a man bringing a bunch of things: shoes, blankets, some canned food, and clothing.Perhaps the items were gathered from his family and some of his friend. He started laying it down for people to take. Certainly, I was curious about what things would be going. But I rushed there after school. I saw that much of the items were taken by others. I have read lots of inspired stories of kindness. This is probably the sweetest act of kindness毛月亮’veI been witnesd so far.
老计
剖析：
①句意 :几天前 ,我走路去学校的 候 ,欢快的句子途 一 小建筑工地。 依照句意可知此 表示泛指 ,are
a(区
域 , 域 ) 可数名 ,故 small construction area 前加 a。半个月亮猜字谜
②far 固定短 ,意 “距离⋯⋯ 〞 ,故将 in 改 from 。
③依照首句中的 状 The other day 并 合 境可知 ,此 表达 去的 作 ,故用一般 去 。
④ 意 “⋯⋯中的一些〞 ,of 后接可数名 复数形式也许不能数名 。 friend 可数名
1
,故将 friend 改 friends。
⑤此 取代上文提到的 a bunch of things,在句中作 ,故将 it 改 them 。
⑥句意 :自然 ,我 事情如何 展很好奇。 what 在 从句中作主 、 等成分 ;how 在 从句中作方式状 。依照句意可知此 表示方式 ,故将 what 改 how。⑦作者 事情如何 展很好奇。 因此放学后匆促赶往那处。 两句之 因果关系而非 折关系 , 故将 But 改 So。
⑧ items 名 复数形式 ,故此 用 many。
⑨ inspired 优异的 ,激 人心的 ;inspiring 激励人心的。此 修 stories,故用 inspiring。
⑩witness 目睹 ;主 I 与 witness 之 主 关系 ,故将 been 除。
Correction 3(2021甘 掖第三次 断 )
Dear Lucy,
I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Zhangye for travel. Both my parents misd you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. May is best time of the year to visit Zhangye. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many place of interest I want to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local ch
arity. When you come, you can stay with ourlves. My hou is about three kilometers far away from Xianfu Street, where is full of local restaurants.
