7⽉1⽇托福独⽴写作范⽂当今媒体报道的新闻和过去相⽐缺少了准确性？
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本期独⽴作⽂供稿：章跃
校对：陈赫 & Chris Allen
7⽉1⽇托福独⽴写作题⽬
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新年的礼物
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Sometimes people think that nowadays the media (TV, newspapers, and the Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cau more problems than it brings benefits to the public.
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皇甫谧
陆军上将写作范⽂
wifi很慢[position: agree]造成近视的原因
The media dominatethe way people get informed. [引⼊话题的第⼀句话的信息量不要⼤，不要给读者制造信息压⼒，形式上可能是个短句]However, not all people believe what they e, read or hear from the media. [顺势引⼊话题的⽴意核⼼] As a matter of fact, many people questionthe credibility of media coverage, and the skepticism, which is justifiable, particularly prevails today. [然后简单展开]In fairness, inaccurate information is however not necessarily as deleteriousas is thought[语法现象：省略].
First, 中⼼句：not to demonizethe media[语法现象：不定式作⽬的状语], journalists may not tamper withinformation but omitthe step of fact checkbefore they publish a story.[中⼼句不宜信息太多太详细]Since[语法现象：原因状语从句]news is time-nsitive, particularly in this age whenpeople can hardly long maintain their interest in a matter, the media have to rush before their headlines are late, and they can hardly be meticulousin a hurry. Although tho mistakes are honest, they are still attributed to a lack of concern about the truth. By contrast, in the past decades, whenaudience would
wait patiently, reporters were able to write with precision of details[语法现象：介词短语作⽅式状语]and they did.中⼼句：Although it is unfair to deny the integrityof all the media, it is fair to maintain some doubt, asthere must be media crews that are insincere. Admittedly, a newspaper or a TV station, as a business, needs to make sales to survive; however, nowadays, some media are tooprofit-driventoemphasize the truthfulness of their coverage. The worst ca is that[语法现象：表语从句]some journalists, eing their job as a lucrativecareer rather than an honest profession,fabricatestories thatlland are only glad to e thatcirculationor viewership increas and that the business rakes in [rake in] money. [句型现象：长句] This situationwas less likely among past generations of journalists, who understood what true journalism is. The media ud to have the integrity and would never bendtheir work ethics—informingpeople ofbut only the truth — even thoughthey would lo financial gains.
送别友人的诗句
In terms of the effects, inaccurate information is indeed misleading, and if it is misinformation, it betraysthe public. However, under some circumstances, accuracy is counterproductive, and the media purpofully alterinformation,
However, under some circumstances, accuracy is counterproductive, and the media purpofully alterinformation, under the administration’s instructions, to stabilize a society. For example, the medi
a may lectively report details of natural disasters in order to curtailthe spread of negative emotions, which do not help.
In conclusion, nowadays, the media, including TV, newspapers, and the Internet, care less about the accuracy of news than in the past. They either make honest mistakesor lie. However, it is unfair to e only the downside.[总结全⽂的信息点的时候也不宜太细，笼统为宜。]
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