2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（三）
一：原文重现
Peter, a 5-year-old boy, showed such great interest in a shells that he would rush to pick them up with his 3-year-old sister, Shirley. They screamed out their joy as Peter collected his treasure into his pockets. For Peter, a shells lay shinning on the peaceful beach, waiting for him, just like stars twinkling (闪烁) in the sky. As waves touched them, they emed to be flowers blooming (绽放)in gentle wind.
One day, Peter was wandering through market with Shirley, with some shells in his pocket. Suddenly Peter found his younger sister was lagging (落后) behind. He stopped and looked back, finding Shirley was standing in front of a toy shop and was staring at something with great interest.
The boy went back to her and asked, “What do you want?” Shirley pointed at the doll, wearing a smile on her innocent face. Peter held his younger sister’s tiny hand, walking into
the shop. He tiptoed (踮起脚尖) to reach for the doll, and like a responsible elder brother, gave the precious doll to Shirley. Holding tightly the doll, the sister was very very happy.
The shopkeeper was watching everything and getting amud to e the matured (成熟的) behavior of the boy. Now the boy came to the counter and asked the shopkeeper, “How much does this doll cost, Sir?”
有虎的四字成语The shopkeeper was a cool man, who had suffered from something in his life. So he asked the boy with love and affection, “Well, what can you pay?” Peter reached into his clothes for money that was intended for the two little guys’ breakfast. Having counted the money, Peter put it carefully on the counter, asking again, “Sir, is it enough for my little sister’s doll?”
The amusing scene just in front of the shopkeeper eventually brought a smile on his face. Shaking his head slightly, he replied, “My boy, I am afraid it ems not to be enough.”
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好：
Paragraph 1:
With his eyes fixed on Peter’s pocket, he wondered what Peter would do.
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Paragraph 2:
Seeing Peter leaving happily with his sister holding the doll tightly, an assistant in that shop got surprid.
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二：文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了5岁的Peter和3岁的妹妹Shirley捡了一些贝壳，这
些贝壳对Peter来说很珍贵。一天，他们闲逛时，Shirley被玩具店里的洋娃娃吸引了，Peter把洋娃娃拿给了Shirley，并前去付钱。老板看着这一切，感到有趣之余还想看看Peter在钱不够的情况下是否愿意舍弃他喜爱的贝壳。最后，好心的老板只收了Peter两个贝壳。
1.段落续写：
①.由第一段首句内容“他的眼睛盯着Peter的口袋，想知道Peter会做什么。”可知，第一段可描写Peter下定决心拿出来口袋里所有的贝壳，老板只收了他两个贝壳。
②.由第二段首句内容“看到Peter高兴地和紧紧抱着洋娃娃的妹妹离开，店里的一个员工感到很惊讶。”可知，第二段可描写Peter和妹妹离开，店员感到很惊讶，老板解释了原因。
2.续写线索：Peter犹豫——拿出贝壳——老板退钱——兄妹离开——店员惊讶——老板解释。
3.词汇激活
行为类
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ps复制图层快捷键①.下决心：make up one’s mind/ make a decision
②.买：buy/ purcha
情绪类
①.高兴地：happily/ joyfully/ gladly
②.惊讶的：shocked/ surprid/ amazed
高分句型
1. He took out all the shells from his pocket, giving them to the shopkeeper, who took them and started to count as if he had been counting the money. （由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句和由连接词as if引导的虚拟句）
2. Peter put tho shells back into his pocket very happily, leaving with Shirley holding the doll tightly. （由现在分词作状语）
3. When he grows up, he will remember he purchad a doll for his sister with the shells from a shopkeeper.（由连接词when引导时间状语从句）
三：续写单句训练
1.他的眼睛盯着彼得的口袋，不知道彼得会怎么办。
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2.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。
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3.过了一会儿，他似乎下定了主意。
4.他从口袋里掏出所有的贝壳，交给店主，店主拿来，开始数，好像他在数钱似的。
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5.然后他看了看彼得。彼得问他，“现在就够了吗？”店主回答说：“这些够了。”
忍辱负重的意思6.说着，他只放了两枚炮弹，剩下的钱还了回去。
7.彼得很高兴地把那些炮弹放回口袋，离开了，雪莉紧紧地抱着洋娃娃。
8.看到彼得高兴地离开，妹妹紧紧地抱着娃娃，那家店里的一个助手吃了一惊。
9.他问店主，“先生！”你只收他们两个炮弹费用吗？
梦见老公有外遇10.店主微笑着说：“对我们来说，这些都是贝壳，但对那个男孩来说，它们都是珍宝。”
