2023届高三二轮读后续写下水作文讲义
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The first time we t eyes on “Big 最不值钱的货币Red”, father, mother and I were on our way home. As we pasd the Eaton's department store's window, we stopped as usual to have a look and do a bit of dreaming.
The beautifully decorated window display held the best toys ever. There were dolls much too pretty to play with. And they all lay beneath a surprisingly fantastic dress. Mother's eyes were glued to its shining red satin（缎子）.
“My goodness,” she whispered. “Look, at that!” Then, mother looked down at her own coat -she had worn the heavy grey wool coat every winter for as long as I could remember. Mom was forever doing chores-washing laundry, tending the pigs and working in the garden-so she always wore houdress and an apron （围裙） to protect the front. She did have one or two “special” dress saved for church on Sundays. Also, she managed to make alm
ost all of our clothes. They weren't fancy, but they were comfortable.
“What a silly dress!” She shook her head. “Who on earth would want such a big dress?” As we continued down the street, mother turned her head for one more look. “My goodness! You'd think they'd display something a person could u!”
Mother's Day was nearing, and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mother, of all people, was not one to spend money on items that were not practical. “There are things we need more than this.” She’d always say. Choosing a gift for Mother's Day for her was quite hard. When Dad and I asked, she thought carefully then asked for some tea towels, face cloths or a new basin.
On our last trip to town before Mother's Day, we were driving up Main Street when Mother suddenly shouted in surpri: “Look!” She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton's. “That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief. “Who'd be fool enough to buy such a dress?” Mother questioned， shaking her head. I was almost certain that I noticed a trace of longing（一丝渴望）in her voice.
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On the morning of Mother's Day, Mother got a large box that read “Eaton's Finest Basin” on its wrapping paper.
“”She choked up and couldn't say a word, tears welling up in her eyes.
文章大意：
鱿鱼怎么炒好吃这是一篇典型的描写家庭关系的记叙文。作者“我”从家中的孩子的视角（第一人称叙事），讲述了爸爸为勤劳俭朴的妈妈悄悄购买她喜欢的红色连衣裙，并当作母亲节礼物送给她的家庭生活故事。
文本分析：
迅速发生1. 确定故事结局：长寿米粉 幸福感人的结局
2. 确定主要人物： 妈妈和爸爸
卤肉酱3. 确定写作视角：“我” 家中的孩子（事件的经历者）
语言积累：
急切打开礼物
She eagerly unwrapped the box and opened it.
惊讶
To her surpri, it was not a basin, but the beautiful red dress she had admired in the Eaton’s department store三国杀曹仁 window.
She gasped, speechless, running her fingers over the soft 红酒可以做什么菜satin fabric."I can't believe it!" Mom exclaimed.浇水施肥
我和爸爸的祝贺
Dad winked at me,（爸爸的小表情） and I knew that he had gone to great lengths to get this dress for Mom. "Happy Mother's Day my darling" Dad said, giving her a kiss.
妈妈感动
Mom was speechless and I noticed that her eyes were filled with tears of joy.
妈妈的感谢
Mom hugged Dad tightly, and I saw tears streaming down her cheeks. "Thank you, Frank," she whispered. "You're the best husband and father in the world."
结尾句
I realized that this was the best gift Mom had ever received. And with that, we all hugged, basking in the warmth of our family's love.
范文：
On the morning of Mother's Day, Mother got a large box that read “Eaton's Finest Basin” on its wrapping paper. "Oh Frank," she praid, "just what I wanted!" Dad was sitting in his rocker, a huge grin on his face. "Only a fool wouldn't give a priceless wife like mine exactly what she wants for Mother's Day," he laughed. "Go ahead, open it up and make sure there are no chips." Dad winked at me, confirming his cret, and my heart filled with more love for my father than I thought it could hold! Mother opened the box to find a big white enamel dishpan - overflowing with crimson satin that spilled out across her lap. With trembling hands she touched the elegant material of Big Red.
