扩句的方法
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在学习扩句法之前,先对学生进行五个简单句句型,并列句和复合句的专项训练,打好基础。扩句是在基本句型的基础上,添加各种修饰成分,使句子得到扩展,即根据表达的需求增加定语,状语,同位语等成分,或者举例子补充细节外甥侄子内容,或者添加谚语俗语品牌包有哪些牌子等。
1 1. We arrived in Sanya.
----- We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly. (添加副词)
2 2. I like to make friends with my classmates.
------ I like to make friends with my classmates, who have the same interest as mine. (添加定语从句)
3 3. We were happy and returned home.
------- We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.(添加状语从句)
4 4. I like reading books.
------- I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.(通过举例补充细节)
5 5. We should study hard.
-------- As we all know, “Practice makes perfect”. So we should study hard.(添加谚语)
6 6. I often join in many activities.
-------- I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind. (添加目的状语)
三. 具体应用
试题要求:假如你是一名中学生,请以My colorful school life为题,写一篇短文。要求100个字左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总数。
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要点提示:1:上课认真听讲
2:课后完成作业
3:经常参加体育锻炼
4:去图书馆阅读
I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard.
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May there always be colorful life around my school.
学生的习作:
I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard.
魔鬼蛙 I listen to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exerci. I often read in the school library.
May there always be colorful life around my school.
点评:该学生能完整的写出各个要点,没有出现太大的语法错误,表达通顺,单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够,没有达到100个字左右,字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问题。其次,句子的表达过于平淡无奇,没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇,固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。而且,没有使用连接词,上下文的连接不够顺畅。
改进方法:
步骤一:列要点
把要写的内容要点化,做到要点齐全。
1: Listen to the teacher carefully
2: finish my homework
3:take part in exerci
4: often read in the library
步骤二:造简单句
充分利用五个简单句句型对各个要点进行补充,使其变成一个完整的句子。每个句子都要注意句子成分的完整性,语法是否正确,说法是否符合英语表达习惯。
1: I listen to the teacher carefully in the class.
2: I finish my homework after class.
3: I often take part in exerci with my classmates.
4: I do some reading in the school library.
步骤三:扩展句子
1: I listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.(增加目的状语从句)
4、如何借助大熊座找到北极星?(P58)东部季风区 2: I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of cake for me.暖奶器(增加定语从句)
第一单元 微小世界 3: I often take part in exerci with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming and
playing badminton etc.(举例说明)
4: I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.紫色包菜(增加时间状语从句)
步骤四:润色句子
根据高考(海南)英语作文评分细则,第五档的要求:24-25分,至少有3个复杂句,2
种从句形式,语气自然,敬语得体,无中式英语,语言基本功扎实,词汇丰富。这就要求我们在谴词造句方面下工夫。“润色句子包括词语的选择与句型的运用。” 比如可以用高级词汇,短语和固定搭配来替换一般词汇。增加习惯表达句式,倒装句,it当形式主语和形式宾语,非谓语动词等,使用多种句式,使其多样化。
7、我们每个人应该怎样保护身边的环境? 1: It is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. (把第一句换成it当形式主语的用法,使句式多样化。)
2: I take homework riously and finish it in time, which is a piece of cake for me.(增加了take…riously和in time两个短语,是句子更加生动)
六年级下册科学复习资料 3: In order to strengthen my body, I often take part in different kinds of exercis with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing badminton etc.(增加了in order to do sth目的状语和different kinds of使句子的意思更完整。)