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主题:大学生使用信用卡 
  On Credit Card 
  At prent, a wide vareity of credit cards issuedissued详细»
n. 发布日期
v. 发布,发行(issue的过去分词形式)
adj. 发行的
by major banks and shopping malls are thriving in colleges and universities across the nation, with a multitude of college students making up a growing population of card holders. Indeed, one out of five students is estimated to be in posssion of at least one credit card, and the figure is expected to be on the steady incre, the latest data published by Yangtze Evening Post suggests 
  Like anything prior to the emergence of this small piece of plastic, the increasing popularity of credit card on campus has both bright and dark sides. On the one hand, young adults in college, free from the trouble of pocketing a considerable sum of cash, could enjoy the convenience of credit cards and purcha expensive goods by installmentsissued详细»
n. 发布日期
v. 发布,发行(issue的过去分词形式)
当你听我说adj. 发行的
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On the other hand, however, the irresponsible and excessive u of the cards by the youngsters, the majority of whom are fresh out of middle school incapable of budgeting their money, can make them heavily in debt which will take them years to pay off 
  On my personal level, while enjoying a host of conveniences the credit card may bring, we couldnt afford to ignore a conspicious fact: in most cas, parents are our sole financial sources.Instead of spending without any restrict, we are suppod to put studies on the top of our agenda and move ourlves beyond heavy dependence upon our parents
主题:环保 
  观点对比题 
热干面的味道  Economic Development and Environmental Protection 
  1.有人认为经济发展先于环境保护; 
  2.有人环境保护先于经济发展; 
  3.我的看法。 
  [范文] 
  There are some individuals who argue that, compared to the environment protection, the top priority is suppod to given to economic development. They deem that environmental problems are inevitable and unavoidable in the process of economic development. They are only the by products of economic development, which can be handled later when we have the time and money. 
  However, other individuals hold different opinions that(或者:other holders of the opposite opinions argue that ) environment protection should be attached more importance than economic development in that prent rious environmental problems will threaten the health of the residents and hinder the advance of the economy. 
  As far as I am concerned, environmental protection and economic development can coexist in parallel and can stay in harmony(和谐). Our ultimate(最终的) aim in economic development is to provide a comfortable and happy life for our people. What is the point of economic development if we achieve it at the cost of our environment? There has been much evidence to prove that a balance between the two helps more rapid and continuous development of the society.
话题:旅游 
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and ba your composition on the outline (given in Chine) below: 
  1)有的人喜欢独自旅行,有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行 
  2)两种旅行方式的好处 
  3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式,为什么? 
  中医理论Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? 
  ___________________________________________________ 
  _______________________________________________________ 
  ____________________________________________________ 
  行文思路 
  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式,提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处,提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文 
  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好:有人喜欢独自旅行,有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式,并说明理由。 
  高分范文 
  Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? 
  [1]When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. [2]Some people like to travel alone, [2]while others prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Of cour, everyone has his consideration for his preference. 
 太空趣事 [4]Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom(自由). The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring others. [3]Moreover而且,此外, traveling alone [5]tend to bring the traveler [6]unexpected surpri, [7]such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. [8]Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. [3]For one thing, the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. [3]For another, [4]traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them.变调夹 
  [9]As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. [3]Secondly, I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. [3]In sum, [10]both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one. 
  亮点点评 
  [1]“当涉及到或谈到…时”。 
  [2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。 
  [3]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 
  [4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。 
  [5]“倾向,趋于”。 
  [6]“意外的惊喜”。 
  [7]表示列举。 
  [8]“和…相比”。 
  [9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。 
  [10]“或者…,或者”。 
  佳句临摩 
  1.佳句:When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions.
  临摩:当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时,人们的看法各不相同。 
  ____________________________________________. 
  2.佳句:Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. 
  临摩:和城市相比,乡村的经济相对落后。 
  3>___________________________________________. 
  3.佳句:Both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one. 
  临摩:网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点,因此,我们应该将二者相结合。 
  _____________________________________. 
  KEY: 
  1. When it comes to whether we should cancel the golden week holiday, different people will offer different opinions. 
  2. Compared with the cities, the countryside is relatively backward in economy. 
  3. Both network teaching and traditional school teaching have their advantages. Therefore, we should combine the two teaching ways 
主题:电影和电视对公众的影响力 
  【题目】 
  How do movies or television influence peoples behavior? U reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 
  【范文】 The Influence of Television and Movies 
  There is no doubt that watching television and movies can influence the way that people behave. Moreover it ems that people are spending more and more time watching some sort of visual entertainment whether it is television a video tape or a DVD. Therefore the effects of visual media cannot be ignored. 
  One obvious effect of the media is that watching them induces people to buy certain products(产品) Television advertising is widespread and nowadays even movie theaters permit(准许) advertiments. Another way TV and the movies affect people is 聊乘化以归尽
that they give people either a broader view of the world or a distorted one depending on what type of program they watch. Tho who watch news and educational program can learn many new things while tho who watch primarily(最初的)entertainment shows may come to believe that most people in the world posss great wealth and good looks. It may make them become dissatisfied with (对什么不满意)their own lives. Finally perhaps the most susceptible viewers are children who may be unable to tell fact from fiction and may try to imitate acts that they e on TV or in the movies. 
  With the ever-increasing popularity of video entertainment society must pay attention to (注意)the effects(影响). Television and movies while entertaining and informative cannot take the place of real experience.(不能取代现实的生活)
 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the university president. You should write at least 120 words bad on the outline given below in Chine: 
  1. 学校教学应该注重学生学习方法的培养。 
  2. 学校应该丰富学生的校园生活 
  【范文】 
  A Letter to the University President 
  Dear Sir, 
  I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning our teaching and campus life. 
  As a sophomore from the Math Department, I am quite satisfied with the prent condition of my university, but I like to say that there is still some room for improvement. 
  First, I believe that more attention should be paid to the guidance of our studymethods. To some extent, university students are capable of studying by themlves, but more often than never, we find ourlves at a loss as to choo good books to read and appropriate topics for our rearch. It is clear that we need some advice from our teachers. If our teachers can lecture more on how to learn by yourlf for us, especially for the freshmen, our skills will be further improved. 
  Second, more activities should be conducted to make our campus life more colorful. I sorry to say that the prent life on campus is quite boring最美老师. Every day we have class,(
上课) read in the library(图书管里阅读), or stay in the dormitory(呆在寝室). Life here is routine. We need more meaningful activities organized to enrich our college life and enable us to study more efficiently. 
  I hope you can consider my suggestions. Thank you. 
  Yours sincerely 
  Li Ming

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