读后续写〔Continuation writing〕
读后续写。阅读下面的短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Exerci 41
The bus was already fifteen minutes late. "Maybe I just won't go to work today," Mary said to herlf. But she knew she didn't mean it. She couldn't afford to miss work一with two children to feed. Since her divorce, it took every penny she made just to survive. That's why she and the children had moved to the country where rents were cheaper.
Mary was watching the birds flying freely when a strange flying lizard ship landed right in front of her. It was making a low humming sound. Then she heard a loud sound. Out came a long ramp. Mary hid her face in her hands, frightened.
Next she heard a hissing sound. Then all was quiet. Mary opened her eyes. She couldn't believe what she saw.
A woman in a gleaming silver bodysuit was standing in front of her with a small box, smiling softly,
"Are you Chon?" Mary heard.
“What?〞 Mary asked.
"Are you Chon?" the question came again.
Mary stared.
“I have gifts for Chon," the woman said. She opened the box.
“What is it?" Mary asked.,
“It is gold for Chon. 〞
“But I am not Chon," Mary said. "My name is Mary. Who are you? And where are you from?〞
Without saying anything, the woman clod the box and walked back up the ramp. Mary heard the low humming sound again as the ship disappeared.
Mary started to run, eager to tell someone— anyone—about what had happened. But would they believe her?
Then again a woman from another blue lizard Ship brought diamonds for Chon. Mary replied that she was Mary.
Quickly, the woman was gone. Mary was beside herlf. Anyone she told her story would think that she was crazy. Walking towards her hou, Mary again heard the familiar sound. When the ship landed, two women went down the ramp and came forward. Mary was no longer afraid.
"Who are you?〞 asked the women. Mary looked at the boxes they were carrying. She thought of the other two boxes, filled with gold and diamonds.
"My name is Chon,〞 Mary answered.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
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犯人李铜钟的故事In the following days, Mary received “ Gifts for Chon" one after another, but one day she saw a woman from the same lizard ship nding a gift for Mary. |
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一． 试题详解
1 .核心内容
主人公Mary生活艰辛、经济拮据，两次遇到离奇事情—— 一艘神奇飞船寻找Chon,接连给Chon送来金子和钻石。Mary如实答复，否认自己是Chon。两次否认之后，Mary经过惊讶、害怕、冲动的内心斗争后平静下来，到第三次遇到飞船赠送礼物时，她改以肯定的答复，冒充是Chon。
2.写作思路
(1)明确故事人物关系(characters)：主人公Mary、飞船送礼物的两位女士及贵重礼物的赠送对象Chon。
(2)理清故事主要事件(events)：Mary小鹦鹉怎么养生活艰辛；飞船两次给Chon重阳节是干什么的送礼；Mary冒充Chon接受礼物。电视剧演员表
(3)根据人物、事件及续写段落首句预测故事开展(development)：原文营造了科幻的神秘
气氛，情节简单，但布下重重悬念：谁是Chon?为什么送给Chon各种珍贵的礼物？送礼物的人又是谁，来自何方？当Mary冒充Chon时，故事戛然而止，这样的结尾既出人意料又折射人性，扣人心弦又意味深长。故事的总体开展应该是Mary假冒Chon成功，接连收到礼物后，她很可能忘记了自己的真实身份，当有一天真的给Mary送来礼物时，也有人冒名顶替了她。续写第一段：两个女士走近冒充Chon的记性越来越差Mary,将礼物递给她，Mary接过礼物后，内心应该很矛盾，可以写她当时的复杂心理活动等。续写第二段:Mary接连收到来自飞船的礼物，突然有一天是真正给Mary的礼物，可以写这次礼物不同以往，譬如幸福、快乐等一一正是Mary最想要的。可以挖苦地写她自己冒名顶替了别人，也有人冒名顶替了她，自己最想要的已无法得到了。
(4)结合下划线词罗列写作要点(points)：结合下划线词和文本内容，展开尽可能丰富的想象，罗列出尽可能多的故事开展情节。例如，第一段可以通过以下提问来获取写作要点：What did the two women give Mary? How did Mary respond to the gift? With the unexpected fortune, what future life would Mary live? What would other people think about her windfalls?第二段也可以通过提问获取续写要点:After receiving many gifts one after another, how did Mary feel? What was the gift for Mary about? Could she still get wh
at she wanted?
二． 参考范文
The two women came clor to Mary, smiling softly. "Gold and diamonds for Chon," They said when they handed the boxes to Mary. Staring at the fortune, Mary suddenly became wordless becau of joy and surpri. Before she could respond, they disappeared. "I'm rich now. I don't need that tiring work and stupid bus 〞Mary said to herlf. However, her excitement lasted only for a whilewhen a n of worry filled her mind. What would others think about her windfalls?
In the following days, 英语笔记本Mary received“Gifts for Chonone〞 one after another, but one day she saw a woman from the same lizard ship nding a gift for Mary. Tired of so much fortune, Mary didn't care about this kind of gifts. A young lady hurried outside. "Who are you?" the woman asked. "My name is Mary." The lady answered. "'Love for Mary. " The woman opened the box. An angel slowly flew out from it. "Stop it!" the lady shouted, “I am not Mary! Stop giving me tho uless happiness or love. Why don't you nd me some
gold or diamonds?〞 At that moment, how much Mary wished she herlf were Mary!
