专题09 读后续写：修辞手法升级（解析版）
一、simile明喻
Part 1：by using simile marker “like”——用like作喻词
1. The smile on her face shone like a diamond. （情感描写）
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
2. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.（情感描写）
我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。
3. The scenery along the journey is just like a breath-taking landscape painting. (景物描写)
沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。
4. The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(景物描写)
众说纷纭的意思
寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。
5. Clusters of stars decorated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.(景物描写)
繁星像珊珊发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。
【小试牛刀】
1. 这本书陪伴了我很久就像一位我的老朋友似的。
2. 他茫然地看着我就像一个傻子。
3. 他就像一头疯牛一样冲我吼。（mad cow）
4. 他非常着急就像热锅上的蚂蚁一样。
5. 他僵在那里一动不动就像一块石头。
【参考答案】
1. The book has accompanied me for quite a long time like an old friend.
2. He looked at me blankly like a fool.
3. He shouted at me like a mad cow.
4. He is anxious like an ant on a hot pan.
5. He stood still like a stone.
五一口号Part 2：by using simile marker “as...as”——用as..as作喻词
1. The smile on her face was as vibrant as the sun on a summer day（情感描写）
她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。
2. Father rushed to his son's school, only to discover the building was as flat as pancake煎饼.(景物描写)
父亲冲到儿子的学校后，才发现这座建筑已经变成一片废墟。
3. I reached out to touch her face, which was as cold as the ice. (人物描写)
我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。
更多搭配：梦见自己杀鸡
as busy as a bee 忙忙碌碌
as hungry as a wolf 饥肠辘辘
儿歌彩虹的约定as proud as a peacock 傲如孔雀
as brave as a lion 勇猛如狮
as pretty as a picture 美如画
【小试牛刀】
1. 我的心和蜂蜜一样甜。
2. 他的心和石头一样硬。
3. 他的身体和牛一样壮实。
4. 我们面前的景色美如一幅画。
5. 这辆公交车走的像蜗牛一样慢。
【参考答案】
1. My heart is as sweet as honey.
2. His heart is as hard as a stone.凉拌海蜇头的做法
3. His body is as strong as a cow.
4. The scenery before us is as beautiful as a picture.
5. The bus went as slowly as a snail.
Part 3：by using simile marker “as if”——用as if作喻词
1.Mrs Sather looked at my eyes as if (she were) eing my inner lf locked away inside. （动作描写）
Sather老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。
2. She swept her son into her arms with her eyes wet as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out of him.（动作描写）
她眼睛湿润，把儿子拥进怀里，仿佛想把他的呼吸挤出来。
3.Her hair grew greyer and greyer, as if( it were )covered with snow and frost.
（肖像描写）
他的头发越来越白了，简直像盖了一头皑皑的霜雪。
4. She felt as if her heart had been ripped from her body.（情感描写）
她感觉自己心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。
【小试牛刀】
1. 他感觉彷佛整个世界都崩塌了。
2. 他在操场上自由地奔跑彷佛他是一只快乐的小鸟。
3. 他无辜地看着我好像他什么都不知道似的。
4. 他感觉他的心脏被刀子捅了一刀。（stab）
【参考答案】
1. He felt as if the whole world had fallen apart on him.
2. He was running on the sports field as if he was a happy bird.
3. He looked at me innocently as if he didn't know anything.
4. He felt as if his heart had been stabbed by a knife.
二、metaphor暗喻
暗喻是比喻修辞的一种，用一种事物比喻另一种事物，本体喻体都出现，中间常用喻词“是”等连接，有时不用喻词。暗喻的典型形式为：甲是乙，而不用like, as等喻词。
Money sometimes is a poison.
钱有时候是一种毒药。
Part 1：by using the link word “be”——通过be动词联系
1. Her hair was a flowing golden river streaming down her shoulders. （肖像描写）
她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。
2. The beautiful park was a scented carpet of color.(景物描写)
美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。
3. Stop being such a baby. (人物描写)
别这么幼稚好不好。
4. Life is an unexplored river. full of twists and turns.(哲理)
生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。
Part 2：by using the verbs——通过动词联系
1. I felt a lump in my throat, tearing welling up in my eyes.（情感描写）
我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。
2. He doesn't have an idea of his own. He just parrots what other people say.(人物描写)
他没有自己的观点，只会鹦鹉学舌。
3. A heavy silence blanketed the room.（环境描写）
整个房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。
4. The boy wolfed down the food.（动作描写）
小男孩狼吞虎咽。
找出下面句子里面的修辞
1. My very thought was like the ghostly rustle of dead leaves.
2.He looked as if he had just stepped out of my book of fairy tales.
3. Wind and rain now whipped（鞭打） the hou.
参考答案：1. 明喻 2.明喻 3. 暗喻
找出下面句子里面的修辞
1. My mother is like a coat in winter, offering warmth to me.
2.The wind sounded like a roar of a train passing by.
3. Houhold and medical supplies streamed in by plane, train, truck and car.
参考答案：1. 明喻 2. 明喻 3. 暗喻
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三、personification拟人
Part 1：把自然现象当作人来描写
1. The wind stood up and gave a shout . (景物描写)
大风凛冽，发出怒吼。
2. The breeze gently kisd her cheeks. (景物描写)
微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。
3. The feathery snowflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.(景物描写)
玩真心话大冒险问什么好
鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。
4.The mist swallowed him up. (景物描写)
薄雾把他包围起来。
关于革命的诗5.The icy wind started howling, stinging my face.(景物描写)
寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
