2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼(认真是什么意思十三)
一:原文重现
Pam Bales planned a six-hour hike through New Hampshire^ Mount. On the dashboard (汽车仪表板) was a detailed plan ensuring she could return before the arrival of some forecasted bad weather. Different from former hike, though, this time, she had packed for almost every accident and intended to walk alone.
At about , she'd checked the weather forecast. Bales knew from experience that her hike was realistic. Besides, she had two emergency plans and extra layers of clothing to better protect her core temperature as conditions changed.
Bales felt excited as she walked up into snowy paths. She was wearing a fleece tank top (绒衣)and hiking pants, and no gloves or hat becau the air was mild. Thirty minutes later, she climbed into colder air and deeper snows. She now was in a quarter-zip fleece top and gloves. At ? the weather was showing its teeth. Bales added more layers to
resist cold winds and den fog. Making her way across the snow-covered ridge, she noticed something: a single t of footprints made by a pair of sneakers. Not giving them much thought, she walked on.
By ? Bales was getting cold. She decided to return to her car. On her way down, she again spotted the sneaker tracks, which suddenly made a hard left-hand turn off the trail. Now she felt genuinely alarmed. She was sure the hiker lost his way in the low visibility. If Bales continued to follow the tracks, she'd add risk and time to her return. But she couldn't let this go. She turned to the left and called out, “Hello!" Nothing.
Bales followed the tracks, rounded a slight comer and saw a man sitting motionless. He wore tennis sneakers, shorts, a light jacket and fingerless gloves. His skin was pale and he had a glazed (呆滞的)look on his face. uOh5 hello/5 Bales approached and said, "What's your name?” The man didn't react. Obviously, nothing was connecting for him and he was in really big trouble.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
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Bales stopped being a curious and concerned hiker, and began a full-on rescue mission.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Over the next hour, the man began to move and speak.
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二:文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Bales计划6个小时内独自登雪山,在登山前Bales做了非常详细的准备,可是在登山途中发现了别人的脚印,疑似是有人走丢了,Bales没有独自离开,而是寻着脚印寻找到了一个男人,此时男人已经一动不动。
【详解】1.段落续写:
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①由第一段首句内容“Bales不再是一个好奇和担心的徒步旅行者,开始了全面的救援任务。”可知,第一段可描写Bales想帮助这个男人,开始采取救援措施。
②由第二段首句内容“在接下来的一个小时里,John开始走动并说话了。”可知,第二段可描写被救的男人John恢复意识后,感谢Bales的救援。
2.续写线索:发现男人——采取援救措施——男人获救——感谢Bales
3.词汇激活
行为类
①冒风险:brave/take risks
②尝试帮忙:try to help/attempt to help
③想起一个主意:an idea occurs to sb./come up with an idea
情绪类
①费力的:painstaking/arduous②感激地:gratefully/appreciatively
高分句型
1. In a weak voice, he thanked Bales and told her how he lost his way and was trapped here.(由省略连接词that的宾语从句)
2. Bales kept warming him up until he signaled he could walk.(由until引导时间状语从句)
三:续写单句训练
1.Bales不再是一个好奇而关心的徒步旅行者,于是开始了一项全面的救援任务。
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2.她立刻冒着越来越狂野的天气脱下衣服,遮住那个一动不动的男人。高考几月
3.然后Bales试图帮助这个人喝一些热水,但没有成功。
4.在那个非常无助、甚至是绝望的时刻,她想到了一个主意。
5.她迅速收集了一些冰雪,开始摩擦这个男人的身体,从手到胳膊,从脚趾到腿。
6.Bales清楚地知道这是耗时和艰苦的,但它肯定是有效的。
7.部门长在接下来的一个小时里,约翰开始行动和说话。
8.他首先通过手指显示出动作的迹象,然后睁开眼睛。
安全生产主体责任9.他用微弱的声音感谢了Bales,并告诉她他是如何迷路并被困在这里的。
10.Bales一直在热身他,直到他示意他可以走路了。
好看漫画头像11.有气势的口号在Bales的支持下,这名男子终于设法回到了车里,并被及时送往医院。
12.摆脱危险,他感激地说,要不是Bales的经验和熟练的救援,他永远不会看到世界的美丽。