考向36 读后续写之如何续写故事开头
一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣，并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中，如何写出靓丽的开头呢？我们可以从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的开端。
1.开端布局方法1：副词突显动作等
【典例赏析】
Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass.
Joyfully he skipped up the street.
【真题再现】
Para 1： (2016. 10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1危襟正坐：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. （时间副词衔接+黑色图片环境描写）
2.开端布局方法2：形容词短语表明心态
【典例赏析】
Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.
Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.
【真题再现】
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face. （并列情绪形容词）
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Wea
k as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing arching for assistance. （状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句）
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my hor. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my hor. (情绪形容词+中国的饮食文化从句)
(2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. 音乐之父是谁Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.
3.开端布局方法3：非谓语动词的烘托
【典例赏析】
Looking around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly clod the door.
Exhausted, he was glad the race was finally over.
【真题再现】
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. （现在分词+情绪形容词）
(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.（现在分词+状态形容词）
4.开端布局方法4：使用从句
【典例赏析】
As he walked, he whistled
Although he was afraid, he jumped right in.
5.开端布局方法5：使用介词短语
【典例赏析】
At the end of the lane he suddenly stopped.
At the sight of the snake, the little girl screamed at the top of her voice.
6.开端布局方法6：对话或独白
【典例赏析】
“Let’s e who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
“Hold on tight!” My father yelled. We just finished bucking in as the coaster jerked into motion. This was my first roller coaster ride.
【真题再现】
(2017.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac.
7.开端布局方法7：介绍人物身份
【典例赏析】
Mark is a studious boy who loves reading. His classmates often tea him for being too hardworking and they call him Mr. Smart.One afternoon, while studying at home…
8.开端布局方法8：情绪烘托
【典例赏析】
The moment she saw how she did for her Science test, tears started welling up in Tina’s eyes and falling down her cheeks.
9.开端布局方法9：背景烘托
【典例赏析】
I clod my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves. Gently opening my eyes, I saw my parents taking a relaxing stroll along the beach.
蟾宫折桂的典故The cave was dark and everything was silent. I couldn’t even e my hand in front of my face. I knew this adventure was going to be something that I would never forget.
【真题再现】山穷水尽造句
(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We drove through veral states and saw lots of great sights along the way. I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）
10.眼镜排行开端布局方法10：人物动作特写
【典例赏析】
Furry started wagging his tail and running around in circles when he saw his master taking a leash out from the drawer. Furry was all ready for his evening walk.
四大名著读书小报【真题再现】
(2017.11浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Dad exchanged a glance with me. Why not camp to satisfy Mom? （动作描写+问句衔接）
11.开端布局方法11：声音效果传情
【典例赏析】
BOOM, CRASH! The wind was howling outside of my hou. We were having a terrible thunder storm. I was very scared.
12.开端布局方法12：设问激发思考
【典例赏析】
Have you ever been on a lf-driving trip? Let me tell you an exciting trip my family took this summer.
Why does trouble always follow me around? Do I have a "kick me" sign on my back or so
mething?
fascination. （视觉+环境描写+拟人）
【检测训练】
1. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Boys like to be considered to be brave, but what kind of things can be considered to be brave? It is not a question that can be answered by words, but by the actual deed. A boy with the name Henry gave us a good example. Ronny and Henry were two friends in the same class. They always played together and went home together. One day as Ronny and Henry were going home after school, they saw some people fighting in the street corner. Ronny said excitedly, “Some people are fighting! Let’s go and have a look!” But Henry refud, “It’s none of our business. We’d better go home and don’t get clo to them. Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don’t want them to worry about me.”
