高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析--结交新朋友
板块一--例文
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Just after New Year's,before school vacation ended.I went out for a walk.It was a walk I’d been meaning to take ever since we moved to the hou.
I took my camera-the first time I'd taken my camera out since we came to the country-and went, dresd in my down jacket and wearing heavy boots.I walked toward the emingly abandoned hou that I could e across the fields from the upstairs window.
A truck was parked at the end of the road,beside a tiny.weather-beaten hou.There was smoke coming out of the chimney,and curtains in the two little windows on either side of the door.A dog was in the yard,who barked when he saw me coming.And beside the truck-no,actually in the truck,or at least with his head inside it,was a man.
“Hi,"I called.It would have been silly to turn around and start walking home without saying anything,even though I've promid my parents all my life that I would never talk to strange men.
He lifted out his head,a gray head,smiled-a nice smile-and said,"Miss Chalmers.I'm glad
you've come to visit."
“Meg,"I said.I was puzzled.How did he know who I was?
李四光预测＂For Margaret?"he asked,coming over and shaking my hand."Forgive me.My hands are very dirty.My battery dies in this cold weather."
＂How did you know my name was Chalmers?"收入管理制度
He wiped his hands on a towel that was hanging from the door handle of the truck."My dear,I apologize.I have not even introduced mylf.My name is Will Banks.And it's much too cold to stand out here.Your feet must be frozen,even in tho boots.Come inside,and I'll make us each a cup of tea. And I'll tell you how I know your name.”
I stood unmoved.He saw me hesitate,and smiled."Meg,"he said,“I'm venty years old. Completely harmless,even to a beautiful young girl like you.Come on in and keep me company for a bit,and get warm."
I laughed,becau he knew what I was thinking,and very few people ever know what I'm thinking. Then I went in his hou.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
He took my jacket and hung it up with his,and poured tea into two thick pottery mugs.
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It's nice to have a new friend,like Will..
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【答案】One possible version:
He took my jacket and hung it up with his.and poured tea into two thick pottery mugs.After we sat at the table,Will told me the whole story.The hou my family was living in was actually built by his grandfather.He was born,raid and married in that hou.Alter his Margaret died,he moved to this small hou.When he heard my parents were looking for a place,he offered the hou to them.He thought it was a perfect place for a writer like my father-the peace there stimulated imagination.He said again that he was glad I'd come to visit.
It's nice to have a new friend,like Will. I suggested taking pictures of him."My dear,"he said, straightening his shoulders and buttoning the top button of his shirt."I would be honored."The soft light was coming in through the kitchen window onto his face.He sat right there,smiling and talking.I just shot quickly.Years later,tho pictures still brought back the warm memories of that day.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者搬家后第一次出去散步，在一个小木屋遇见
了70多岁的Will Banks，Will Banks在打招呼时喊出了作者的名字，但是作者却不认识他，Will Banks邀请作者进屋喝杯茶，顺便讲述他为什么知道作者的名字。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他拿着我的夹克衫和他的挂在一起，向两个厚陶杯里倒茶……，所以应该写进屋后的情况，即Will Banks向作者讲述是如何得知作者的名
字的；第二段开头是：有一个像Will这样的朋友还不错……，本段应该作者听了Will讲述的故事后，把Will当成在这个陌生国家的朋友，提议给他拍些照片，多年后，这些照片仍能让作者想起那些温暖的回忆。续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：look for，suggest doing sth.，bring back等高级词汇；After we sat at the table, Will told me the whole story.中After引导的时间状语从句，He said again that he was glad I'd come to visit.中that引导的宾语从句等高级句式。
版块二---读后续写精彩词句集锦
惊讶忧郁近义词
1. I’m surprid to find you here. 在这里看到你我很奇怪。
2. It’s nothing to be surprid about. 这不值得大惊小怪。
3. To my surpri, he didn’t come yesterday. 令我吃惊的是他昨天没有来。龙潭风景区
4. She looked at me in amazement. 她惊奇的看着我。
5. Her appearance fairly took my breath away. 她的美貌令我神魂颠倒。
6. Everyone looked at her in astonishment. 大家都惊讶地看着她。
悲伤
1. He looks so sad. 他看起来很悲伤。
2. He is no stranger to sorrow. 他生活在悲伤中。
3. His sad story makes her feel pity. 他的悲惨经历使她深表同情。
4. His wife’s dia took away his appetite. 妻子的病令他茶饭不思。
5. The news depress her. 这个消息让她愁苦。
More examples:
氢硫酸化学式1. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.
2. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
3. Hearing the news, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.
4. She burst into tears and ran out of the room.
5. She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.
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6. I tried to fight back tears.
7. My eyes were filled with tears.
8. A frown（皱眉）now stood on his face.
9. The days he was in low spirits.
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
When I arrived at in the large hospital kitchen，Ro was already checking name tags on
the trays(托盘). “Hi，I'm Janet. ”I tried to sound cheerful，although I already knew Ro's reputation for being impossible to work with. "I'm scheduled to work with you this week."
Ro stopped what she was doing and peered over her reading glass. I could tell from her expression she wasn't plead to e a student worker. “What do you want me to do？Start the coffee？"I asked.
Ro coldly nodded and went back to checking name tags.
I filled the 40-cup pot with water and began making the coffee when Ro yelled，“That's not the way to make coffee. ”She stepped in and took over.
Nothing I did plead her. All morning，her eagle eyes misd nothing and her sharp words hurt.
Totally exhausted，I trudged the six blocks home late that June afternoon. As a third year university student working my way through school，I had never before met anyone like Ro.
Fighting back tears，I wrestled with my dilemma alone in my room. "What shall I do？”The answer caught me completely by surpri. I needed to love Ro.
Working with Ro the next morning，I ignored the hurtful remarks thrown in my direction and did things Ro's way as much as possible. As I worked，I silently began to surround Ro with a warm blanket of love.
Over the next few days，an amazing thing began to happen. My focus shifted from what she was doing to me and I started eing Ro as the hurting person she was. Then her icy tension began to melt away.
Throughout the rest of the summer，we had numerous opportunities to work together. Each time，she emed truly happy to e me. Her bitterness gave way as she started opening up. As I worked with this lonely woman，I listened to her，something no one el had done. I learned that she was burdened by elderly parents who needed her care and her own health problems.
The days slipped by quickly as I finished the last veral weeks of my summer job. I soon would be returning as a full-time university student and say goodbye to Ro.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右3
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
"One day，while I was working alone in one of the hospital kitchens，Ro entered the room. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________
伤感情歌网Paragraph 2：
Although I never saw Ro again，I still remember her vividly.
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【答案】One day，while I was working alone in one of the hospital kitchens，Ro entered the room. Instead of her blue uniform, she was wearing street clothes. I looked at her in surpri. “Aren’t you working today?” “I’ve got another job and won’t be working here any more,” she said as she walked over and gave me a quick hug. “I just come here to say goodbye. You are the one person I will truly miss. You are the one person I wish I could take with me.” Then she turned abruptly and walked out of the door.
Although I never saw Ro again，I still remember her vividly. That summer, I learned a lesson I’ve never forgotten. The world is full of people like Ro: annoying demanding, unlovable on the outside, yet hurting inside. Just as the saying goes every ro has its thorn, and every man’s character has a part of you that you can’t stand. I’ve found that a warm blanket of love is the best way to nurture a ro.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写。
【详解】续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟
