6书面表达
【母题来源】【2015·陕西卷高考书面表达】
【母题原题】
书面表达（满分30分）
假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和永不放弃的英文写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted手相图解
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide rvice for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, plea nd an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at ******************.
写作要点：
1.表示写信意图；
周记三年级2.陈述应征目的；
3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。
写作要求：
1.邮件词数不少于100；
庐阳区教育局2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；
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3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear MS Chen ,
浪费用英语怎么说I’m 自制秋千Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity becau, by offering my rvice, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I
have lent a helping hand to her in veral English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【命题意图】本题考查了学生的语言的运用能力和发挥想象的能力。从微观上考查了学生写句子的能力。
【考试方向】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。
【得分要点】
本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了so…that…句型，以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand to her in veral English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
1.【山东省实验中学第三次诊断考试】
假如你是李华，从报纸上看到中老年英语培训机构Mid．Senior ESCH面向高中毕业生招聘暑期兼职辅导员，负责学员课间服务事项。请根据下面的广告内容用英语写一份求职信。
ASSISI ANTS WANTED
Valuable chances ale open for high school graduates who are good at English．Their work is to tend the nior students during the break．
Requirements attached：
1．Good at English．
2．Experienced priority．
Contact us by e-mail：midesch@163．com．
注意：
糖饺子的做法
1．短文词数100字左右；
2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称；
Dear Sir／Madam，
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertid in the newspaper. I found this position quite appealing to me.
I’ve just graduated from high school. Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently. In addition, I have previous experience. During my stay in middle school, I ud to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.
In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work. I’m available for interview at any time. It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.
【解析】
【试题分析】这是一篇叙述性的求职信写作。依据题目及招聘广告所提供的信息，抓住广告上要求的两点来写求职信，清晰表达，并且要不失亮点，准确把握英文句子的书写，避免出现汉语式英语的现象。要求：1．短文词数100字左右；2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
【亮点说明】范文三部分，首先点明自己来应聘这一职位，其次介绍自己的情况，最后对以上内容简短总结并再次表明自己希望被聘用。虽结构简单，但是层次清晰，其中也用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.宾语从句；I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertid in the newspaper.等定语从句；It would be appreciated if句型。还采用了一些比较好的短语，In addition，另外；In short简而言之；
有条有理，避免文章比较单一，简单无味；同样有一些好的动词的固定搭配：am good at，looked after，’m available for如这些都给文章带来了亮点。
