2023课标版英语高考第一轮专题练习
第三部分 高考题型突破
专题五 短文改错
题组1 学校及家庭生活
Correction 1 [2022山西太原质监] 主题:学校宿舍生活 建议用时:8分钟
My life has changed since I become a nior three student. I mean that you live in the school dormitory rather than at home. Honest speaking, my life in the dormitory is colorful and interested. In our spare time, my roommates and I take in turns to do the cleaning regularly. We clean the floor or take out the garbage twice a day and clean the windows once a week. Sometimes all of us sweep ground around our dormitory together. I do think doing the cleaning are quite meaningful, becau what I get is not only tidy but also friendship and a deep n of responsibility. I enjoy do the labor in the school dormitory.
Correction 2 [2022安徽名校联盟质检] 主题:班服设计比赛 建议用时:8分钟
To make us live a color school life and铃声剪辑 develop our creativity, our school holds a class uniform design competition the other day. The competition caught a great number of students attention. A total of 40 works were received, all of what were submitted through the Internet. There were various style of class uniforms. Some came from the inspiration of nature, and some were reflected class mottoes. According to online voting, the work prenting by Class 6, Senior 1 gained the most popularity becau its unique design. The activity has become the real hit at school and inspired more students to show our talents.
Correction 3 [2021东北三校联考] 主题:竞选年级长的经历 建议用时:8分钟
Last year, I ran for our school's nior three grade president. On the day of the election, I had to give a speech in the front of the entire grade but I would talk about why I would make a good president. When it was my turns to speak, I stood on the stage with butterflies in my stomach and my hands got sweat. Nervous although I was, I explained the reasons why I dreamed being a grade president. I also talked about the ways I plan t
o accomplish my goals. Unfortunately, I brought their speech to a nice conclusion. The audience gave me马尔库塞 a round of applau and cho me to be grade president. It was one of the most encouraged experiences of my life.
Correction 4 [2021河南洛阳统考] 主题:教爷爷用手机 建议用时:8分钟
My grandpa likes Peking Opera. In the past, I often saw him watching lots of such program on TV. However, since last year, he had begun to watch Peking Opera shows on the mobile phone. When he got a smartphone nd by my father, I got the idea for teaching him how to u it. I instructed her to turn on the phone and watched the videos of Peking Opera. At the first, he could not follow me, but he listened with great careful. I taught him patiently and he learned u it at last. Now not only can he enjoy the videos, and he can sing Peking Opera well.
Correction 5 [2021陕西咸阳一模] 主题:优秀家风的传承 建议用时:8分钟
In China, good family spirits, passing down from one generation to another, have a strong
influence on their child. Up till now, my grandfather and father always stresd 全国中学生物理竞赛the importance of honesty, brave, perverance and diligence. More importantly, they often t good examples to me. And thus I always follow which they have taught me. For example, be friendly to others and offer a help when others are in need. Beside, I am positive all the time but never stop chasing my goal whenever I come across difficulties. Thanks for tho good family spirits, both my life and study runs smoothly.
Correction 6 [2021江西南昌期中] 主题:父亲的建议 建议用时:8分钟
The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad.He always gives me some advice,but I ldom took them riously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition,I did my best to be fully prepared.And the moment I stood on the stage,I was such nervous that my mind completely went blankly.The experience of lo a competition was really painful. Then my dad said, "My son,life is like battlefield.You have to lo many time to win the 投诉信英语作文final victory." Thanks to his advice, I never give up when I do anything.
题组2 个人经历及梦想
Correction 7 [2022四川成都联考] 主题:助人就是助己 建议用时:8分钟
James, an exchange student, is one of my best friend. At the beginning, he asked if I could assist him with what to 医师节u chopsticks. I said yes happily but this was a good chance to improving my spoken English as well when I taught him. So I manage to make mylf understood. When she was able to u chopsticks skillfully, I could speak English fluent, which was冰心小诗 beyond my expectations.
As the old saying goes, "Helping others are helping yourlf." This experience not only brings me clo friend but also makes me to realize the meaning of cooperation.
Correction 8 [2022江西五校联考] 主题:一次不愉快的经历 建议用时:8分钟
Today I want to share terrible trip of mine with you. I visited a marine park with my friends yesterday. I am sorry to say that I was disappointed with the rvice provide by the staff. When I came up to one of the waitress to ask the way, he was rather impatient, respon
d slowly and unwillingly. What's wor, the waitress even laughed to me when I was about to leave. Besides, the steak I was ordered in the restaurant was so tough and salty which I could hardly enjoy it. At that time, the rvice also makes other customers disappointed. I sincere hope that the person in charge will take measure to improve the rvice.
Correction 9 [2022广西名校联考] 主题:助人为乐 建议用时:8分钟
On the morning of last Saturday, I got up at six as usual. After a quickly breakfast, I went to the gym to work out. I spent two hours do exerci there. Then I took shower in a bathhou, where is very clo to my school. While I was walking on the crowded street, I notice an old lady who didn't look well. When she saw me, she signed to me and asked that I could take her home. At first, I was hesitated for a minute but then decided to give her a hand. About twenty minute later, we arrived at the apartment. She was grateful for me and invited me to her home. I polite refud and left.
Correction 10 [2021山西太原期末] 主题:梦想当医生 建议用时:8分钟
We are in the last year of high school. It's time for us to have clear future career plan. Since my childhood, I had been dreaming of becoming a doctor. When known Tu Youyou was awarded the Nobel Prize, I was great inspired by her to learn medicine. Especially this肌肉针 year, the spirit of doctors has hardened our determination to study medicine to save people's lives. It is their wisdom and efforts which have saved tens of thousand of people. Difficult though it is to make my dream to come true, something will stop me achieving it. I will concentrate on my study to get ready 英文信件to my future major in college.
