高中英语作文模拟训练题20题（含范文）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、概要写作
1．阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Punishing children is a controversial topic.Everybody has different opinions about how to act to correct a child's behavior.Parents，teachers，doctors，and specialists such as psychologists，have disagreements about whether it is good for a child's education to punish him or her.
寺可以加什么偏旁
The word “punish” means different things to different people.Punishment can be physical or emotional.Physical punishment is when the parent hits，slaps or spanks the child.
On the other hand，emotional punishment is when the parent，in order to educate the child，doesn't let him or her watch TV，go to play with his or her friends，or the like.The parent doesn't teach him or her，but still he or she punishes the child.
Although many surveys and studies have been made about what the correct way is to rai a child，nobody knows the answer or the truth.I think it will be very difficult to find the answer or get people to agree.
I think the parents should love their child and give him or her the best education，but at the same time，they should punish the child if he or she derves it.I think if you love your child，you should be rational when you apply the punishment.It should be reasonable but strict.
灿烂千阳电影The parents' goal is to have in the future a good man or woman in society，so sometimes you should do what is necessary to get your child to behave well.
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【答案】One possible version:
People's attitudes towards punishing children vary from person to person. Punishment can be divided into physical and emotional punishment. However, it is hard to find a corre
ct way to rai a child. To become a good person in the future, in my opinion, not only should children be given love and best education but also reasonable and strict punishment.
【解析】
欧蕙【分析】
本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，人们对待惩罚孩子的态度因人而异。惩罚可以分为身体惩罚和情感惩罚。然而，很难找到养育孩子的正确方法。在我看来，为了将来成为一个好人，不仅应该给孩子们爱和最好的教育，也应该合理和严格的惩罚。
【详解】
1 要点摘录
①Everybody has different opinions about how to act to correct a child's behavior. Parents,teachers,doctors,and specialists such as psychologists，have disagreements about whether it is good for a child's education to punish him or her.
落的多音字组词②Punishment can be physical or emotional. Physical punishment is when the parent hits, slaps or spanks the child.
③Although many surveys and studies have been made about what the correct way is to rai a child，nobody knows the answer or the truth. I think it will be very difficult to find the answer or get people to agree.
④I think the parents should love their child and give him or her the best education, but at the same time，they should punish the child if he or she derves it.
电子版个人简历⑤The parents' goal is to have in the future a good man or woman in society, so sometimes you should do what is necessary to get your child to behave well.
2.缜密构思
将第4、5两个要点进行重组，将第1、2、3三个要点进行整合。包汤圆的步骤
3.遣词造句
People's attitudes towards punishing children vary from person to person.
安全知识小常识
Punishment can be divided into physical and emotional punishment.
However, it is hard to find a correct way to rai a child.
To become a good person in the future, in my opinion, not only should children be given love and best education but also reasonable and strict punishment.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] However, it is hard to find a correct way to rai a child.运用it作形式主语，真正主语为不定式和不定式作定语的结构，表达高级。
[高分句型2]To become a good person in the future, in my opinion, not only should children be given love and best education but also reasonable and strict punishment.运用不定式作目的状语，和not only…but also…引导的部分倒装结构，表达非常高级。
二、开放性作文
2．假定你是李华，你校将在下周举行创建“绿色学校”的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇英语演讲稿，内容包括：
1.创建目的；
2.创建方式；
距离春节3.号召创建。
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen!
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