写作中常见的语法错误
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1． 句子不完整
1） 缺动词
误：The book on the desk.
正：The book is on the desk/The book on the desk is mine.
2） 缺主语
误：He is an independent devil. Thinks for himlf.
正：He is an independent devil and thinks for himlf./He is an independent devil.He thinks for himlf.工作报告
3） 缺主语和谓语
误：Just one of tho things.
正：甲骨文图片This is just one of tho things./Just one of tho things can prove what he said.
误：He sank slowly down. Exhausted.
正：He sank slowly down, exhausted.
4） 误将从句当完整的句子
误：Becau some students have part-time jobs in addition to going to schools.
正：Becau some students have part-time jobs in addition to going to school, they have very little time.
误：Many of my friends who didn’t have the opportunity to go to college.
正：Many of my friends who didn’t have the opportunity to go to college have gained the MA degree by teaching themlves.
5） 误将分词当谓语
误：We have found the book which published in New York.
正：We have found the book which was published in New York.
误：The output of the factory increasing steadily.
正：The output of the factory is increasing steadily.
2． 呼应方面
1） 主谓一致
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误：An infirmary is a room or other place where the sick is lodged for care and treatment.
正：………………………………………………………are……………………
误：My mother , as well as my sisters, want me to be …….
正：…………………………………….wants………..
2） 人称一致
误：Whether one enjoys or rents advertiments, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
正：Whether we enjoy or rent advertiments, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day./ Whether one enjoys or rents advertiments, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
误：Deciding that they could reach no decision that night, the jury retired to its rooms to have some sleep.
3） 时态一致
误：I was extremely sorry that you are injured.
正：I am extremely sorry that you are injured.
误：She asked me if I finish my task.
正：She asked me if I had finished my task.
4） 语态一致雁舍
误：都可加盟费Mary won the first prize, while her brother was awarded the cond.
正：Mary won the first prize, while her brother got the cond.
5） 语气一致
误：First stop the noi and then you may start the discussion.
正：First stop the noi and then start the discussion.
误：Study hard now so that we can cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-first century.
正：Study hard now so that you can cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-first century.
6） 数一致
误：If state parks become too commercialized, they will no longer be a place to escape the pressure of city life.
正：If state parks become too commercialized, they will no longer be places to escape the pressure of city life.
误：In high school we worked more as a group than as an individual.
正 ………………………………………………………………… s.
3. 中国式英语
1) My choice to be a doctor has three reasons.
There are three reasons for my choice to be a doctor.
2) My English level will be raid.
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Thus my English will be improved.
Improve the standard of living for the people.
3) Teenage smokers are becoming more and more.
More and more teenagers are taking up the habit of smoking.
4) With the development of cities, green land becomes more and more less.
With the development of cities, green land has increasingly decread.
5) Our country has taken place great changes.
Great changes have taken place in our country.
6) We should put our hearts into studies.
We should pay attention to our studies./ We should study hard.
7) His body is very healthy.
He is healthy./ He is in good health.
8) Recently, she does not study well. All day she talks love.
She has not been study well becau she spends most of her mind with her boyfriend.
9) She has a small heart.
She is narrow minded.
3． 悬垂修饰一年级日记
悬垂修饰是指修饰语与其逻辑主语之间产生意义上的矛盾，或者在句中找不到被修饰的对象，是修饰语处于悬浮的状态。非谓语动词或介词短语做状语时，其逻辑主语应该是句子的主语，如果句子的主语不能充当其逻辑主语，就得另加上逻辑主语，否则，该非谓语动词或介词短语便是悬垂修饰语。
1． 误：To hike well, endurance is needed.
正：To hike well, one needs endurance/ If one is to hike well, endurance is needed.
2． 误：Reading the novel, the bell rang.
正：Reading the novel, she heard the bell ring/ When she was reading the novel, the bell rang.
3. Flattened by the impact, Jane surveyed her wrecked bike.
Jane surveyed her wrecked bike flattened by the impact.
4. At the age of four, her mother taught her to play piano.
When she was the age of four, her mother taught her to play piano.
5. When full of gas, he found the car rode uncomfortably.
