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如愿的意思剑桥雅思12 G类 Test 7 Task 2
地崩山摧Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organid group activities in their free time. Other say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy 苦涩的意思themlves on their own.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
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Unquestionably, every coin has two sides and so it is humans too. Society is divided over the topic of how kids should spend their leisure time. Some argue that children, when time permits, should engage in team-building activities, whereas others are of the opinion that they should be left independently to decide how they want to spend their free periods of time. In my essay, both viewpoints will be discusd in detail along with my own opinion and a nsible conclusion.
Initiating with the points that support the first school of thought, 尚书右仆射firstly, kids who engage in group activities learn how to function as a part of a team. It will help them in their careers in the future. 表婶For example, playing team sports will teach them how to adjust, sacrifice and provide collective effort, which are important life skills that are uful in work life. Another benefit that parents argue is social inclusion. They say that they learn how society functions, behaviour in various social situations, etc. To cite an instance, toddlers and adolescents who do not engage with their peers, grow up to be socially awkward and are considered reclus. This point is supported by many psychologists too. As a result, mothers and fathers encourage their wards to play with others.
On the contrary, people who support other points of view say that children should learn, on their own, how to spend 星临time. They believe that such treatment inculcates independent thinking and non-reliance on others. This promotes problem-solving capabilities by learning from mistakes. To cite an example, it is a fact that children from North America region are more independent than their counterparts in South-East Asia. They are able to travel alone, feed themlves, and learn about new subjects, becau th
ey are not reliant on their parents.
To conclude, my opinion is that both thought process have their pros and cons. Therefore, it will be best to provide exposure to both for holistic development. However, it will depend on the mindt of the people and which point of view is favoured by them.
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