高考英语概要写作技巧讲解洛杉矶图片
一、考点分析
提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。
二、专题详解
1.专题分析酸式盐有哪些
①原文材料350词以内，概要写作不少于60词。
②原文基本以说明文、议论文为主。
③概要，基本上就是段落大意。每段一句话概括，或者两段一个大意，最多用两句话概括就行。
④要着重训练自己文章主旨大意和各段段落大意的归纳概括能力。
2.注意事项
①找关键词和主题句，准确理解、分析原文要点，归纳段落大意。
②各要点的表达要相对独立。
③各要点之间要有适当的衔接。
④句型力求简单，每句话要表意明白，无空泛、笼统、含混之词。
⑤尽量使用短句，慎用长难句。例如，尽量少用关系代词which，who等引导的定语从句，而采用ing形式和ed形式作定语。
⑥多使用概括性词语，少用具体描述性词语。
3.模板及句型
①表示文章的内容以及研究目的
1)This paper is aimed at/covers/mainly
2)The article focus on the
②表示研究的结论
1)The result
2)The author
3)It was
③表示推荐、观点或建议
1)The author suggests/
2)Suggestions are
癍痧凉茶4.评分原则
①本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
过桥米线的由来
②评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
③词数少于40和多于80的，从总分中减去2分。
④评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
(1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；
(2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；
(3)上下文的连贯性；
(4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。
⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
⑥如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
训练（一）
阅读下面的短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Recently, a professor of philosophy in the United States has written a book called Money and the Meaning of Life. He has discovered that how we deal with money in our day-to-day life has more meaning than we usually think. One of the things he asks his students to do is to keep a record of every penny they spend for a week. From the way they spend their money, they often e what they really value in life.
He says our relation with others often becomes clearly defined when money enters the picture. You might have wonderful friendship with somebody and you think that you are very good friends. But you will know him only when you ask him to lend you some money. If he does, it brings something to the relationship that ems stronger than ever before. Or it can suddenly weaken the relationship if he doesn’t. This person may say that he has a certain feeling, but if it is not carried out in the money world, there is something less real about it.
Since money is so important to us, we consider tho who posss a lot of it to be very important. The author interviewed some millionaires in rearching his book.
Answer: The most surprising thing is why people give me so much respect. I am nothing. I don’t know much. All I am is rich.
People just have an idea of making more and more money, but what is it for? How much do I need for ant given purpos in my life? In his book, the professor uncovered an important need in modern society: to bring back the idea that money is an instrument rather than the end. Money plays an important role in the material world, but expecting money to give happiness may be missing the meaning of life.
One possible version:
A US professor has found out the relationship between money and the meaning of life. Some people think friendship and good relationship depend on whether you have money and whether you are generous. Money is generally considered very important, but a millio
naire doesn’t feel he is very important, becau he thinks he is nothing except that he has money. The professor’s findings reveal that money is a tool rather than the goal, and money is not equal to happiness. (81 words鸡跟兔相配吗)
训练（二）
花心男阅读下面的短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Punishing children is a controversial topic. Everybody has different opinions about how to act to correct a child’s behavior. Parents, teachers, doctors, and specialists like psychologists, have disagreements about whether it is good for a child’s education to punish him.
The word“punish”means different things to different people. Punishment can be physical or emotional. Physical punishment is when the parent hits, slaps or spanks the child.
On the other hand, emotional punishment is when the parent, in order to educate the child, doesn’t let him watch TV, go to play with his friends, or do things like that. The pare
摩羯男巨蟹女nts doesn’t teach him, but still he punishes the child.
Although many surveys and studies have been made about what the correct way is to rai a child, nobody has the answer or the truth. I think it will be very difficult to find the answer or get people to agree.
I think parents should love their child and give him the best education, but at the same time, they should punish the child if he derves it. I think if you love your child, you should be rational when you apply the punishment. It should be reasonable but strict.
The parent’s goal is to have in the future a good man or woman in society, so sometimes you should do what is necessary to get your child to behave well.
One possible version:
People have mixed opinions towards punishing children. Punishment can be physical or emotional, but the key problem is the way they are punished. It is difficult to find the correct way to rai a child. Proper punishment can be instructive and necessary to childr
en if it is reasonable and strict. But love and education are the most important for us to make our kids behave well. (人为什么会便秘66 words)
