初三英语中考书面表达方法讲解含范文
初三英语中考书面表达专题讲解
书面表达
●命题导向:初中英语写作既考查学生掌握基本词汇、基础语法、句型的能力,同时也考查学生的观察能力、联想能力以及灵活运用所学知识进行表达的能力。写作各地的评分标准略有差异,但是都包括以下几个方面:整体印象、要点涵盖、语言表达、词数规定、卷面整洁、书写规范。
●解题技巧:
1.正确理解提供的情景和要求;
2.拟定提纲,提炼要点;
3.掌握格式,行文准确;
4.连词成句,连句成篇;
5.通读文章,纠正语病。
●评分标准:
各地的评分标准略有差异,但是都包括以下几个方面:整体印象、要点涵盖、语言表达、词数规定、卷面整洁、书写规范。
●实战演练
话题
1.保护环境
亮点句型速成
常用句型:Everyone should protect the environment. And the world will become much more beautiful.
推荐句型:If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.
常用句型:We should plant many trees, and we can live better and healthier.
推荐句型:→① We are suppod to plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.
→② If we plant more and more trees, we will live better and healthier in the future. 开头句:
1. We should not throw litter onto the ground.
2. We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees.
3. We are suppod to plant more flowers and trees.
如何制作长图4. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin.
中间句:
5. Trees are very helpful and important for us.
6. Many rivers and lakes are riously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.
7. It’s necessary to save water.
8. Recycling trash is also important.
结尾句:
9. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.
10. It’s our duty to protect our environment.
音乐旋律11. It is very important to take care of our environment.
典例剖析
古诗为焦仲卿妻作假设你叫王磊,目前,我市正在开展创建“文明卫生城市”,学校也提出了“垃圾不落地,校园更美丽”的口号,为了积极响应学校号召,上周你和几位同学到火车站进行志愿者活动,贡献自己的一份力量。请把你所做的事写一封电子邮件告诉你的好朋友Bob。
Place: train station;宜选
Time: from 8:00 to 12:00 on Saturday morning;
People: you and some classmates;咖喱猪肉
Activities: clean the benches, pick up the rubbish, sweep the ground;落花生课文
Feelings: a little tired but happy.
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:1. 文章为电子邮件,要求向朋友讲述在响应“文明卫生城市”“垃圾不落地,校园更美丽”的活动中,我和同学们一起到火车站进行志愿者活动(包括时间、地点、人物、活动、感受)。2. 本文描述自己的经历,写作时用第一人称,其他人用第三人称。3. 回忆事件通常用一般过去时,抒发个人情感及感悟用一般现在时。语句通顺,书写规范,卷面整洁,语法正确。4.词数应不少于60词,不得出现真实姓名、校名。
【高分范文】
Bob,
I’m writing to tell you about a voluntary activity last week. We got the train station at 8 o’clock on Saturday morning. My classmates and I decided to do something to make it cleaner and tidier. First, we cleaned the benches, and then we picked up the rubbish and advid others not to throw rubbish here and there. At noon, we swept the ground together and then we left.
We were a little tired after long hours of hard work, but we were still very happy. I hope everyone will make a contribution to improving the environment of our city.
Hope to write soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Lei
2.学校生活
常用句型:I have a happy school life.
推荐句型:→① With the special memories, I have a happy and colorful school life.
→② I have a happy school life which I will never forget.
常用句型:I like playing football.
推荐句型:→① I like playing football on the playground.
→② I like playing football on the playground with great interest.隐形人魔
常用句型:I feel very sad today, becau I didn’t pass the math exam again.
推荐句型: →① I feel terrible today for I failed again in the math exam.
→② How terrible I feel today! I failed again in the math exam.
开头句:
1. My favorite subject is physics.
中间句:
2. It’s difficult but interesting.
3. Last week’s talent show in our class was
a great success.
4. Studying grammar is a great way to learn a language.
5. It is easy for me
6. Teenagers should be
7. There are a lot of rules in my school.
8. You have given me so much help that I will
9. The school life is very busy and exciting. There are many activities in our school,
10. Our school where there are many trees and flowers around is clean and beautiful.
典例剖析
A Talk to Mylf
提示:在初中三年的学习和生活中,你有许多快乐,也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际,你想对自己说点什么呢?请根据所给题目用英语写一篇短文。
要求:1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
【审题指导】
1. 写作的对象是“我自己”,行文用第一人称。
2. 从①三年中的快乐;②三年中的遗憾;③对自己说的话及对未来生活的希望三个方面陈述。
3. 陈述“我”在学习生活中的快乐和遗憾时,用一般现在时态;如果表达对未来充满希望,则用一般将来时态。
4. 短文应包括提示的全部信息:初中三年学习和生活中的快乐和遗憾;在毕业之际,要给自己说的话。
5. 词数不少于60词,不得出现真实姓名、校名。
【高分范文】
A Talk to Mylf
How time flie s! I’m leaving school soon. I really have a lot to talk to mylf.
打牌检讨书
Luckily, my teachers are very friendly. They not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man. And my classmates are helpful. We share happiness and sadness in our school life.