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专题0南昌旅游攻略7直击2022高考英语 专项突破“读后续写”—人与动物故事(含高考英语冲刺复习计划及方法)
动物是人类的朋友……
01
阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Tho of us who stayed did so only becau there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice call
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ed out: “Hey! There’s a deer in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surpri then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other routes, we were able to guide her crazy arch back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It emed as if this one single act of kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
注意：减肥计划方案
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I went out of the hou and looked into the woods again.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________When I returned to the hou, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
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茅经典【答案】Para 1:
I went out of the hou and looked into the woods again. The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. Perhaps there were his parents and brothers and sisters, waiting for him anxiously. I was lost in my mind: wish all the life can live happily.
Para 2:
When I returned to the hou, the workers were laughing and talking happily. I knew that
they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. When they saw me walk in, they all suggested to me, “How about doing some volunteer work for the forest wildlife on this day of the month?” I immediately replied, “I agree!” Yeah! Enriching every day with good deeds and life will be more beautiful and harmonious. Every act of kindness we do is a step toward happiness and every act of kindness we do helps us become the person we are meant to be.
处理器哪个好【解析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在一家木材厂辛苦工作，这天来了一只迷路的小鹿，所有人都停下手中的工作去找她，而她则疯狂地四处寻找出路。最后大家很快就一起努力解救这只小鹿，小鹿回到了树林，作者发现每个人的脸上都洋溢着快乐的微笑，最后有人提议每个月的这一天为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我走出屋子，再次向树林里望去。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到小鹿在森林里玩耍时的感受和想法。
②由第二段首句内容“当我回到屋里时，工人们正在愉快地说笑。”可知，第二段可描写这一事件后工人提议为森林野生动物做一些志愿者工作，作者也感悟到用善行充实每一天，生活才会更加美好和谐。
2.续写线索：作者向树林里望去——发现小鹿快乐玩耍——作者陷入沉思——作者回到屋子——工人提议做志愿者工作——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
跳跃：skip/jump
返回：return/go back
回答：reply/respond
情绪类
焦急地：anxiously/worriedly
快乐的：happy/glad
【点睛】
[高分句型1] The little deer was like a child playing happily, skipping and skipping to the depths of the woods. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I knew that they were also happy and proud of the behavior just now. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
02
户外音箱
“Sun, sun, sun, here it comes…”
Danny sang while his fingers presd and pulled skillfully at the guitar strings, delivering
a slow and peaceful tune. A circle of audience had formed, nodding and moving slowly to the song.
Lying at the feet of the street performer was his most adoring fan: One-Eyed, a white stray (流浪) dog with pieces of brown. Danny felt the name was suitable considering its physical disability. Usually, One-Eyed would bark loudly as Danny performed. Much to his annoyance, people often mistook the pair as owner and pet. At this time, Danny would reply, “My dog? No!”, eyes rolling at the idea. How he wished the dog would leave him alone instead!
On a snowy night, while Danny was performing, a bird flew downward, landing into the midst of the crowd. It cooed happily as if to harmonize with Danny. Unfortunately, that did not sit well with One-Eyed, which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately. 樊登读书会
The unexpected chaos upturned Danny's hat, which could have been filled with notes and coins from his appreciative audience, leaving it ignored on the ground. "Argh! The ha
teful dog!” Danny broke down, thinking to himlf, “Either the dog goes or I go!”
