范文赏析(一)
1.My View on Fake Commodities (1998.1)
1. 假冒伪劣商品的危害。
2. 怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。
My View on Fake Commodities
Nowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of the market. Wherever you are, whatever you do, it ems that you can hardly have fallen prey to them. In other words, it is highly probable that you have bought some of tho fake goods or products of inferior quality。
Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society. On the one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the market. On the other hand, the prevalence of such products has hindered interpersonal relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality. As a conquence, they have wasted exhaustible resources, endangered people’s precious life and health, and in the long run eroded public trust。
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Then, what should be done to do away with fake commodities? To start with, the government needs to tighten its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies. Secondly, honest businessmen should modify some long-accepted practices at the protection of their intellectual property right. Most important of all, we consumers will have to do a better job of learning how to distinguish between the genuine and the phoney and definitely say no to the fake ones. In one word, the coordinated effort of the whole society will put an end to fake commodities.朋友说
2009年6月六级作文预测（恩波英语研究所）
（一）University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
肝胆双清颗粒现在很多大学生都追求穿名牌，用名牌; 2.你对这种现象的看法
审题概述●这是一篇论述对大学生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，详述大学生热衷追求、使用名牌的情形以及人们的看法。第二段，重点谈你对此的看法。University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
“What perfumes are you wearing?”“Aren’t your shoes Nike’s latest relea?”“I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.”“I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this
week. Do you wanna come along?” Don’t feel surprid if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. It’s quite common to hear and e college students swapping information about the brands they like and the products they u. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students’favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. “Keeping up with the Jones” is their conviction —“If the Jones have it, how could I have not?”About this current mindt of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. They’ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students’ vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.
However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. They are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable. “The love of beauty is common to all,”goes the proverb; therefore, there’s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewi, they must abide by the conquences if they make an ill-advid one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isn’t it?
（二）Knowledge and Diploma
目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香; 2.而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识; 你的观点
审题概述●这是一篇论述高文凭与知识关系的文章。第一段，概述社会上文凭越高越吃香的看法。第二段，主要论述有些人文凭不等于知识的观点。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。Knowledge and Diploma
It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality –the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.
On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma.
Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.
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So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, becau a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion.
（三）The Ri of Shanzhai Culture
最近兴起了一股“山寨热”; 2.你如何看待山寨现象
审题概述●本文是一篇论述山寨现象以及人们和你对此看法的文章。第一段，概述方兴未艾的山寨热。第二段，阐述山寨产品的优势以及给人们带来的好处。第三段，论述人们和你对山寨现象的反对立场和观点，即山寨产品的非法性。
The Ri of Shanzhai Culture
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The vast array of knockoff name-brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players, have made “shanzhai” the hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai video games, u shanzhai computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term ud before some electronic products to suggest a copycat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests to many Chine creativity and trendiness. With the media all over the ri of shanzhai culture, public opinions are clearly divided.
痛心的近义词Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY spirit, open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation with innovation —a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually more functional and much cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.
However, other people, including mylf, hold more rerved attitudes towards the shanzhai fever. For all the popularity it has won, a copycat is a copycat. The mockery of the prestige products not only steals their profits but also upts market competition. Moreover, shanzhai products thrive on the current legal loopholes. Under the disgui of anti-dominance slogans, they make illegal profits by violating
intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And to top it off, the so-called innovation is only nless talk as true innovation always faces huge costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other people’s risks.
◇第一段思路点评：综述山寨热现象。◇语言点提示：…public opinions are clearly divided此句起承上启下的作用
◇第二段思路点评：主要阐述山寨产品的优势。◇语言点提示：（1）mix imitation with innovation混淆模仿与创新（2）respond to the market对市场做出反应◇第三段思路点评：主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看法。◇语言点提示：（1）The mockery of the prestige products拙劣地模仿名牌（2）thrive on茁壮成长、蓬勃发展、繁荣（3）legal loopholes法律漏洞（空子）（4）Under the disgui of anti-dominance slogans在反垄断口号的伪装下（5）violating intellectual property rights违反知识产权（6）evading taxes逃税（7）plagiarism剽窃、抄袭
It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
盗版软件比比皆是; 2.盗版软件猖獗的原因; 3.如何打击盗版软件
审题概述●这是一篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章。第一段，概述中国盗版软件泛滥的情况。第二段，重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因。第三段，侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施。
It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC curity with pirated Kaspersky anti-virus program
mes, process files with pirated Microsoft Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and translators. It’s no exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere.
The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy? Cheaper prices aside, easy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money arching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version?
Despite the apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should be banned, becau it reprents unfair competition and by nature it’s a no-win situation. But
how? Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly.
◇第一段思路点评：概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状。◇语言点提示：the rampant practice of software pi
racy猖獗的盗版软件
◇第二段思路点评：论述盗版软件猖獗的原因。◇语言点提示：（1）downloads online 在线下载（2）authentic copy正版厌世的句子
◇第三段思路点评：提出应当禁止盗版的观点，解释原因，并引出阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法，包括软件商和政府采取的应对措施。
◇语言点提示：tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties加强反盗版立法和盗版惩罚
金融危机 1.金融危机给各行各业都造成了一定影响; 2.金融危机对大学生造成何种影响;3.作为大学生，应怎样应对这种影响.
婉转的意思
审题概述●这是一篇主要论述金融危机与大学生关系的文章。第一段，概述金融危机给世界造成的影响。第二段，论述金融危机给大学生带来的就业、经济等影响。第三段，阐述大学生面对金融危机带来的影响应提高专业技能等。
Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students
Since the financial crisis swept the world, the global economy has sunk into a vere recession. It’s
hard to get through a day without hearing or reading news about the devastating effects of the crisis: A world of companies go bankrupt, millions of employees are laid off, high-return investment bubbles burst, and huge sums of loans can never be retrieved. Its impact on our daily life can be felt in all walks of life.
College students inevitably fall victim to this pervasive slump as well. On top of that, internships and job vacancies are reduced to the minimum as companies keep shrinking. New graduates find themlves hard to get a job, not to speak of a satisfactory one. What comes next? Poor students will be hard-presd if they find student loans unavailable any more. As a result, some even cannot afford to continue their studies. Lastly, more students are probably out there anxiously looking for part-time jobs now that they have to help cover their expens in this gloomy economy. Their innocence and eagerness might be taken advantage of by some malicious business people, or even criminal gang.
