古城会高考英语作文写作基础——如何写出好句子
一. 教学内容：
如何写出好句子
如何写出好句子：好句子的标准应是：用词准确、逻辑清晰、简洁明了、可读性强。
1. 学会运用复合句
复合句包括：名词性从句、状语从句、定语从句
用复合句增强句子之间的逻辑关系，使你的句子变得紧凑
［练习］
根据句子之间的关系，用正确的连词使其成为复合句。
（1）Children grow older. They prefer to be more independent rather than be at the mercy of their parents.
柴油的燃点When children grow older, they prefer to be more independent rather than be at the mercy of their parents.
（2）I was very excited . I couldn’t express mylf in words.
I was so excited that I couldn’t express mylf in words.
（3）We will have a further discussion. We draw a final conclusion.
We will have a further discussion before we draw a final conclusion.
（4）The economy in this area is developing rapidly. The qualities of some citizens are still not satisfactory.
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Although the economy in this area is developing rapidly, the qualities of some citizens are still not satisfactory.
（5）You are allowed to drive my car . You should drive carefully and slowly.
You are allowed to drive my car on condition that/ as long as you should drive carefully and slowly.
（6）The teacher had read my composition. He gave me his opinion.
After the teacher had read my composition, he gave me his opinion.
步步春（7）You have got the cret. Plea don’t spread it in public.
If you have got the cret, plea don’t spread it in public.
（8）They arrived at the farm. They were welcomed by the farmers.
The moment/As soon as they arrived at the farm, they were welcomed by the farmers.
（9）The International Red Cross is an organization. Its purpo is to help the sick and the needy.
The International Red Cross is an organization who purpo is to help the sick and the needy.
（10）I decided to find a job. I could earn the money.
I decided to find a job so that I could earn the money.
2. 学会运用非谓语动词
用非谓语动词使你的句子简洁。
［练习］
运用非谓语动词完成下列句子：
（1）Most of the artists who had been invited to the party were from South Africa.
Most of the artists invited to the party were from South Africa.
（2）The prices of the computers which are being shown here are still unknown.
The prices of the computers being shown here are still unknown.
12月18日是什么星座（3）After he had been derted by his guide, he couldn’t find his way through the jungle.
Having been derted by his guide, he couldn’t find his way through the jungle.
（4）Nowadays the old people often do morning exercis in the park in order that they could keep healthy.
Nowadays the old people often do morning exercis in the park to keep healthy.
（5）The church was built in 1829. It is the oldest European structure .
The church built in 1829 is the oldest European structure .
编制管理（6）Jane was disturbed by the noi. She turned off the radio.
Disturbed by the noi, Jane turned off the radio.
（7）Gary was tired. He decided to go to bed.
Being tired, Gary decided to go to bed.
（8）As I felt hungry, I decided to walk to the shop and buy some food.
Feeling hungry, I decided to walk to the shop and buy some food.
（9）I nt him an e-mail and hoped to get further information about SARS.
I nt him an e-mail, hoping to get further information about SARS.
（10）As soon as I entered the classroom, I found all my classmates were busy studying
Entering the classroom, I found all my classmates were busy studying
3. 学会句式的变化
用不同的表达方法来丰富你的句式
［练习］
改写句子，填入适当的词使句意与原句意义相同。
1. It was not long before he had to leave for another place.
Before long , he was forced to move on.
2. The room is so small that we can’t put the piano in it.
The room is too small for us to put the piano in.
3. By chance I met an old friend of mine that day.
I happened to meet an old friend of mine that day.
It happened that I met an old friend of mine that day.
4. That was becau we were not careful enough.
That was becau of our carelessness.
5. The people were in deep sorrow when they heard this sad news.
The people were in deep sorrow at this sad news .
6. If you won’t do it, I’ll get Tom to do it.
If you won’t do it, I’ll make/ have Tom do it.
7. We think that it is our duty to take care of the young trees.
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We think it our duty to take care of the young trees.
8. When I was a child, I often played here.
As a boy, I ud to play here.
9. I have never en such a beautiful suit before.
