专题六 读后续写 概要写作
[三年考情分析]卷别年份高中知识点
命题形式信息提示形式体裁写作内容2019
概要写作英语材料概要如何表扬与批评孩子2018
店铺门面
读后续写英语材料记叙文骑马历险记浙江卷
2017
读后续写英语材料记叙文途中遇险[命题规律]
1．根据最近五年高考，以考查读后续写为主，考查概要写作为辅。如
2016
、2017、2018连续三年均考查读后续写。
2．读后续写基本上是记叙文。记叙文大多离不开六要素：
who ，when ，where ，what ，how ，why 。在阅读时，找出六要素，文章的结构自
然水落石出。
[命题趋势]
1．预计2020年仍将以考查读后续写为主，重在考查考生的阅读能力，想象
能力和写作能力。
2．所选文章仍以记叙文为主，此类文章材料难度适中，易于理解；话题贴
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近考生的日常生活，能够体现社会正能量。A 篇 (2019·浙江卷)
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
花胶鸡汤的做法Parents everywhere prai their kids.Jenn Berman ，author of The A to Z Guide to
Raising Happy and Confident Kids ，says ，“We've gone to the opposite extreme of a few decades ago when parents tended to be more strict.”By giving kids a lot of prai ，parents think they're building their children's confidence ，when ，in fact ，it may be just the opposite.Too much prai can backfire and ，when given in a way that's insincere ，make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to
stay on top where their parents' prai has put them.
Still，don't go too far in the other direction.Not giving enough prai can be just as damaging as giving too much.Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and，as a result，may e no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.
So what is the right amount of prai？Experts say that the quality of prai is more important than the quantity.If prai is sincere and focud on the effort not the outcome，you can give it as often a
s your child does something that derves a verbal reward.“We should especially recognize our children's efforts to push themlves and work hard to achieve a goal，”says Donahue，author of Parenting Without Fear：Letting Go of Worry and Focusing on What Really Matters.“One thing to remember is that it's the process not the end product that matters.”
Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team.But if he's out there every day and playing hard，you should prai his effort regardless of whether his team wins or los.Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard，cook dinner，or finish a book report.But whatever it is，prai should be given on a cabyca basis and be proportionate (相称的) to the amount of effort your child has put into it.
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Nowadays，parents tend to offer considerate prai to their children，hoping to boost their confidence，but it may produce the opposite effect.However，no prai from parents also does harm to their lfconfidence.Therefore，experts claim that sincere prai should be given for the process not for the result.Meanwhile，kids do derve prai if they strive to do their duty.Anyway，the amount of prai you give depends on how hard they work.
B篇(2018·浙江卷)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He
decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico.We
reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul，my dad's friend，picked us up
from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and
Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm hou listening to the
frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning，Uncle Paul
woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm，”he said.After
breakfast，I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle
Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草)．I was impresd to e my dad and Uncle
Paul riding hors.They looked really cool.
In the afternoon，I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hor ride，and he said
yes，as long as my dad went with me.I wasn't going to take a hor ride by mylf
anyway.So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our hors，and
headed slowly towards the mountains.“Don't be late for supper，”Uncle Paul
cried，“and keep to the track so that you don't get lost！”“OK！”My dad cried
back.After a while Uncle Paul and his farm hou were out of sight．It was so peaceful
and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late
afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)
blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：带行的成语
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my hor.
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We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my hor.“What a lovely rabbit！”I shouted with terrific excitement.It was quite different from tho I saw in
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our city，thus immediately stimulating my interest.Dad was also stunned by this special rabbit，gawking at it motionlessly.“Dad，let's catch it as our pet！”I suggested，unexpectedly receiving his prompt agreement.Entirely forgetting what Uncle Paul had told us，we chad after that pretty rabbit，frantic with rapture.Unfortunately，so clever and swift was it that it disappeared in the forest before long.Not until then did we realize that the last ray of twilight was quickly disappearing among the numerous trees and we couldn't find our track at all！We did get lost．Paragraph 2：
We had no idea w here w e w ere and it w as getting dark.The bonechilling wind howled fiercely like a wolf，making the darkness even more suffocating.“Dad，what
can we do？”I threw my arms around him tightly，quivering and ized by stark horror.“All is going w
ell！”Dad answered in a gentle voice，calm and mollified.We wandered in the scary forest and didn't know what horrible things would happen to
us，hoping to find the way back.Suddenly，we heard the sound of water rolling down
the river．We were over the moon and decided to follow the river.After a while，we heard the familiar sound of sheep and then caught sight of the farm hou．The family
were waiting for us in the distance.Seeing this，a radiant smile lit up both of our faces.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my hor.My hor was so frightened that it began running ferociously.I could feel the air hitting my face heavily and hear my dad's hysterical cry from a distance.My heart was pumping wildly and my blood was pulsing through my veins.I pulled back the reins，distracted the hor and tried every means to stop the hor but in vain.After what emed a
n eternity，my dad caught up with me breathlessly and managed to stop my hor.But we found that we were in distress，with no track beside us.
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We had no idea w here w e w ere and it w as getting dark.The river beside us was still and rene under the last ray of sunshine but we didn't have the mood to enjoy it.Suddenly，it occurred to us that there was also a river nearby the farm hou.Realizing the river may be a guide back，our spirits soared and we began to trot briskly along the river.Just a few minutes later, catching sight of the silhouette of the hou，I felt a feeling of relief and relaxation surged through me.I could picture Uncle Paul's smiling face and our delicious supper and I thought to mylf that our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.
C篇(2017·浙江卷)
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright，warm July afternoon，Mac Hollan，a primary school teacher，was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends．One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair，but they 饼干用英语怎么说
had encouraged Mac to carry on，and they would catch up with him soon.As Mac pedaled(骑行) along alone，he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home．He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man，that's a big dog！”he thought.But when he looked to the side，he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all，but a wolf：quickly catching up with him.
娉娉袅袅十三余Mac's heart jumped．He found out his can of bear spray.With one hand on the
